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1 yr ago
Current When it is time to write, I want to worldbuild. When it is time to worldbuild, I want to collab. When it is time to collab, I want to write. This is the cycle. These are the rules.
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1 yr ago
Do not kill the part of you that is cringe. Kill the part that cringes.
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2 yrs ago
Sad to say I'm currently experiencing Writer's Block. Luckily I learned Writer's Kung Fu and I can chop the block in half with my hands like Bruce Lee
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3 yrs ago
Why is the sun like bread? It rises in the yeast, and sets in the waist. Haha! Isn't that so cute? Join my RP or more puns will come.
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3 yrs ago
What's the difference between a Hollywood actor and a piece of driftwood? One is Justin Timberlake. The other is timber, just in a lake. Hahathisiswhati'mdoinginsteadofwriting
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Current RP I want you to join: roleplayerguild.com/topics/191461-car…

Hey y'all. I've been at this for about 12 years, and I've played a lot of kinds of RP. I like fantasy and sci-fi the most, just because they give me the most to worldbuild with, but I'm cool with almost anything. I just like writing.

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Shertul had barely gotten on his feet, and already another threatening white knight had appeared- in a flash of light and lightening, no less! How very Nephilim of him.

"By Alithe's wastes what do you think you were doing Fleshspinner? You should be dead!"

Shertul's counter was faster than the crack of a whip. "And you should show basic ethical sympathy, so I guess we're both disappointing."

But before the angel could grow any closer, he thought back again to the Crest on the farmgirl's thigh. Few Revenants would have stopped to save a suffering stranger, Fleshspinners included, unless... could it be because he was a Fleshspinner? Perhaps she hoped to earn instruction. There was always a vampire banging on the Monastery doors, asking to be granted the powers of Flesh, then leaving in disappointment when they discovered the decades of devotion that would be needed to prove them worthy. Shertul always wondered what they expected: was the Monastery just going to wave a magic wand, sprinkle some fairy dust and force new limbs to simply sprout from them?

Of course, this pretty little thing looked too young to be a Revenant. And too weak. He would question his teenage savior in time, if his life had any time left. For now, he but whispered. "I will always have gratitude for what you've done."

He nodded in the angel's direction. "I will distract him. But perhaps you run, marked of Alithe. No doubt, they'll slaughter you if that mark is seen. I'll find you another time, if I'm left alive." He spoke with an unintentional, semi-holy reverence.

Shertul took a wide, combative step to hide her from this newly appeared enemy's unwavering gaze. He was careful to disguise it as a natural movement- the sort made by any man bucking for a fight. A shade of endless black spilled slowly into his eyes. He relaxed his claws back to their full length... maybe just a bit further.

Yet before the bloodshed could properly begin, he had to at least try to talk his way out if it. There would be a bounty on his head if he ripped up two Nephilim.

He ignored the mage. He had heard of the abhorrent Kaezira, and knew that he was not worth words. But the new angel. He might have the decency to feel remorse.

First, Shertul spoke only to the crowd. "Do what Kaezira says. Go back to your homes. I am a monster, yes it's true, so flee before your valiant knights accidentally kill half of you on the way to me!"

The crowd moved back only a few yards. I suppose we'll have an audience today.

Then he turned a pinning gaze to the second Nephilim, the teleporting one. The Fleshspinner's words were an assassin's daggers: quick, sharp and coated in poisonous accusation. "A Nephilim, of course! Who else could find such evil in themselves to speak insults to a near-dead man? I foolishly believed those in my Monastery were exaggerating, when they warned me of how cruel Raziel's followers were. My misguided friend even risked arguing to them on your behalf." His tongue became wet with hate. "I'm sorry to see... they were truthful all along."

He took a gasping breath, and continued before the fool could interrupt him.

"What, are you feeling sorry for yourself? That you had to come check a gate and threaten murder against me, a neutral man who has never harmed a soul that did not first harm him?" He gestured to the hand that glowed ever so faintly of Blinding Light. "I just had every part of my body thrown into a level of agony that I don't think you could even begin to understand. But yes, poor you, having to accost a dying traveler." Shertul twirled both his right arms into a mocking bow. "You are clearly the victim here. I'm sorry my torture ruined your day."






