So now that I'm done with my current plot development, can I get some feedback from you guys?
It was great. Araby in the sword? That's pretty interesting.
inb4 Araby comes back for real and is good and Spirit finally gets the girl
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...obviously, I need to study my own religion a bit more....
Well, not the word karma, or even karma as we technically think of it: just an unknowable force. Rather, it's God punishing sin and blessing righteousness. Like I said, all sin has punishment (even for believers). But even though works aren't the way to be saved, they are blessed if done out of love for others.
