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IVIasterJay said
If Sinjun doesn't show up, I have a Kumogakure genin CS filled out for the other other Naruto RP that I could bring over here.

I know someone who is already making a character to fill the spot, but hey I DID say that Eiji has four genin in his squad.

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Well putting "unknown" isn't quite proper either. Might as well just put "normal seal weaknesses." Or something *shrugs*

Seems fine otherwise.

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Name: Hotaka Zetsubou

Four Blades Seal:

How much time does it take for this to take place, how long for each sense to be "stolen". As for weaknesses, you'd have to place the seal on the person for it to work. If the seal is damaged, it will no longer work. That's the general weakness of seals.

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Beta said
As Assistant GM, I recommend we set a deadline for these MIA Players to get their asses in gear or be cut. Given it's been four or five days so far, I suggest a deadline of Tuesday night.

Agreed.

Gowi said
I'd reccomend PMIng them.

Well, I have already PMed Sinjun, with no reply in the last few days. Soo there is that.

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Lololol

Tsukiko could get there nigh instantaneously without a body, but that's kinda...pointless.

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It should be enjoyable to be one of the few who finds a way around that travel time, excluding the two who will actually travel there. Aka Ketsuro and Tsukiko.

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Now now, be nice.

Name: Hitachi Shizuka
Nickname/Alias: Kage no Kobushi

Accepted. I don't see any issues really, seems perfectly balanced and reasonable. Still working on my review of the hokage.

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Durnehviir said
If you hold your hand over a fire, whether it be over a candle or a stove, you will develop second degree burns.
Fire is fire. If its even hotter than your common day Fire Ninjutsu, which will severely burn you upon contact, it's fair to assume that they will be able to greatly burn you.

I don't think it's necessary to elaborate on something that, albeit stated vaguely, is self exclamatory.
It's like saying "It's very hot" and you needing an exact temperature. If you had that exact temperature it wouldn't' change anything. It'd still be really hot.

Don't ask for unnecessary details when offering critique in an application.
If you wouldn't give those details yourself then it is unwise to ask for them.

Except, I would give details of how much damage a technique would typically do, if it is a technique that has a set amount of damage (on average). So that kind of gets rid of that argument. Sorry you consider it an "unnecessary detail," but I do not and thus I will ask for clarification if something of that nature is not specified. My reasoning behind it is not one dimensional either, because the more vague you have something written, the more room that the player gets to bend the rules through clever word play or the like. No I don't assume that everyone does that, nor is it true that they do, but it is better to be safe then sorry.

Idk if you noticed, but I put a lot of effort into my characters so that, even if misunderstood, pretty much all the information is there and isn't just "inferred" or made vague unless a technique is intentionally broad.

Boru Nagimari: The edits seem fine, however, I believed acceptance would be pending to Ouro's wishes. I'll check in with him when he gets on and get back to you.

Aizen Shimura: Denied.

You have too many powerful techniques. I understand that he's a kage, but the rank and sheer amount of techniques, not to mention the combinations between them and their general effectiveness. Then add to the fact that he has Dust release which is already incredibly powerful and difficult to balance...oh and you modified it so he can not only manipulate molecules, but reconstruct things, rather than just destroy them like the canon Dust release can.

No...no no no.

If you want acceptance/another review, you'll have to ask Ouro because I'm not even sure where to start in the interest of balancing this character.

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Perhaps six since I'm considering/working on the third child (who I believe is the middle sibling, and the only daughter).

Durnehviir said
lol. What degree of burn would someone get if they came into contact with fire?I didn't realize we needed to specify what fire does to a person. I'm guessing everyone with Fireball techniques needs to elaborate because, clearly, stating it is hot enough to be an ignited energy source is not specific enough. In any case! Ouro should post in Uzu!

It's the same as asking someone to define how much damage a technique will do on average. It is necessary, at least in my opinion. So no, generally it is not needed, but since "Hell fire" is incredibly vague and just goes to say its "more powerful than normal fire" which is on its own vague, it needs to be defined.

Also, there are some rather tame flames in the world. Like candles for example and yes I understand that fire jutsu is typically, if not essentially always, more impressive than a candle, it is still a valid point.

Hopefully that is a satisfactory explanation.

@Yog: Temperatures seem fine (as you described them), thank you. I'll glance over the others later as I was merely glancing at the thread before returning to what I was doing. Ciao.