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Current I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
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At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
4 yrs ago
I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
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As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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So figured I'd post this, um. I know it's long but it's everything I have worked out for the Nem and yeah.



Also worked out some probably not great language stuff.

Also a sketch of a female Nem.
Edes Athran probably doesn't have direct servants per say since it has no mind of its own. It'd be more of an indirect thing, acts of evil such as blood sacrifice and all that stuff "feed" it since it's more of a conceptual evil then a direct thing that acts on the world.

Also I think names for anything should be discussed beforehand instead of just writing them up. ^^;
I'm waiting for feedback from Gnar on something so I won't be posting for a bit.
I'm... probably going to use the same character as in the original but I'm a bit conflicted but I really like my previous choice hmm.
I like that idea too. Edes Athran is extremely old and all and I'd imagine any civilization could eventually realize it exists.
I like that idea, honestly, especially as it doesn't really give it a clear origin.

If anything, an actual origin for Edes Athran would be discovered much later.
I think voting on every single race is a bit clunky honestly. It's better if we just discuss them.

Speaking of which, um...

Also, since we're doing high magic(that seems to be the consensus at least), the mecha could probably be powered by using magical means. Airships would probably use balloons made of various materials. Or floating rocks or something.

And, um, I have a few ideas to suggest in regards to some stuff.

First off, um, if anyone actually likes the whole "Inverted Black Tower" thing, it would now be called Edes Athran. It's on its own plane of existence, and in spite of it being an upside-down massive black tower, it's still incredibly malevolent and projects this malevolence onto the living world. It has no mind or thoughts or anything at all, but it's so evil that it casts a shadow into the living world. We'd have to work out what it actually does if anyone likes this idea but yeah.

Secondly, I have a deity to suggest! Her name is Ila-Nem, which is a contraction of Ila-Zenniso-Netuyem, and she is the night goddess(and chief deity) for a race of desert-dwelling humanoids. According to their creation myth, she brought down starlight and forged it into flesh and bone to create them. They are the Nem, who are a nocturnal race that resembles humans. They are extremely pale due to being nocturnal, with slightly-larger-than-most-human's, expressive red or yellow eyes and black hair. They're also very small at 3'4 to 3'5 as adults.


Any thoughts on this stuff? ^^;
The bag rustled as she walked.

She shoes clacked against the concrete sidewalk, the sun hitting her as she went. One hand was firmly in her pocket, the other on the straps of her duffle bag. The contents were obscured, but there was the sound of paper rubbing against paper every step she made. She looked like someone focused, someone concentrating. For Mizuki Kumiko was deep in thought, as she walked down the sidewalk. Unlike other times where more pressing matters filled her mind, today's thoughts were on her hunger. For the moment, she had not particularly a large amount of money, and she was hungry. She had to eat something. Kumiko could ignore her desire to eat no longer. As she walked, she glanced to her side. There was a storefront. A tall woman had just walked in. There was a boy getting food. She could smell food being prepared...

Turning towards the storefront, Kumiko approached, only to pause for a moment. There were... other people. What's more, there was the owner of the storefront. What could she do, really? Having to talk with them if they struck up conversation... It would just be annoying. A hassle. Kumiko didn't feel like dealing with something like that right now. And yet... she was hungry. There was really no denying that she was hungry, not at all. But... to have to talk to these people...

To bystanders, it would seem if the girl had simply stopped, hunger warring with irritation inside her.
Well, if this is like last time, abilities at least must be alluded to at some point in canon.
Definitely interested so yeah!
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