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Current I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
3 yrs ago
At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
3 yrs ago
I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
4 yrs ago
As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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4 yrs ago
roleplayerguild.com/posts/5… If anyone's up for fighting some kaiju, why not try out my new RP, Godzilla: YATAGARUSU?

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"There's no way of knowing..." Tomoko replied with a sigh, trailing off... before she looked at her maid's forehead again. "Unless we can break the spell. I'm afraid I can't help due to my role in reestablishing this barrier, but if I'm not mistaken you could destroy it, possibly, by overloading the rune with mana to break it."

"Er... wh-what would you be doing to my head exactly?" asked the maid, nervously, taking a step back. It appeared that she really didn't like hearing that they would be shooting mana into her forehead.

"It's not a complicated process," Tomoko responded. This seemed to do little to soothe her maid's concern.
I certainly do.
You got it with the first three. :D You get... um... something!

The fourth can pretty rapidly result in an overwhelming number of tentacles.
So I've heavily implied three chief weaknesses of this thing in my latest post.
Inside the convenience store, tentacles sprayed black mist as they were cut apart, hissing noises emanating from the blobby Negari as its tentacles were severed from its body, scattering to the ground as they were sliced to pieces. As Noriko came to rest upon one of the intact tendrils, the stumps she had severed raised towards her along with the intact tentacles. However... suddenly, the stumps swelled and warped, and from each erupted eight new tentacles, steadily flooding the shop with them.

It was only then that they lunged towards the magical girl.

Outside, the blob that Shooting Star kicked seemed to tremble from the impact as the opposite side of it swelled outwards... and all at once, erupted out, exploding into a shower of goo and black mist. The orange eyes across its surface faded and it fell limply towards the ground. dissipating more and more into black mist as it fell until it faded from view entirely. That segment of the Negari had been destroyed, the extreme force of impact too much for its regenerative and subdividing capabilities. It seemed as if, perhaps, the body was more vulnerable to attack then the tentacles as well.

A strange shrieking sound erupted from the creature as its body wobbled violently, jostling the unconscious people inside it as it did.

Akane was forced to jump out of the way once more, boots skidding on concrete as the vacuum tentacle launched for her again. But, as it did, suddenly another girl appeared in front of her. There was no mistaking that outfit for anything else... "Copenhagen Star-san?!"

The other girl shoved an entire tree into the waiting vaccuum, and for a moment the sucking stopped as it raised and shook. But then, the 'maw' widened, engulfing the tree steadily as the tentacle swelled to take it in.

Whatever Copenhagen Star was doing, it must have been helping! Akane couldn't help but notice, as well, the other girl that had appeared... It was Shooting Star! And she just... just...

The hunk of Negari she had punched was torn free from the rest of its mass with a kiss, orange eyes immediately opening all over its body as tendrils sprouted from it. However, another tendril sprouted from behind the other magical girl, this one twisting its tip into what looked more like a drill then anything else, which rose up to attack the distracted Shooting Star!

Akane took a step, eyes wide. It... it was going to hit the other magical girl! She didn't see Nadeshiko-sempai either, she had to help her, but someone else was in danger, and all those people... there was so much going on!

She had to do something, and... and...

"Try an attack! Hurry!" the voice of her fairy declared to her. An attack? Right? She had to say something, would it just come to her? Akane wasn't sure, but... but... breaking into a sprint, she took a running leap. Words rose in her mind, and she opened her mouth...!

"DRAGON HEAT!" cried the dragon-tailed, horned magical girl, swinging her sword down. As she swung it, red fire immediately flowed down the blade, engulfing it in flames as it did. It hissed through the Negari's flesh, cutting cleanly through it and sending the drill-tip tendril tumbling away, fading into black mist. Akane skidded along the ground as she landed, sparks flying up from her armored boots.

She really did it! She hurt it! The tentacle was retracting, black mist flowing from the tip, and it looked... burnt? The shadowy flesh was charred or something!

... And then a huge tentacle immediately swung down towards her.
1. While I can't think of a reason that wouldn't be possible, I'd prefer a human majority for characters.

2. No.
"Aoyama-san?" Tomoko asked, tilting her head slightly to the side as Ryuuko made her explanation, eyeing the maid. All of that made... far too much sense to her, and explained the white dust in the library if it had come from the wall, and just why the barrier had broken when the thieves had never actually entered the library. As for the maid, Tomoko was well aware of the maid's usage of trick nails for weaponry, traps and various other purposes. But if she didn't remember...

Tomoko reached towards the awkwardly-shifting maid, brushing her bangs back. There was the black rune, seemingly written in ink. For a few moments she stared, then narrowed her eyes.

"This rune is designed to suppress and eventually destroy specific memories," she commented, "Which means that the thief must have..."

She paused for a moment, while the maid fretted over the fact that her mind had been messed with.

