The Everlasting Arena: Character Deposit

[drallinix]

That was kind of the point of the character. I guess ill go with Adrian in this one then instead since Karnix is a bit to creepy for ya.

Devil Lord

name: Adrian Sidornis(devil lord)

race: nephilim

age: 20000(appears 19)

height: 6'2

weight: 210 lbs.

Tier: 3

appearance: Standing tall he is 6'2 and looks much like he used to with a few changes. He now has two bestial horns that come from his forehead and curl back. His wings are now black with red blades along the ridges. His eyes now burn a furious scarlet color and the circles under them have deepened. His teeth are longer than they were now becoming fangs. The tattoos that one etched his skin now burn an ethereal red color and seem to brighten and dim at times. His clothing is now entirely different as well. He wears black training pants with red flames embossed along the sides of the legs starting at the feet. His abs are covered in white training wrap that extends under the pants. The chains are gone and now he wears spiked gauntlets on each hand.

biography: Formerly know as Angel he was defeated by Arthur Greystrokes. After his defeat and near death he was drug into hell by his father Lucifer. After being taken to hell he was tortured endlessly for hours at a time. He was also forced to train and fight the spawn of other demons. Time passes differently in hell than it does in the material plane. What could be hours in the material realm can be years there. For 20,000 years he was forced to fight until all that was good in him was abolished. Finally giving in to his demonic blood he grew horns from his head and blades were grafted along the ridges of his wings. The chains on him melted off and his swords were taken and melted into his new weapon. He put on muscle mass and his tattoos started to glow an ethereal red,

Abilities: He retains the power of manipulating ethereal energy.This is a special energy that Adrian can control and is literally the very fabric of hell. This material can be destroyed but doing so isn't very effective due to Adrian's ability to simply summon more of it. It is not recognizable as a state of mass as it takes whatever form Adrian wants it to. The substance burns at a temperature high enough to cremate a man in approximately two minutes, but cannot burn him. He is not immune to fire but cannot be burned by demonic means. It takes very little time for Adrian to summon this unless in extremely large quantities. His favorite uses of it seem to be his armor, making spikes, and assorted other weapons. He can summon this energy from any part of his body and manipulate it. He can summon exactly ten cubic meters of it. This is a rather large volume and he has to charge two turns to do so. He can summon five cubic meters of it instantly. the less energy he summons the more durable it is. Its basic form is like steel, however if he concentrates his energy he can make it as hard as diamond. This requires one turn of charging. It would take him three turns to make a 10 cubic meter box with the hardness of diamonds. Two to gather the energy and one to concentrate it and make it more powerful.
-Armor: This armor is as protective as plate mail with chain mail underneath. However the armor is weightless and can shift its shape as Adrian desires. It can also self repair due to it being made of ethereal energy.

He can also now sense 360 degrees around his body. He can due this because of the ability to sense souls. If a creature or construct has no soul then he cannot sense it.
-he can lift one ton
-he can also move at 150 mph
-he can take some heavy strikes and has around three times the durability of a normal man. He can also block out the majority of pain due to his being tortured and having to fight to the death for twenty thousand years.
-he can launch and maneuver his constructs of energy at mach 1

Weapon:
Devil Kings Mace-This enormous mace is made from Adrian's former swords. They were melted down in the forges of hell and imbued with demonic properties. Finally they were all forged into this one mace there are no others like it. It measures six feet in length with a flanged bladed head at the end. These blades glow a brilliant red and red rune of power glow along the entire weapon. This mace is extremely durable able to snap traditional swords with ease, and burns anything it touches. On top of that durability if the mace is damaged it will regenerate itself if utterly destroyed it will be perfectly fine in three turns. The heat from this mace is hot enough to liquefy steel. Another special property of the mace is its status as the weapon of a devil lord. All demons and angel will know this weapon on sight. If an angel or holy warrior is struck with it then they take double the normal amount of damage they would. If a demon is hit by this weapon it literally takes a blow to its essence. It must be powerful to not be banished to hell in one hit. The level of demon determines how many hits it will take. One hit is all it takes to banish lesser demons. Two are required to banish a demon of standard quality. Finally to banish a greater demon it must be hit by the mace four times.

