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8 yrs ago
Current I RP for the ladies
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8 yrs ago
#Diapergate #Hugs2018
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9 yrs ago
I fucking love catfishing
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9 yrs ago
Every time I insult a certain coworker, i'll take money from their jar. Saving for beer would never be easier!
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9 yrs ago
The Jungle Book is good.
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You see this? You see this call to violence?

This is why you have to vote for Donald Trump. He will keep us safe.

#makeAmericaGreatAgain


He won't keep you safe though, wrong side of his reelection campaign wall. Might try to annex your healthcare or something.

Nah, nothing wrong with giving the reader help. I've actually had an extremely nitpicky guy tell me that he read some of my dialog to his friends in the wrong voice because of where the hints were placed. So I usually have my character gestures in front of the dialog instead of behind it.


That can create a redundancy problem though. Repeating any sentence structure too much can make the prose tedious.
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Chinese and Japanese arent races, they are nationalities, this is where race realism sort of falls apart.




some classic race realism
The way I try and do it is to use "Said" when I think the speaker might be unclear, and otherwise I just leave it hanging and figure the reader will work it out based on context. Example...

"The bus is late." Joe said, looking down at his watch as if it had just insulted his mother.

"Bus is always late. It's been like that since I moved to this neighborhood." Larry replied, calmly rocking back and forth on his heels.

"I can't be late. Skipped two days of work this week already. If I skip a third..."

"Flu?"

"Yes." Joe said with a sniff. "I shouldn't be going. If I miss today, that's it. I'm done."

"It's been goin' 'round."

"I know. I don't recommend it."

The two men became quiet for a time. In the fog they looked to each other like outlines, bodies where one man could imagine the other as anything. Another form joined them. It started as a low moan on the street, followed by a high pitched squeal and the appearance by a behemoth of shadow in the fog.

"Ah." Joe said. "It's about time."


It is really easy in RP writing for a person to assume others aren't actually paying attention. That's probably one of my biggest flaws as a writer; assuming the reader needs everything spelled out for them. But if you worry too much about it, you can end up creating clunky sentences...

...or, god help us all, coloring the text like it were somebody's forgotten myspace page.
now i am intrigued. tell me, does Mahz plan on implementing sex in the forum?
whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa we're halfway there
WHOAAAAAAAAAAAA


did he fall down the stairs tho?
Okay, so fun facts: I'm starting to play with novelizing PoW.

I've written a thing.

And had some people look at it.

This is just the start of the process. If anybody wants to get in on it, we should probably talk how that would look. @Pepperm1nts, @Dinh AaronMk, and @gorgenmast

It does seem rather odd to novelize a story that really isn't complete.


RP is moving deadly slow right now. If I waited for others to post before posting, nothing would get done. But if I used my place as, like, half the world right now, I'd just be writing back and forth to myself a lot as if I were writing the end of a book, so I might as well start back at the beginning and do this shit properly.

Also, to bookify this, a lot of shit has to be changed. Most of PoW is NRP style meetings, pure world building with no story, or of dubious relevance. Not to mention the history is really shaky at best. All these things have to be solved, and the fat cut, so that beginning at the beginning makes it easier to get the story right.

And Also Also, fuck it, RP is little leagues now, I want to advance to the next level.
Why are you not biting, cmon I was looking forward to this from you the most...

This is a free speech zone, no one is going to call you a racist, and even if they did, I'm pretty sure most of us wouldnt care as that gets thrown around too much anyway.



Men's Rights Activist (MRA) (no)

I believe in mens rights obviously, and I agree that there are issues of discrimination that men face. But Capital "MRA" has nothing to do with any of that. The way I see it, proper academic Feminism covers this (recall 'Feminism doesn't mean womens lib specifically, it's more broadly focused on gender equality). Everywhere I have seen people call themselves MRA, it's mostly been people bitching about feminists, which isn't... isn't really the point. If they stop that and instead focus their efforts on actual reform, I'd change my mind on this.

As a general rule, if someone's contribution to society is bitching on the internet, then meh. And an entire movement based on doing nothing but bitching on the internet? Double meh.

Anaracho Capatalist (Jesus no)



SJW (Social Justice Warrior) (Nope)

See MRA answer Paragraph 2.

I do think this one gets overused now though. I remember back when SJW was being used for the crazies, like the people who thought everyone should accept their decision to live as a turtle, or the die cis scum people. Nowadays it seems to mean everybody who isn't Moon Man.

Feminist (Kinda)

I don't use the word because I don't like the preachy moralism of those who outwardly strut about being feminists. There is a black and white nature to pop-Feminism that seems useless. It's like fundamentalist religion, if your entire gig is to go around calling everyone else sinners, you're no really contributing are you?

But actual feminism, as in equal rights and all that fun stuff? Yeh, i'm down with that.

Brexiter (No opinion)

That's European business. I have no beef with the dismantling of trade agreements. If they create an economic crisis out of it and go all Fascisty again though, then that'll make it World business and we'll all have to go toe to toe in round three.

Gamergater/Pro Gamergate (Who gives a shit?)

Seriously, whether or not Angelina Jolie is getting a divorce is more important than fucking Gamergate.

Race Realist (Jesus no)

Race realism is just statistical scare-tactics. As in, the shit tabloids do. If you want to murder people, at least have the balls to say it is for the murder, and don't hide under some lazy-ass stat waving.

Libertarian (It's complicated)

This is a broader philosophy than Ayn Rand would have you believe. So when you see one of those four quadrant political tests? Yeh, the entire bottom half is some variation of libertarianism. And I do tend to be on that half of the board. I think that breaking up power structures is beneficial to the human race. But where I differ from capital L "Libertarians" is that I think capitalism and private ownership are power structures on par with government. So far right libertarians seem a whole lot like people who want to trade masters from one they vote for to one they cannot.

However, I think authoritarianism usually looked a lot like "I don't like all these idiots making decisions, lets get one idiot and let him make all the decisions." A bunch of idiots will argue and cancel each other out, but one idiot, or even a small council of idiots, won't have that check. A pro-Authoritarian guy might look at a bunch of theory and imagine how great if Plato's Philosopher King could make the decisions, but that's not how it plays out. Hitler and Stalin aren't historical accidents, they are inevitable when playing with Authoritarian government. Just your typical absolute monarchs in a time when the toys are better and the people more sensitive to the horror of the thing.

So me believing that concentrated power is usually worse than unconcentrated, I'd suspect that makes me a libertarian, even if I don't want to swear fealty to Wal-Mart like the Anarcho-Capitalists do, or think the biggest danger to freedom is rich people paying taxes like the "Libertarians" believe.

I don't really do labels. Not out of some sort of special snowflakey thing, but because when you do a label you get stuck with the uphill battle of trying to shake the stereotype associated with the label. Better to just bitch at people and let them defend their own labels.
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