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Fucker... The moment you go to apply to a great RP and it turns out its shut...

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@FortunesFaded I've been Co-GM on multiple RPs on another site (plus a few here), and managing the OOC/reviewing apps essentially became by primary role. On that site, people loved the way I picked through their apps, so I guess I didn't see the need to change my behavior from site to site if I was praised for it from where I came. However, picking through their apps entailed a full review, including pros, cons, sometimes neutral points, and then an overall summary of the app + what they could have done to improve. So I guess it would be harder to feel offended in the way I did reviews.

I understand that how people take criticism varies wildly from individual to individual, a fact I wasn't considering due to the above reasons. I've taken great strides towards becoming an entirely neutral and unbiased critic from where I started, but maybe I'm not there yet. I don't know. If I ever feel the need to speak up again, I'll use a lighter hand. It's something I can do, but never really felt the need for.

TL;DR I understand where my fault lies, and will work even harder to improve. A great reviewer shouldn't be able to offend even the touchiest of individuals. That's what I'm going to achieve.

@BurningCold

Well, I've been on many different sites. And people have told me that they quite like how open I am about how I feel with people. So I never really thought I should change that, after all people like that. I've been in many a roleplay and I've found that rarely do they ever have a problem with how I act. They just seem to get on with it. I will TRY to change and be less honest next time.

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Name: 'Skully' (Real name is Rickard Dunwich)
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Profession: Corporal
Nationality: Scottish, EU
Birth Planet: Earth

Appearance: A large, muscular man. About 6' 2 with closely cropped hair that is done in a spiked hairstyle. He has lots of tattoos up and down his arms, most of it is squad mates he has lost. He has a corporal insignia tattooed on his upper right arm, near his shoulder. he is normally seen in his battle armour while on duty, with a permanently strapped revolver (Name will be added when I know about weapons in more detail) to his side, along with a Taser. His most notable feature would be tattooed a skull on his face, giving him the name of skully. While at a battle he will wear a skull bandanna but if that is lost or taken off you can see the tattooed black eye sockets, the teeth on his lips. The sunken cheeks and temple.

Strengths:
Very Strong: His strength comes from the long hours he spends at the gym, though he isn't over muscular. He is in fit shape and can lift double his body weight.
Master of Arms: He is very experienced with all manner of weapons, be that a large rifle, his trusty revolver or a shock baton. He can use them all to the best of his ability, which is a pretty dang good amount. He is an excellent sharpshooter with them all and can be relied on in almost any situation.

Weaknesses:
Plagued by his lost friends: Skully has been in the army for a long time, he has seen some things that can turn milk sour. It has made him better for it. But one thing that haunts him to this day is the screams and the faces of the friends he has lost. The times when a man’s legs were blown clean off when he stepped on a mine or when a new Jarhead gets hit by a stripper machine gun and is pulled to shreds. Those are what haunt him, leading to nightmares.
Bossy and Over Confident: Given how many years he has at war, the people he has killed and the men he has lost. he believes that he is a pro at war. He inst. he will overextend his boundary's, give out commands he has no ideas if they will work. All on the idea that he knows better than everyone else. This also extends to science, though he knows nothing of science. He will pretend he knows it all to seem smart.

Personality: An over confident son of a bitch. He is fully aware that he is good and experienced, and that will be his downfall. He is a terrible flirt, going as far as continue harassing ladies after they have made signs they don’t like him. A Bawdry man always has a rude joke or a sexualised story to tell from his years in the force and different countries. He is a heavy partyer and when he drinks he drinks hard. The only person he can’t best by a mile is the Sergeant, but even that is a close call sometimes.

History: Born in Aberdeen to a poor family, Rickard had a hard upbringing. The estate he lived on was frequented by the police and beatings were a common place. Home life was bad for him as a child, he father was a drunk womaniser who would always be out at night and his mother, besotted with sadness over her husband, was a junkie with needle and nose. He was the middle child of 6half brothers and sisters of whom were all trouble makers. At the first chance he had, he enlisted in the military as a rifleman following his older brothers. From there he moved up the ranks until he hit corporal. Though experienced enough for Sergeant, the men of office don’t believe him to be fit for the command so have sent him on reserve missions into hells greatest depths hoping to get him killed.