[TheBiddz]

For an incubus, the eye thing does make sense lore wise. However, in a player controlled environment, an arena sense, it's a bit at odds with everything. Some chickie fighting for her life, glory, and riches beyond belief, probably won't just stop and go "Hmm. That dude's got some killer eyes, Imma go bang." Frankly, a drill penis would be much more useful combat wise, and then LeeRoy has nothing to say about the whole emotion forcing thing.

[LeeRoy]

By champion athletes do you mean boxing or weight lifting? Because that's two totally different veins of strength, though both of which would barely put you into Tier 2.

20x the running speed of a normal human is only 160mph. Again, within the range of Tier 2.

So combine all these abilities with this character and I see this as an upper middle Tier 2 character.

I say that, cause you forgot to give him a tier, or accurate numerical values.

If this is how able he is, I think he'd be acceptable.

[MelonHead]

Schradinger said
He seems like he should be in tier 3 to me, given that he's just under the max in literally every single rating (except skill, where he may very well exceed the max with his ability to strike with melee attack and perform acrobatic feat, heavily implying that he knows them all and can perform them correctly).

Well, that's just not really true, is it, really.

He's actually quite a bit under the durability and speed checks, and his skill is only comparable to a human in every feat he can partake in. (The fact that the skills are more effective due to his superhuman attributes doesn't change his ability to carry out actions any human can do with some practice.)

Hell, I didn't even make him a superhuman sword-fighter, which would be stupid, because everything in Arena is down to my actions anyway, and I know I'm no brilliant sword master.

So yeah, he can deliver the strikes I decide with brilliant (for a human) poise and precision, but considering that's only considered a T0 skill in this system, you're just blatantly wrong eh. Except for the strength check, which I only specified as being able to lift a man (with some effort) with one arm. I would only put his max lift at roughly 800kg.

[LeeRoy]

He's an upper end Tier 2, but still a Tier 2. He's well within the realm of possibilities and I'd say he's accepted.

[Schradinger]

LeeRoy said
By champion athletes do you mean boxing or weight lifting? Because that's two totally different veins of strength, though both of which would barely put you into Tier 2.

20x the running speed of a normal human is only 160mph. Again, within the range of Tier 2.

I would assume he means wrestlers, as that's the example he gives to help quantify the strength.

I was also under the impression that the limit for tier 2 speed was 80mph.

[LeeRoy]

Oops, mighta fucked that sentence up. Yeah, that's a tier 3 then. At nearly twice the speed of a Tier 2.

If he says that all that's accurate, and marks him down as a Tier 3, I'd say he's acceptable.

[Schradinger]

MelonHead said
Well, that's just not really true, is it, really.He's actually quite a bit under the durability and speed checks, and his skill is only comparable to a human in every feat he can partake in. (The fact that the skills are more effective due to his superhuman attributes doesn't change his ability to carry out actions any human can do with some practice.)Hell, I didn't even make him a superhuman sword-fighter, which would be stupid, because everything in Arena is down to my actions anyway, and I know I'm no brilliant sword master.So yeah, he can deliver the strikes I decide with brilliant (for a human) poise and precision, but considering that's only considered a T0 skill in this system, you're just blatantly wrong eh.

Just to clarify, the ability to perform any action a human being can perform isn't a tier 0 feat. Not even close (unless LeeRoy decides otherwise, that is). There are all kinds of humans that can do incredible things that I could never hope to mimic, and yet I'm just as human as they are. Could I deliver a punch with good poise and precision? Sure, but without training and the knowledge of how to properly apply that in a fight, it won't do me any good. Can I move my limbs in the manner required for good grappling skills? Most of the time, yes. But I still can't manage it in a fight until I learn how and practice a ton. Unless a character has actual training or a huge amount of natural talent, their fighting skill shouldn't be anything greater than "I swing my fist at his face and hope for the best", regardless of how well you write the combat.

