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Current When it is time to write, I want to worldbuild. When it is time to worldbuild, I want to collab. When it is time to collab, I want to write. This is the cycle. These are the rules.
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Do not kill the part of you that is cringe. Kill the part that cringes.
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Sad to say I'm currently experiencing Writer's Block. Luckily I learned Writer's Kung Fu and I can chop the block in half with my hands like Bruce Lee
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Why is the sun like bread? It rises in the yeast, and sets in the waist. Haha! Isn't that so cute? Join my RP or more puns will come.
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What's the difference between a Hollywood actor and a piece of driftwood? One is Justin Timberlake. The other is timber, just in a lake. Hahathisiswhati'mdoinginsteadofwriting
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Current RP I want you to join: roleplayerguild.com/topics/191461-car…

Hey y'all. I've been at this for about 12 years, and I've played a lot of kinds of RP. I like fantasy and sci-fi the most, just because they give me the most to worldbuild with, but I'm cool with almost anything. I just like writing.

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No post for Windleaf this time. Nothing much for her to do. The next post will no doubt have plenty of horsing around to make up for it.




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yea dude what an asshole...........




Shertul was loosely aware of being dragged across a hard surface, or at least he thought he was. He could only barely feel someone's grip around his arms. His heart threatened to beat right out of his chest. He tried to open his eyes, but all the world was painted like blurred watercolor. He tried to hear, but the voices of a crowd came through as slow, dripping echoes. Everything was distorted. He wanted to escape. He couldn't remember where he was. Is this real?

Time passed. He didn't tell how long or how short, nor could he hear and see in more than fragments.

"Don't worry..."

Was someone comforting him?

"... If it dies, it dies.... I have not much care for... monstrosities..."

Apparently not.

He was a bit more aware now. He felt himself freed when he was carried away from the power of those stone spires. One sharp, deep, painful breath brought life back to him. The watercolors drained away from his sight, and he could feel the grainy road beneath his back again.

A woman spoke through a young voice. "A-Are you okay? You're not gonna die on me, are you?"

He opened his mouth to speak, but ended up spewing out slimy blood instead. Half landed at the girl's feet, half stayed to glue his throat shut. He was forced to rip off the short scarf and let his backup organs take over. Normally he would hide the blood-red, fish-like slits running along his neck, but if this woman was willing to save him, certainly she could handle his appearance for a few moments.

He drew the deepest breath his gills could draw, for the energy to slam a fist into his sternum with monumental force. The wall of blood caught in his throat reluctantly broke and oozed out. If he were younger, or more human, the blow would have felt hard enough to bring tears to his eyes. But after over seventy years of slow and agonizing bone growth, there was little left that could cause Shertul real pain.

Except, obviously, whatever those runes did to him.

He felt like such a fool. How many classes this the Monastery instruct on rune magic? How many books had he read on the Nephilim? He should have recognized the runic symbol for "magic" paired so close to the one meaning "cease".

Fleshspinners imbue magic into their very being: they fuse it with their flesh and bone and muscle. When he stepped into a magic-killing barrier, it tried to kill him. He's practically made of magic, as it were. It is in his body.

He was still shaken, but he would never show it.

Shertul briefly wondered if Raziel knew what his monoliths had done to him. He briefly wondered if Raziel cared.

More importantly, he realized that the whole world was suddenly brighter- he was taking in all the light. The rune's torture must have turned his eyes into black. How frightening that surely looked! He turned his gaze to his savior for the first time, a young girl with tight clothes and the body of a farmer, and let them fade into a gentler pink. Who would have thought that a Wastelander would have such a love of pink? With some effort, he managed to recede his claws just a bit.

Speaking was still more difficult than he thought it would be. He croaked out a rough "Thayngou, uh". He cleared his throat. Tried again. "Thankyou."

Unless this girl had a secret past at the Monastery, and her body was far too "normal" for that, she would probably ask for a bit of explanation.

Speaking of her body: it was wrong. Shertul was still disoriented, and he couldn't put his finger on it, but it was if there was some presence about her. Something that shouldn't be there. Something wrong.

He leaped up to his feet in a motion far too fluid to be humani.

"Thankyou," he repeated for the second-and-a-half time "You saved more from more pain than... than you can possibly realize. I... I suppose you have questions? Or at least," he coughed out the last bit of flim-mingled blood, "I hope you do. There's something very strange going on if a teenage farmgirl knows what I am."

Her clothes were a little revealing, he noticed. Bar clothes. Sights like this one always made him wonder. Afterall, he was prepubescent when he became a Fleshspinner, and the bodily distortions stopped him from ever hitting puberty. He has never felt physical attraction.

Either way, he looked her up and down: he wanted to know who it was that rescued him from death. Whore or not.

Then he noticed something strange.

Down on her thigh, just barely exposed, was the mark of the Revenant.

"Or maybe... you've already heard of the Fleshspinners."
@Jeyma

Are you writing up a post now because if so I'll wait.


I am. Don't feel obligated to wait (I spend hours on all my writing), though, unless you want to.

EDIT: I am more than halway done, though. Only like an hour or less left, probs.
THANKS, KAEZIRA
Oh lord, so much conversation 😨 *tries to catch up*

Edit: caught up easier than I thought I might. But I'm sorry my two are just kind of there


Well, they could always respond to the centaur judging them with her eyes, Shertul's scene in the middle of the town (though he's been pulled out now), the pretty teenager being carried up the stairs for totally-not-rape, or the thief who just blatantly robbed a dude and ran off with zero stealth.

A typical day in the town of Wellborough, I guess

EDIT:

and whatever frogs has going for them)?


Umm... great jumping skills? Swimming abilities? The power to turn into a handsome prince when kissed? Take your pick.