"... But you said the thief was an onmyouji? Runecraft is a mage's work."
The... The Ripper?! A traditional Japanese style in the vein of a ninja combined with a title alluding to the infamous British serial killer that both tied to a brutal knife-based style exhibited in one or two videos that exhibited this magical girl's tactics in battle against the Negari. They weren't some of Akane's favorites, but they were really impressive and a magical girl was a magical girl so seeing that sort of thing was awesome and-wait wait wait no! Now wasn't the time to just stand by and watch it wasn't... Tightening her grip on her upperclassmen's hand, breaking into a sprint as she tried to pull the older girl along with you.

"G-Good luck, Ripper-san!" she called to the girl taking on the creature as she sprinted out the door with Nadeshiko-sempai.

The tentacle that had been attempting to break in through the window split in an instant, a hiss coming from the creature as an ugly black mist poured from the wound. What remained of the tendril swiftly retracted, leaving the tip to hit the ground with a dull splat. Just as swiftly as it had retracted, eight more tendrils lined with fiery eyes shot through the window, effortlessly shattering the glass as they roved about for the girl who had just cut one of them.

Meanwhle, atop the building, the blobby creature's eyes immediately shifted to face Copenhagen Star. It didn't do much to resist part of its body violently twisting and breaking off with a strange 'sploosh' sound, possibly because the severed hunk of gooey flesh immediately sprouted dozens of tentacles which shot towards the attacking magical girl in an instant, dozens of eyes forming across its surface as it did.

Trying to drag along her sempai, Akane glanced back, her eyes widening at the sight of the huge Negari atop the shop. All those people trapped inside it... magical girls would save them though, right?!

They had to!

As she looked at it, multiple eyes suddenly shifted to look at her. Immediately, a new tendril sprouted, the top spreading and stretching to resemble... resemble... a vacuum cleaner attachment?! It was even making this 'vrrrrrr' sound! Was that how it had sucked up all those people?!

Whatever the case was, the strange new tendril launched towards both her and the older girl. Desperately, Akane tried to put on another burst of speed... and just barely managed to avoid being sucked up as it slammed into the ground only a meter away from the both of them. But the sheer impact of the blow forced them apart, Akane letting out a yelp of surprise and fear as she tumbled across the ground, rolling twice before lying still.

"... Mmmnn..."

Slowly she pushed herself off the ground. Rolling like that have hurt... She shook her head weakly and looked up. The vaccum-tendril was roving about, searching for victims, and the tendril that had been cut had split into more, now roving into the shop. She'd lost ahold of Nadeshiko... she couldn't even manage to get her away right... What if she got hurt...?

"... I... I..."

"Hi there!" a cheerful voice declared in her ear. Akane blinked, snapped out of her thoughts, turning to see... see... it was a tiny girl. With wings.

"... F... fairy?" she said, staring blankly at the fluttering girl.

"We don't have a lot of time," the fairy cheerfully continued, "So would you like me to ignite your heart and make you a magical girl?! That Negari is really nasty, so those girls need all the help they can get!"

"... A... a magical girl..." for a few moments, Akane starred dully, the shock of her situation and the offer overwhelming. She had begun to think she didn't have the potential, that no-one would ever make that offer to her. But as a magical girl... she wouldn't be so useless. As a magical girl, she could help people and protect her sempai! As a magical girl... she'd live her dream!

"Yes!"

"Alright!" the fairy seemed equally excited, but then frowned and paused for a moment. "Ummm..."

She took a book out of a bag at her side and quickly flipped through it. "Which one was... oh, right!"

Her smile returning, she pointed two fingers squarely at Akane's chest.

"Heart... Blazing!"

A brilliant light ignited in Akane's chest, and she looked down at it with wide eyes. This was really happening, this was... this was... she was really becoming a magical girl! After all those years, since she was little dreaming of this moment...!

Almost immediately, fire washed over her body, which was a rather frightening surprise until she realized that it wasn't actually burning her. Instead, it seemed to be a pleasant heat, a light radiating around her body as the warmth washed through her... and took her clothes with it when it left. This... this was part of being a magical girl, right? Then why did it feel so embarrassing?! But before she could cover herself, a second torrent of fire, this one seemingly more intense, bathed her entire body in heat again. This time, it seemed to contract around her body, forming... this was her magical girl outfit, wasn't it!? Red and gold, some frills, one arm covered in armor...! Gauntlets formed on her hands, armor on her legs... and... why did it feel a little weird on her head and just above her butt?

Fire shot out of her right hand, before twisting and solidifying into a huge, thick sword. And yet it didn't feel like it weighed a thing...!

The light faded, and Akane found herself looking down at her body, eyes wide. She'd... she'd transformed! She'd really transformed! She was a magical girl now! Oblivious to the fact that she also now had a tail and horns, the redheaded girl found herself looking over her sword in wonder... and then caught herself just in time to dodge the vacuum tentacle again, springing out of the way.

Her armored boots sent up sparks as she skidded across the concrete, righting herself. She felt so... so powerful!

... But it'd be really lame if she got sucked up right after transforming...

"R-right!"

Now... now she really could help!
You've got it right now.
Alette is the one with the red spear.

The giant is off with the high elf mage.
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