So while your character may be able to perform any action a human can perform, having him do anything outside of normal day to day movements would require training, and increase that particular stat in his CS. Going for a jog? Tier 0 feat. Fighting like Georges St Pierre? At least a tier 2 feat, if not tier 3.

I just ask that you keep that in mind.

[drallinix]

sure ill make demon king a tier 3.

[LeeRoy]

Tier 0 is your average every day Joe Schmoe walking down the street with no ambition, no talent, and no training.

A Tier 1 is your average unprofessional boxer, or maybe a scrappy street fighter.

A Tier 2 is a professional MMA fighter.

A Tier 3 would be a monk from the mountains, a legendary Samurai. So on and so forth.

Tiers 0 - 3, at least regarding training, are what humans are capable of reaching. A great warrior with trustworthy steel and an iron will could fight on equal terms with the other equal tiered opponents who are maxed out in the other 3 regards. Strength, Speed, and Power.

[Vordak]

Ido

Name: Ido Nagarkal
Age: 126 years (1 year 2 months after possesion)
Race: Demon possesed undead Beastman
Height: 8' 8"
Weight: 340 lb

Tier: 4

Appearance

Ido's body has a robust and bulky look, the large, round form of his muscles swelling
underneath a layer of fat and matted fur, the rough texture and dark grey color of which makes him remniscent of a granite statue - heavy and rough. His face is covered by a black leather mask, reinforced by a hard carpace from the inside and held by straps in such a manner that it would let the lower jaw move freely; his body - by an crimson Atilla jacket and black, slightly baggy trousers. On his hands and feet are a pair of gloves and boots, the latter of which also have golden buckles.

Psychological Description

Ido aspires to be a calm and observant person, remaining collected in the most harsh of situations and carefuly weighing each decision he takes. A stubborn and self-sufficient person, he belives himself to be able to overcome any obstacles in pursuit of his goals on his own and constantly trains his mind and body so that this would hold true. Despite being a demonic warrior, he is not neccesarily cruel or violent, but nevertheless, Ido shows no mercy to his opponents, slightly less empathic than most dwellers of the physical realm.

Traits & Powers

Natural Traits

• Strength, speed & stamina: the body of Ido retains it's natural prowess and might, enabling him to lift up to 3 tons overhead and dash at speeds up to 85 MPH. Naturaly enhanced metabolism prevents the buildup of chemical reaction products for long periods of time, muscle retaining its peak condition throughout half an hour of fighting at its least.



• Durability: thanks to a strong bond between his magical nature and physiology, Ido, as Beastman, has over 70% of his body mass and 40% of volume occupied by inorganic materials, constantly renwed by his inner magic field. His bones are made of a complex metal alloy, scoring an 8 on the Mohs scale of while having a certain amount of flexebility, allowing them to completely absorb the shock from small arms fire and take a few blows from an evenly matched melee fighter. The muscle tissue and internal organs are also much more resistant than that of a human, but not to the same extent as his bones, being composed mainly of organics.



• Regeneration: the combination of magical and biological processes result in greatly increased regeneration speed, recovering small amounts of tissue even within combat. Over the duration of 2 posts, Ido's body can seal minor cuts, cracked bones, restore ~1 litre of blood and minor organ rupture. Until the 5th post, the regeneration will continue, healing even more damage, up to fourth degree burns and broken bones. Anything that requires to restore over 20 lb of tissue or metal can be healed only out of combat, such as severed limbs.
  
  This ability, however, does not affect brain cell damage, so a blow to the head will instantly kill Ido. Heart faliure over a prolonged period of time will deprive the brain of oxygen, also resulting in death, but this can only be caused by heavy injury that requires over 2 ticks of healing.



• Organs of perception: Ido was born an unusual mental condition - synethesia - which interwines the signals of sensory organs. For a long time, he had no control over this phenomen, but through meditation and mental strengthening, Ido gained the ability to establish and break those connections at will. Linking various organs of perception together, Ido can create a highly accurate map of the surrounding area or increase the intensity of a chosen sense.
  
