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Current I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
4 yrs ago
At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
4 yrs ago
I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
4 yrs ago
As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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roleplayerguild.com/posts/5… If anyone's up for fighting some kaiju, why not try out my new RP, Godzilla: YATAGARUSU?

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Looks good to me, accepted.
@Dead Cruiser: Well, I wasn't sure if to bring this up since it's not entirely fleshed out, but necromantic spells in my setting are "colorless". They don't involve an affinity and, well... they're not like you seem to think. They can summon and communicate with ghosts and spirits, but not control them, and reanimate dead flesh.

@TheFake: Hmm, alright, that's probably okay.
Nonon will get a post when I figure out what to have her do.
Saber

Saber smiled at the little girl. She wasn't always sure what to do in such situations, but she was certain a reassuring smile would help. In this situation, even if the girl believed she could defend herself, Saber would not allow her to go without some form of defense. She was a child, a child who could be far too easily harmed by people who would unquestioningly do evil. The King of Knights straightened, watching as one of the newcomers seemed stunned at the city as they attempted to leave, and there was another... creature of some sort. It looked like an animal walking on two legs, and Saber was truthfully unsure of what to think of it. It seemed rather startled, somehow. On the subject of the city... perhaps Archer was right to scout it out. The city may have changed...

She paused again when the man in the suit, Takatora, spoke to her.

"... Rin is very important," Saber began, unsure of how to put it. She had mentioned a Master previously, and Rin was so incredibly important... and of course there was Shirou, who was a close friend and whom Rin cared for as well. Of course, Saber's concern for Rin was on several levels, both as her Master and for other reasons. "I must return to her."

She glanced at the door, then back at the others. "We should investigate the city, to see if it has changed."

With that, she proceeded out of the armory... and thoughts of investigating the city fled her mind as she smelled the scent of food. Truly good food.... Ah, she had been pulled from a meal as well... Saber's armor dispelled in a flurry of blue lights as she immediately headed directly for the source of the smells.
I'll be replying again after the new GM post.
Okay, for the most part your character is fine, the only issues I have are the use of another supernatural element aside from magitech(chi), and the fact that none of the girls are supposed to have even put on the MagiGear prior to the start of the RP.
@TheFake: Okay, I realized what the one thing that was still making me hesitant is.

My one remaining concern is that, since anyone who hears him cast his two biggest spells is affected, this means that if player characters hear them they have nothing they can really do but stumble around blindly.

@Dead Cruiser: I think you misunderstood, I wasn't suggesting an affinity for youkai as an idea, I was using it to say "Spirit" as an affinity is a bad idea. It would basically be an affinity dealing with an entire class of widely differing beings and I really have no idea how it would function when applied in the same way other affinities are. And there is actually onmyodo in this but I didn't think it was immediately relevant to the RP.

And, well... there's really no "over-dimension" for spirits? ^^; There is a different plane of existence but that won't conceivably be appearing in this RP. Ki in an of itself I never really considered to exist in this setting, I guess astral projection might be a thing, I'm not actually sure what the "aura" would be other than a mana signature that's possible to pick up on if you know what to do for this though.
@Dead Cruiser: My issue is more how such an affinity would function in terms of the setting.

As I'm seeing it now, it kind of seems like having an affinity for "youkai" or something.

@TheFake: Okay, he looks alright now, but I'm going to make sure. Final ruling might not be up until tomorrow but you'll probably be accepted.
Ah, that's not how it works with this, you need to learn magic. With one specific exception.

And... I'm not sure about that honestly, I'll have to think about it.
You don't, I'm very wary of people thinking they're not necessary and in his backstory you mention him doing it without knowledge of spells.

"Spirit" ... I'm honestly not sure to tell the truth. It's an area I haven't considered before.
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