Willy Vereb

Rise of the Stars, a freeform Sci-Fi Fantasy NRP

It has to be accepted before it can go into the dump.

@duck55223

Yes, that's why I asked if you accept it.
Granted, I'll likely add my profile only when I also have the time to finish Morte's history.
I'm just mourning my loss.
Several paragraphs of dynamic history detailing nearly 2 millennia. All lost.
I doubt I can write the same thing again. :(

Rise of the Stars, a freeform Sci-Fi Fantasy NRP

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The grammar and spelling of the app needs to be fix, as well as the general organization of the paragraphs. The Cthulhu idea is also not serious and needs to be axed entirely.

@duck55223

It might be played as a satire but such religions are actually quite plausible.
Far future civilizations may rediscover the Flying Spaghetti Monster and adopt it as their chief religion. Or well, look at the number of cults and new religions founded in the 20th century.
Just because it may look a complete sham it doesn't mean there couldn't be a large group of people practicing this religion.

On the other hand he should expand on or fix some details and indeed, grammar is something which is an obvious issue here.
Since English is my second language I can understand it well but I'm not sure what would a native speaker see in his app.
I have a feeling though that some of these language problems will be pretty much reoccurring during the RP.
So you probably need to weight this in with the decision.

EDIT: On a different note, can I post my NS on the characters page?
The essentials for judging my app are already there.
The background or history part is the only thing left and I'll add that whenever I get the time and inspiration I had yesterday.

The Sun Will Never Set (A Statisticless NRP)(It had a good run)

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Yeah, I think I might raise them a bit, probably with 80mph being the slowest and 95mph being fastest as, like you said, they are very well armored. Its 360 degree protection style, so they're going to be slower.

Or is that still too slow?

@Skepic

Well, you can make 100+ MPH the fastest. The destroyers which Yllendthyr copied from you are also their fastest class of ship now.
On the other hand I think the heaviest ships with their thousands of tons mass and lack of "super propeller" in the back can likely travel even slower than 80 MPH. The Hildenburg was weighed 200+ tons fully loaded. Even if you have more engine power I think something around 40-60 MPH is a closer estimate. Older Zeppelins were around the 60+ MPH range anyways.

@ClocktowerEchosI was worried at first when you mentioned to copy my military profiles scheme because Yllendthyr's strangely high speed and performance values comes from using pure mithril constructs (which have some other issues for them).
But my worries were for nothing. Your profiles are pretty much fine.
The only exception is with the Destroyers. These things were really thin skinned in WW2, around 20-25mm armor. They relied more on their toughness of construction and sheer agility than anything solid.
Alternatively you can up armor them to moden worldish standards but then their mass would rise to almost 10,000 tons. Which may impact their speed, too.
Pardon for the minor nitpick, like I said everything else is fine.

The Sun Will Never Set (A Statisticless NRP)(It had a good run)

@MihndarBoth you and Skepic can increase the airship speeds, though.
They were around 100 MPH in speeds.
In Skepic's case these might be slower because those airships are armored as hell.
Though it also features propulsions like gigantic 20+ meters wide propellers. So I bet they still do decently enough.

Massive Multiversal Crossover

@VitaVitaARHello!
I just made another character in the interest thread.

Massive Multiversal Crossover: Interest Check and Signups

Shuu Shirakawa

Name: Shuu Shirakawa
Original Name: Christoph Gran McSword (he never uses this)
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Origin: Super Robot Wars - Canon (slightly AU)
Faction: Shadow Eternity
Background:

Character Bio

Shuu Shirakawa is a former royalty from the subterranean magic world of La Gias. He was the bastard child of the late king of La Gran, born from a a Japanese woman kidnapped from Earth. Desperate to escape her mother performed a forbidden ritual and sacrificed Shuu to the evil god Volkuss. Yet Shuu survived and made pact with the evil god itself. After this he began wandering the Earth, gaining valuable experiences and earning several Phds at record age. As the avatar of Volkuss he gained superhuman intelligence but at the cost of the evil god controlling him. Aware of this Shuu spent most of his time to find a way to be freed from Volkuss. For this purpose he was affiliated with many people, sometimes working with the villains while other times assisting the good guys. In the end it was all for the same purpose. After years of failure Shuu finally gave up and plotted a major scene to force the Steel Dragon Team to kill him in battle. Shuu died with a smile on his face, finally earning his freedom in death. Yet fate decreed it differently. Not long after this Shuu found himself alive again, resurrected by the sorcery of Volkuss' chief priest Louzorl. He planned to use Shuu as a pawn to awaken the evil god. Yet he didn't calculate with the fact that Shuu was no longer under Volkruss' control. Shuu destroyed the evil cult, murdered the priest and used Louzorl's sacrifice to summon Volkruss. Shuu sumoned his recently upgraded mech Neo Granzon and managed to kill the evil god with his new power. Finally free to roam Shuu Shirakawa decided to travel the universe. After some time he joined Shadow Eternity out of nothing but self interest.

Personality:
Shuu is a calm and collected individual who generally talks in an extremely proper manner. He's a proud man with brilliant mind and he often mocks his enemies with passive aggressive insults. Shuu treasures his freedom above all else and generally doesn't allow anyone to control him. Shuu might be temporarily allied with people but in the end the only one who matters is himself.

Abilities:

- Super Genius: Shuu has superhuman intellect and knowledge on both magic and highly advanced science. He invented, designed and made his own mecha Granzon and he keeps constantly upgrading it.

- Expert Combatant: Shuu is known as a brilliant scientist yet nobody doubts that he's also a great pilot. He's well-versed in combat, both on foot or while controlling his mech. It seems like he's a genius in regardless what he does.

EI-YAM-003 Granzon


27.3 meters tall giant humanoid machine created entirely by Shuu Shirakawa. It has a Degeneracy Engine along with the Kabbalah System to draw magic power and its main powers are related to the manipulation of gravity, dimensions and black holes.
This powerful machine of destruction can be further boosted by summoning the powers of Dark Brain and transforming the mech into the Neo Granzon. The Neo Granzon is run on cosmic power which makes it obviously stronger than its predecessor.

Stellvia [Always Accepting] (Hey, these things in parentheses are hip, right?)

@InkwellI'm busy so you can take the initiative.
For example by mentioning you suddenly detected a very large vessel appearing in the system.
Kriegschloss is a rather big ship/colony. 4km long and 1.2km diameter at its widest part. It also travels by creating wormholes.
If you want readings on its energy or propulsion, it chiefly uses gravity drive and its power source is a controlled singularity.
They are made of Durametal and rather thickly armored with that.
I think that information would be enough or maybe even too much.

Valkyria Chronicles: Lions of the South

@Lennon79So the time skip comes up with the next post?
Anyways, which one you prefer?
1.) Kyo was already part of this company and he was just transfered Squad 4. He reports for duty at Harald.
2.) Kyo was in a different company or perhaps even a different regiment. He talks with Meutemann first.

The Sun Will Never Set (A Statisticless NRP)(It had a good run)

@SkepicYou mentioned Velikaya's full name and only referred to Radidnahr en'Lóthien Gosodnelh as the "Prime Minister".
If Yllendthyr thought police would exist the PM would get deeply insulted.
He didn't even ask you to repeat his 97 words long name in Old Elvish.


Anyways, I guess it's time for me to post, too.

Stellvia [Always Accepting] (Hey, these things in parentheses are hip, right?)

@Willy Vereb

Yes, of course. Maybe we could have a three-way meeting.

@White Feather

I have many fun experience with those.
Mostly when one side always mistakes the other as enemy.
Those were tense, fun times.