  On their own, most of his senses are abnormaly acute: all of his fur, akin to a cat's whiskers, allows him to unconciously percive even the slightest changes in pressure, picking up even subtle movement's of one's fingers within half a foot; his nose is sensitive enough to pick up just a few molecules within a 1000 litres of air; ears can hear the creaking of leather within 550 yards and his eyes can detect the thrumming of arcane energies within 110 yards. However, his sight is greatly impeded, Ido suffering from severe hindsight and highly sensitive to bright light.

Demonic Powers

• Saro Ghan: this spell's serves the purpose of obscuring the caster from his opponent, creating a 15x15x15 foot, pitch black area which dampens, captures and redirects sound, while also being able to absorb low energy emisions the whole electromagnetic spectrum and magical fields, tampering with means of detection and slightly weakening attacks. However, anybody who happens to enter this area also loses contact with the surrounding world, so it is to be used with caution. The barrier can be instantly cast anywhere within 500 feet of the caster and lasts for two posts, including the one which it is casted. After it dissapates, there is a 2 post cooldown before it can be used again.



• Jude Tan Kzich:a special technique of Ido, it allows him to create and manipulate a unique liquid, which has both shear thickening and flameable properties. Aside from being able to freely move the liquid around, accelerating it up to 240 MPH in a straight line (projectile form, that is) and 50 MPH with a complex trajectory, Ido can change the critical shear point, which determines the amount of force needed for the liquid to begin thicknening, prevent the the liquid from combusting at will at the cost of a two tick charge and generate up to 500 celcius heat within it. Ido can generate 25 litres of it per turn; the liquid itself burns at 900 celcius, ingites at 400 and can absorb the energy of a handgun shot when formed into a 4 inch thick layer.



• Bumillj: a spell cast in form of a palm strike, it emits a short, high freqency sonic blast, powerful enough to cause severe organ rupture through direct contact. The wave's power quickly degrades over distance, causing only nausea and light pain at 30 feet. Charging does not effect the output of the blast, but increases the optimal striking distance by 1 foot and maximum range by 15 feet per charge.

Equipment

Jetpack: otherwise nothing more than a chunk of metal, this jetpack uses Kzich, the liquid created by Ido, and oxygen within the air as fuel and oxidizer. The tube is turned at an angle to Ido's back, so that instead of pushing him upwards, it would allow him to accelerate horizontaly, achiveing a speed of 180 MPH in a straight line. Unfortunately, neither does it feature brakes, nor any means of chainging direction, but it is provided with thermal isolation and a cooler, which is powered by a rechargable accumulator.

[LOCKED]

Axes: favoring adaptivity, Ido has a total of four axes, two of which are bearded axes with large heads and curved blades, as good at slashing as they are at chopping. Their handles measure 6 feet in length and the blades a third of that. Best suited for crushing armor are the two other axes - with smaller blades and longer handles - 8 feet - they are similar to pollaxes. The blade of one follows after the Ono axe, while the other resmelbes a tomahawk.

The axes are compund, with a ceramic cutting edge and dense, flexible metal core, the two parts bound together by a fibrous micro lattice: this improves the blade's shock resistance and allows for superb sharpness as well. At the same time, the use of advanced materials increases their weight, each axe weighing around 30 pounds.

Bearded Axes: [LOCKED]

Backpack & belt: simple and sturdy, the backpack is used by Ido to carry around his axes, and the belt holds the grenades and Blood Fang's sheath.

Smokebombs & Flashbangs: nothing special about these. Ido carries 5 of each on his belt.

BLOOD FANG: the Blood Fang, formerly a bounty hunter's knife, it is enhanted to be able to track down prey by their blood. Once it is given a portion of a being's blood, the being is labeled as its target, Blood Fang showing their location to its user. Unless they have means to combat magical detection, there is nothing one can do to escape from an owner of such a weapon other than to somehow switch it to a diffrent target. The knife itself is made of iron, has a straight blade, 6 inch long and 2 inch wide at the base.