In her decades of life, Windleaf had never once felt more confused. This... this thing was dying only moments before. But now it was up on it's feet in an instant, speaking calmly to the kind girl who had struggled desperately to rescue it. Everything about it- it's all-too-fluent motions, it's appearance, the ease in which it changed itself- screamed to the her soul that it was not of nature. Some twisted work of magic, no doubt.

She felt a pang of guilt, knowing centaurs may be just the same.

Even so. Sutagara believed herself to be a servant of nature, first and foremost before all other obligations. She heard the mage shouting, and if he spoke the truth, it was Windleaf's honor-bound duty to slay the abomination. The Nephilim still held some respect in her eyes. Granted, their laws often spawned civilization spreading like disease into the beauty of forests, yet Raziel was the very one who held Waste at bay.

"Begone, people! Do you have any business monster-slaying?"

The pride of a warrior painted her tone. "I do." She drew her heavy blade in a light motion.

In the end, if the worst comes, the centaur will stand with the angels.
@Jeyma

After the death sentence from the archmage I'd prefer an escape act, talk down or minor skirmish to a full blown fight. Whatcha think?


It sorta depends on how SOMEONE responds to my next post. (Small hint: It's you. That someone is you.)

If your character is unsympathetic, expect a pretty awesome skirmish. As my CS said, Shertul has an insane level of strength and speed. Fleshspinners can jump many feet in the air, tear limbs apart, move as fast as a horse, etc. He'll probably try tear a chunk out of yo' face, kick some dirt into the mage's eyes, and then run away faster than a centaur.

And he'll need to, since my own character of Windleaf is allying herself with the Nephilim.

The poor Fleshspinner is going to end up with the least amount of screentime at this rate, haha.

@Jeyma


I always have my beefy centaur chick!
My post is nearly done. So if anyone else is currently writing, I hope you won't mind holding off just a bit. Two people have posted while I was writing, and both times I've had to nearly re-write the whole fucking thing.

@Soragoku

Sorry dude, didn't even notice that myself till now. Also ooo sheet, things getting tense over here with the fleshspinner


I'll be telling my children about this one day.

"And that's the story, kids, of how I lost a character on the second page because he was kinda gross and funny looking."

sorry for my short and detail-lacking posts.


Your posts were certainly detailed enough for me. I don't think they lacked anything necessary. That's what matters.

Of all people, I know how fun it is to add tons of detail, but don't feel obligated to put more facts in a post than are needed. When you write, the goal should be to tell someone what happened, how it happened, and who was involved in it's happening. If a detail is not relevant, don't include it, and don't feel the need to apologize for not having it. :D
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They go to head to the Intsitute and Carlosle realises he can't just teleport,

"....Can...Can I ride you?"


I mean, she would actually agree, so long as Carlosle didn't ask in a demeaning way. She's proud of her centaurian body, and would view it as a confirmation of her strength: look, the two-legs rely on her. She wouldn't act arrogant or mean about it, but she would be more flattered than insulted.
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AT LEAST YOU HAVE TWO GIRLS BEING NICE TO YOU.


And no sex-drive.
I haven't decided which yet, but I'M ABOUT TO BITCH SLAP ONE OF THESE NEPHILIMS.
@Arkaotic Just go ahead and assume she's a little past the entrance, near the tavern
@Jeyma

Yeah they can horse around after he's arrived. Writing up a post now.


can horse around after he's arrived.


horse around


@Soragoku

I don't know if your snooty ice-mage is still sticking around and watching or not, but I want him and Shertul to have a conversation later. If he's over at the bar, or something like that, I'll have Shertul come find him.

@Arkaotic

OH, and the Centaur wants to speak to your drunkard Nephilim. She's interested in being led to the Institute, of course. She would speak to the Ice Wizard, but ew, magic. I'll have her trot over to him next time I post, or perhaps you can take the liberties
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