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4 yrs ago
Current I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
4 yrs ago
At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
4 yrs ago
I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
4 yrs ago
As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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4 yrs ago
roleplayerguild.com/posts/5… If anyone's up for fighting some kaiju, why not try out my new RP, Godzilla: YATAGARUSU?

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@Archangel: Well... they probably find them kind of mysterious? There is some trade and interaction but it's not exactly common.

@Exodus: You mean that just as a motivator, right? Not as a full-blown leader? I'm wary of that kind of thing. ^^;
Hmm. Only thing is that the more likely race to try and break through the Veil by force is orcs/goblins, though there might be some less pleasant humans.
@Exodus: Hmm. So he basically helps motivate or something? Keep in mind attack boosts in a video game fashion don't really translate well to prose. ^^;

Also, major updates to the first post, including a description of the Veil of Tears and some reorganization.
@NobleArchangel: I'm really sorry about making you wait, I'll at least give you the story on Lethienvel/The Veil of Tears shortly so you know what to do. Sorry again.

@Darcs: Okay, um, my only remaining issue is that some of these seem a little "video-gamey"? Mostly Concussion, Jinx, Voodoo, Wrath, though Hex a little too. If you can figure out a way to make these sound more like they fit into a world rather then a video game then they're fine.
@Exodus: Going to give you some time to find pictures, but the bio seems mostly fine. I do have a question, though, why is he called a Warlord? It's a little misleading, I'd go with something like "Tower Warrior" because of his shield.

@TheRider: Okay, um, there's some things here now that I've got more time to think out my response.

I'd really have liked if you discussed vampires with me beforehand, I do want everyone intending to bring in a new race to do so. Shadow manipulation is also rather vague, and while I said backstory is optional I'd like to know what this promise he made is.

@NobleArchangel: Okay, most of it is fine but there's one glaring thing that I am sorry is not yet in the first post. High Elves probably do not fight one another due to the origins of the Veil of Tears. At the very least High Elves beyond the Veil don't.

I'm sorry, I'll be getting up an entry on why very soon.
@TheRider: Usual vampire abilities actually vary a lot, so before giving my final ruling I'd like some clarity there.

@Darcs: Um, alright, much better, but I'd like to know the possibilities for her magic before I do anything else.
Oh, sorry, I'll take a look shortly when I look at Darcs' bio. ^^;
@Exodus: I'll wait and see for when the bio was finished.

@Darcs: I'll take a look shortly.

On another note I'll be writing up Ithillin soon.

Also not a "bruh". ^^;
@Scarifer: Thanks for the cooperation.

@Lugubrious: Okay, sounds good!

Also of note: Velt has an entry in the first post now.
@Darcs: Okay, there's still some other issues I have after some thought.

I honestly don't see the point in making her half-Nem. ^^; It's just that, well, you made her part Nem and then don't really give her any traits of them? Aside from black hair and being lightly built but those aren't exactly unique to Nem.

And I'm still kind of unsure of random effects like that, but I'm having trouble making a decision there given I don't know exactly what you'd be going for. I think I'd prefer a less chance-based form of magic. I'm sorry for making this many more requests after you've been cooperative so far.

@Lugubrious: The dungeon looks cool(tree dungeons are awesome really) but I have some questions. Since there's definitely no Jungles in Velt, I assume they'd be heading South to reach this place? Also what is your idea for the Biomancer guild?

@Lord Santa: Hmm. I am worried about there being some overlap that's too direct, in this case. Maybe work on him playing off of our dwarf rather than overlapping too much?

@NobleArchangel: Okay, I'm going to ask something of you as a general thing to High Elf players. It's not a negative point on your bio or anything, it's more just since most High Elf settlements are beyond the Veil of Tears in the far west I think it would be a good idea to get some backstory explanation. There's some on this side of the Veil(which will get an entry once I decide more beyond its elvish name being Lethienvel), but they're few and far between and likely more hidden. Basically, for High Elves I'd like a bit of explanation on their backstory. It's not required but I recommend it. Your bio looks fine, though.

@ThePatriarch: I'll look at this bio when it's completed.

@Scarifar: I like the base idea(thought it reminds me I should get some stuff up about undead), but I'm a little sketchy in involving another dimension entirely in this case. There are some pretty terrible things in deep places of the world, so it could be something potentially called from there?

@Raineh Daze: Accepted.
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