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I'd definitely contribute a character to the neutral group you are suggesting, but did you have any specific ideas? Les hash this out. @Kafka Komedy
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@solokolos As I posited in the chat, my idea is a hero team that isn't super duper heroic. They subsist on donations but REALLY want you to send in those donations. Maybe they do some advertising or streaming too? Basically a team that tries to get around the "if you take jobs for money you're going to be watched like a hawk" stuff that the PRT implements.
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@solokolos As I posited in the chat, my idea is a hero team that isn't super duper heroic. They subsist on donations but REALLY want you to send in those donations. Maybe they do some advertising or streaming too? Basically a team that tries to get around the "if you take jobs for money you're going to be watched like a hawk" stuff that the PRT implements.


I'd be fine with that idea Kafka, right now I just realized the amount of independents that Eklispe has to deal with so I think adding another would just be mean. If Pro accepts the idea I'll get Artificer to join up with the unnamed third group.
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@Kafka Komedy Seems pretty good to me. Call it "The New Justice Team" if you like.
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I'm definitely interested, but I wouldn't create a new character because I don't have that much time in the week. Chalk me up as interested though. @Kafka Komedy
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Edit: @Kafka Komedy Sign me up.
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... Who the heck uses a CAR in WORM!?!?

Cheaters!

Post edit: So, I'll assume I still have control of Viola/Speedrunner until a GM/Co-GM tells me otherwise. Also, maybe there was someone that had entered the apartment while Wisp ran after the car, then tell me so. I'll just edit my post to there, then. The post as it is right now is simply how it will be if nothing interrupts her from otherwise doing so. If something prohibits that entire post from happening, yeah. I'll adapt to it. Like, if for example, Viola wasn't even in there. That works too. Yupp.

And, if there's nothing to say to it on the end there, I could just go ahead and write-in more details in the end, as if she actually finds somewhere to stay the next order of business will be to hunt down the den of the Rockers, somehow. Heh.
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Alright, sounds like there's more or less a general consensus on what you'd like to see in a third team. So it'll be an independent hero team that monetizes their popularity and accepts donations. I'll be adding that group to the front page shortly. Anybody with a pending CS that I haven't reviewed yet can alter it to be part of that group if you would like. I'll be looking at CSs tonight, most likely.
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@The Wild West Artificer is all good to go! I absolutely love that his trigger to become a tinker was his inability to be a tinker, and even after he finally got his wish he still can't actually enjoy the thrill of designing and building his own physics-breaking inventions.

@Banana Her list of skills seems pretty small for someone that was getting all As and Bs in school. Is she just book smart without any real practical skills? Also why would her father being in the PRT mean she wants to avoid the Protectorate at all costs? I'd like a little expansion on their relationship and why she has that thought process. Last and most importantly, her powers aren't well defined enough. The range you added is a great detail, but we need some more details. How much control does she have over the stone she's manipulating? Is there a weight or mass limit to how much she can manipulate at a time? How well can she split focus on multiple sources or objects at the same time? Perhaps most importantly, how much force and speed can she shoot her earth off with? If we can address this then I can guarantee an approval.

@Kafka Komedy I'm not seeing the trigger moment for him. I definitely know the problem that caused it, but there doesn't appear to be a moment of an actual "trigger," the defining moment that breaks his power out. He's just pissed off and then just sorta builds his robot ears. It flows so casually that it feels like he could always do that. Get me a more defined trigger moment where we can actually see the revelation and we're good to go.
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Aaah... New team, huh... Heh. I would have waited with making my character had I known that would happen. Now Wisp's independent, and on a little quest of her own. Oh, well. That's fun, too.
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There's nothing saying you can't join them.
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In fact they might be able to end up helping you with the current situation.
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... I'd be enthusiastically open to that.

Wisp has no money (so she'd never think to go to such mercenaries), a distrusting personality that I put in her to ensure she didn't go to the Protectorate (so she'd never normally consider joining a team), a stranger power that she hides with (making it hard for others to find her in the first place), and if the other members of the team wants to do other things I wouldn't want to force something unnatural in order to make her come into contact with them, but yeah. I'd happily be open to that. Haha.
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Mercenaries? I'm appaled. The Minutemen are a free local militia the subsides off of donations. Speaking of, we would really appreciate if you donated. It's just, we may not be able to reach you next time without the proper equipment. Here's our card it has the address of our office and our phone number. Feel free to donate, or call, at any time.
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... My bad. I hadn't read that carefully yet. Sorry. XD
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Outsider is approved. Slap him on over.
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Pttttth, hahahahaha. Has no sight and feeds on photons, extra sensitive hearing and such detection methods. Wisp's light-cloak power would be absolutely useless against his breaker form if she was trying to avoid him. Blasting rays of light at him would feed his power instead. Hahaha. Ain't that amusing. If she learns of this, she's going to be absolutely terrified regardless of allegiances. Haha.

Just wanted to comment on that. The thought amused me.
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