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I only need Tox, possibly, Sven and Whizz to join for the Final Battle.
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Blow it up.


He can't be killed that easily. The planet he lived on imploded and he was in it's core. And he's still Alive, obviously.
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Data: Mm.
-Are we killing it or not?


Meridius-V is a "Dead" planet. No life. That is where we'll face The King now. Then we can take out the Archangels.
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I don't know if you use semi-colons right or not. Actually, that probably means you don't have any semi-colon errors because I don't remember any lel
Well, either way, I could totally give you a crash course in semi-colons right this moment. What do you know about when to use them?


Um. I'm fine. I had enough of english class today.
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Well, with a little help with the tiers, we managed to kill a noble, so you know what? Sure.


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Data: Wonderful.
-So what? It doesn't matter if we don't have any info.


*there is a beeping noise and I pull out a device and a live video is playing and there is a deep earthshaking voice and a faint veiw of something*

?: Where are the Planetary weaopnssss?
88: I don't know!
?: Pleassse, little wrech, do not lie to me. You do wish to live? Correct?
88: *gulps*
?: Now,
* a very large claw reaches through the cell bars and wraps around her*
Be a dear and tell me where the weapons are. And where the Tactician is.
- *I grin*
88: From what I was told, the Tactician should be checking on one of the weapons in Meridius-V. He is going to be staying there for a bit to do a full maintenance check*
?: See? Wasn't that easy? I do not understand why people must be so arrogant with things like this. Do people not value their life that much?
*Iclose the device*
- Perfect!
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Your English is great. The only thing I didn't understand was "yout" instead of "your" and that was for less than a second until I realised it was a typo. And since the usage of semi-colons is not quite required to be classified as having great grammar (since hardly anyone really knows how to use semi-colons anyway), you have great grammar. I haven't seen any mistakes that I can remember, and if I have, they were so small as for me to not remember them at all.

Long story short, you have great grammar lel


Thanks. And the second part is my usage of semi-colons?
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Data: As was expected.


But this problem , in particular, was something I wanted. Now we have eyes and ears in the castle. And L.U.N.A.R. Is a multidimentional A.I. that can "die" in one device, but actually move to another device. He is our eyys and ears.
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Data: Oh? What a shame.


Yes. The main plan was that you joined us. And she manned the weapons. But of course there were problems.
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Yeah. Though I am here as much as I can, for hours every day.


My horrible english...I am glad you understand it.
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Data: *From behind you*
Good day.


Data! Hello! You gave me a good scare. I need you to man the planet weapons. 88 is taken. They captured her.
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