Edit: Half tempted to have Crow check out the hubub, but I'll leave you to get saved haha. There's whiskey to be had afterall.


But I do have to wonder how a Nephilim would view a Fleshspinner. They so often ally themselves to Alithe, afterall. But THIS one hasn't yet!

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Oh god.


youtube.com/watch?v=AqSVxpAzl1I
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It worked.

And thanks for posting before me, I had nothing else to do really lolol


Well, Shertul is a drama queen. I couldn't imagine him doing anything other than acting like a 1960's horror villain.

And thanks for holding off your post for a while .

But now it's 4:30 AM and I have no chances of sleeping till dawn. You're all stuck with a sleep-deprived writing-hobbyist now, and that's the worst kind.
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THE POOR THING I'LL SAVE HIM.

... Somehow.

Wait, the door's open, I can see and RUNRUNRUNMOTHERFUCKER.


He'll be grateful! Either that, or he'll "consume your soul"

He looked like a gothic clown dressed for winter. "Fear me, mortals!" wasn't half so frightening anymore.

But sometimes, even that masterfully conceived disguise would not hide such a handsomely devilish frame. A few miles into the forestal territory of Wellborough, two oafish patrol guards "accidentally" bumped into him, revealing his twisted form.

He knew exactly what to do: he threw open his cloak, spread his many arms about, and hissed "I shall consume your souls!" He put on a good old show.
Me failing to be funny


Windleaf trotted along to Wellborough with more than a little distaste in her mouth. She despised cities. In fact, when she set out from her safe fortress into the harsh world, two years prior, she swore to herself to hide away in them as little as possible. Those insults against nature get far too much credit.

But, while she herself could last in the wilds indefinitely, her equipment was another story. A very sad story. Her sword was cloaked in rust. Her backpack was slogging itself into a glorified loincloth tied to her ass. She didn't even want to think about the state of her clothes.

So, she'd have to swallow her centaurian pride and buy from a damn city.

She clutched the necklace against herself and prayed a silent prayer, to Espeeria, that Wellborough will be different. It had, afterall, earned itself a staying reputation as the grand palace of diversity. To say nothing of how fun it might be to visit a humanoid settlement and tower over all the short little two-legs.

Human-founded or not, the town seemed peaceful. Tranquil.

Well, it did until she heard two elves up ahead, bickering with eachother about maps. A nice reminder of why she traveled alone, if nothing else.

Before she could judge the elves any more than she already had, her ears were assaulted with some unholy cry from just beyond the gates.

Welcome to Wellborough!, she thought.






Shertul the Unnatural, abomination on the run. That's exactly how he felt sprinting towards Wellborough that evening. He, the Fleshspinner that he was, had to hide himself constantly. Most of the lowly peasants about these parts did not even know the glory of the Monastery. They could not handle the sight of him! So he was forced to suffer the humiliation of wearing a humongous black cloak, and leather gloves that his claws wouldn't burst at the seams. A scarf to hide his gills, over-sized shoes to hide his large feet. He looked like a gothic clown dressed for winter. "Fear me, mortals!" wasn't half so frightening anymore.

But sometimes, even that masterfully conceived disguise would not hide such a handsomely devilish frame. A few miles into the forestal territory of Wellborough, two oafish patrol guards "accidentally" bumped into him, revealing his twisted form.

He knew exactly what to do: he threw open his cloak, spread his many arms about, and hissed "I shall consume your souls!" He put on a good old show.

And then he ran. Oh, he ran like lightening. He ran and he ran and he didn't stop running.

He has no doubt that he could have easily disposed of them, but that means someone finds the shredded bodies, and someone sees him bathed in their blood. Even a farmhand would make the connection. Shertul wasn't ready to deal with a pitchforks-and-torches riot. "Git outter oar town, monster!"

He only slowed his pace ten miles down the road, when sweat oozed down his forehead. No need to exhaust myself over a couple of cowardly guards, he tried to assure himself. The first buildings of Wellborough were rising over the horizon. Funnily enough, they reminded him a bit of the spires of the Monastery. Intimidating, stone mingled with wood, rising and rising...

Shertul was pulled from his daydream over an hour later, by a painful itch growing under his skin. He tried, yet he couldn't scratch it away. It started as a queasiness just after he walked beyond the gates to Wellborough, but now it was becoming... more. If he was superstitious, he would have sworn that his body was trying to tell him something.

He ignored it. Surely a Wastelander can shake off a little discomfort.

But then he made the grave mistake of gazing up at stone pillars scattered around the city's edges. Anti-magic runes adorned them, and as soon as his eyes made contact, the itching turned to an aching, the aching to a burning, the burning to agony.

Then heat drove down to the core of his bones.

What kind of place is this? His whole body felt ablaze. His eyes were consumed in blinding light. The thick rush of blood deafened him. He couldn't see, he couldn't move, he couldn't think.

What little senses he had left told him that he was falling down to the road of hard, merciless stone. He reached out to catch himself, but there was nothing there.

His scream was demonic. Ear-piercing.

People were crowding, now. A passing man tried to lift him to his feet, but Shertul's cloak slipped open, exposing a third arm, then a fourth. The ex-friendly stranger gasped in shock and dropped him quicker than if he really were on fire.

Shertul could only barely point one crooked finger to the exitway.

The Fleshspinner was alone in a crowd, dying.

I know it was hardly subtle, but in case anyone missed it:

Shertul is freaking the hell out because the anti-magic runes in Wellborough are fucking up the magic in his flesh. He's practically made of magic, so... time for plot.

If anybody wants to save him, now's your chance. If not, I guess I'll have him crawl his way out of the town ALONE AND HELPLESS.
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