Family: His mother and father died in an explosion from a car bomb and all but one of his siblings have died at war. His one sibling is Lieutenant Thomas Dun which. The only one of them that has not died and progressed high in the ranks… Even if it’s just an office commission.

Event Horizon (Old Thread)

@FortunesFadedHe just seems to lord it around. Acting like billy big shit. At least you phrase your complaints in a way that is more helpful than cruel but he just seems to think he is the GM. If he can rein in his condescending attitude ill drop it. And yes, skully is my main

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@BurningColdI edited it oh mighty BurningCold. I hope for it to appease you my lord

Event Horizon (Old Thread)

@BurningCold You do come across as a massive arsehole. Like, unbelievably so. Do you ever stop to take your head out from your arse?

Event Horizon (Old Thread)

Name: 'Skully' (Real name is Rickard Dunwich)
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Profession: Corporal
Nationality: Scottish, EU
Birth Planet: Earth

Appearance: A large, muscular man. About 6' 2 with closely cropped hair that is done in a spiked hairstyle. He has lots of tattoos up and down his arms, most of it is squad mates he has lost. He has a corporal insignia tattooed on his upper right arm, near his shoulder. he is normally seen in his battle armour while on duty, with a permanently strapped revolver (Name will be added when I know about weapons in more detail) to his side, along with a Taser. His most notable feature would be tattooed a skull on his face, giving him the name of skully. While at a battle he will wear a skull bandanna but if that is lost or taken off you can see the tattooed black eye sockets, the teeth on his lips. The sunken cheeks and temple.

Strengths:
Very Strong: His strength comes from the long hours he spends at the gym, though he isn't over muscular. He is in fit shape and can lift double his body weight.
Master of Arms: He is very experienced with all manner of weapons, be that a large rifle, his trusty revolver or a shock baton. He can use them all to the best of his ability, which is a pretty dang good amount. He is an excellent sharpshooter with them all and can be relied on in almost any situation.

Weaknesses:
Plagued by his lost friends: Skully has been in the army for a long time, he has seen some things that can turn milk sour. It has made him better for it. But one thing that haunts him to this day is the screams and the faces of the friends he has lost. The times when a man’s legs were blown clean off when he stepped on a mine or when a new Jarhead gets hit by a stripper machine gun and is pulled to shreds. Those are what haunt him, leading to nightmares.
Bossy and Over Confident: Given how many years he has at war, the people he has killed and the men he has lost. he believes that he is a pro at war. He inst. he will overextend his boundary's, give out commands he has no ideas if they will work. All on the idea that he knows better than everyone else. This also extends to science, though he knows nothing of science. He will pretend he knows it all to seem smart.

Personality: An over confident son of a bitch. He is fully aware that he is good and experienced, and that will be his downfall. He is a terrible flirt, going as far as continue harassing ladies after they have made signs they don’t like him. A Bawdry man always has a rude joke or a sexualised story to tell from his years in the force and different countries. He is a heavy partyer and when he drinks he drinks hard. The only person he can’t best by a mile is the Sergeant, but even that is a close call sometimes.

History: Born in Aberdeen to a poor family, Rickard had a hard upbringing. The estate he lived on was frequented by the police and beatings were a common place. Home life was bad for him as a child, he father was a drunk womaniser who would always be out at night and his mother, besotted with sadness over her husband, was a junkie with needle and nose. He was the middle child of 6half brothers and sisters of whom were all trouble makers. At the first chance he had, he enlisted in the military as a rifleman following his older brothers. From there he moved up the ranks until he hit corporal. Though experienced enough for Sergeant, the men of office don’t believe him to be fit for the command so have sent him on reserve missions into hells greatest depths hoping to get him killed.

Family: His mother and father died in an explosion from a car bomb and all but one of his siblings have died at war. His one sibling is Lieutenant Thomas Dun which. The only one of them that has not died and progressed high in the ranks… Even if it’s just an office commission.

Event Horizon (Old Thread)

@Lucidnonsense I would assume so.

Event Horizon (Old Thread)

@FortunesFadedI have used spell checkers and grammar checkers. I used them before posting it. It diddnt tell me anything. I put it through word and then a 3rd party one. I diddnt get any flags like what you have said. Some of us are just bad with grammar and spelling.