Was making a dungeon, but quick question; is my character accepted in her current state?
VitaVitaAR said @Darcs: Okay, there's still some other issues I have after some thought.
I honestly don't see the point in making her half-Nem. ^^; It's just that, well, you made her part Nem and then don't really give her any traits of them? Aside from black hair and being lightly built but those aren't exactly unique to Nem.
VitaVitaAR said And I'm still kind of unsure of random effects like that, but I'm having trouble making a decision there given I don't know exactly what you'd be going for. I think I'd prefer a less chance-based form of magic.
VitaVitaAR said I'm sorry for making this many more requests after you've been cooperative so far.
VitaVitaAR said Also not a "bruh". ^^;
VitaVitaAR said
@TheRider: Usual vampire abilities actually vary a lot, so before giving my final ruling I'd like some clarity there.@Darcs: Um, alright, much better, but I'd like to know the possibilities for her magic before I do anything else.
VitaVitaAR said
@Exodus: Going to give you some time to find pictures, but the bio seems mostly fine. I do have a question, though, why is he called a Warlord? It's a little misleading, I'd go with something like "Tower Warrior" because of his shield.@TheRider: Okay, um, there's some things here now that I've got more time to think out my response.I'd really have liked if you discussed vampires with me beforehand, I do want everyone intending to bring in a new race to do so. Shadow manipulation is also rather vague, and while I said backstory is optional I'd like to know what this promise he made is.@NobleArchangel: Okay, most of it is fine but there's one glaring thing that I am sorry is not yet in the first post. High Elves probably do not fight one another due to the origins of the Veil of Tears. At the very least High Elves beyond the Veil don't.I'm sorry, I'll be getting up an entry on why very soon.
VitaVitaAR said @Darcs: Um, alright, much better, but I'd like to know the possibilities for her magic before I do anything else.