History & Motif

Ido comes from an ancient demonic dynasty, occupying the role of a powerful astral warrior within his realm. However, his constant yearning for new experiences and knowledge have pushed him to leave the astral and explore the physical realm within a possesed body. Years had passed since his first venture, and now, Ido has decided not only to join the famed Everlasting Arena, but to do so in one of the more extravagant bodie he could posess.

[Tantalum]

Mikael

Name: Mikael Ades
Age: 20
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 132lb

Physical Description:
Mikael appears as a young, pale-skinned human with a thin and fairly toned build. His rounded face is complimented by his straight reddish-brown hair of medium length. His eyes are wide and piercing; rings of firey red, encompassing his jet-black, over-dilated pupils.
He wears a sturdy brown bomber jacket, with a crimson long-sleeved shirt underneath, desert-camouflage trousers and a modern pair of black hiking trainers. A singed, fingerless leather glove is worn over his right hand.

Psychological Description:
Loud, uncooperative, self-centred and somewhat deranged. Mikael appears to take nothing he encounters seriously, and is rarely one to submit to authority.
He lives to enjoy anarchy, and desires power only to partake in greater chaos. He claims to have no personal objective, and garners satisfaction in learning what makes others tick. The thrills of fighting and sabotage have since become his only pastimes, and the promise of either may be the only sure-fire way to hold his attention.
He moves with a quirky, yet confident gait, and shivers with hyperactivity. His voice is rich yet obnoxious, shifting tones with each sentence.

Tier: 2

Powers/Abilities/Skills:

tl;dr: Parkour, High Stamina, Plasma Explosives.

Natural Abilities:
•Heightened Agility: Mikael's jumping, balance and wall-scaling abilities are exceptional for human standards, but only bordering supernatural. His legs are pretty strong, and he is able to take a 12ft fall without harm. His upper body strength lacks in comparison, but is enough to hold his own weight for an hour.
•Hand-to-Hand Proficiency: Mikael's experienced fighting style adopts Muay Thai influences, favouring highly precise kicks and elbow strikes. He is no master of the art, but he can certainly hold his own.
•Weapons Knowledge:Though vastly lacking experience, Mikael is well-versed in how modern firearms and blades are used in combat, and understands the basics of using various pistols and rifles.

---

Engineered Abilities:
•PlasTec Conversion: The PlasTec Gene, in brief, was the result of a discovery to fuse an illustrious synthesized material with the human body. Though labelled as a gene, the alterations caused by it stretch beyond biological effects, altering the very laws by which the inheritor interacts with the world. Little is truly known about the material itself, and though It is assumed that different and more extreme variations exist, they have yet to be proven in practice.

Shared by all PlasTec users, any plasma, fire, lightning and non-elemental magic entering Mikael's immediate range, affects him as raw kinetic energy instead. Rather than being burned or electrocuted by such attacks, Mikael is propelled forcefully by them.

Successful PlasTec conversions often result in anomalies unique to a given individual. Research has been made to stabilise their occurrence, but to no avail. Mikael's own anomalies are listed as follows:

•PlasTec Anomaly Unique-003 [Battery]: Mikael can store impossible masses of energy within his bloodstream at a time, enough to render his physical and plasma abilities unlimited (except by his respiration). The substance within his veins is incredibly thick; he bleeds slowly as a result, and objects which puncture him are slowed to an extent. His heart rate rarely falls below 100 beats per minute, and may in fact be heard by human ear.
•PlasTec Anomaly Common-007 [Alert]: Mikael has an artificially heightened sense of awareness. Changes in his surroundings, or of people he has met, will rarely go unnoticed by him. Likewise, he has a solid grasp of his mental and physical status, letting him swiftly notice changes such as poisoning or hidden injuries.

---

Engineered Powers:
•PlasTec Concept 001 [Sphere]: The first and simplest PlasTec weapon, developed and programmed into Mikael's genetics after the PlasTec conversion was successful. Due to its high stamina use, Mikael's 'Battery' anomaly has made him the only person capable of using the Concept effectively.

Mikael's signature power lets him form neon-purple spheres of plasma that have explosive force. They grow in size as Mikael charges them, which in turn increases their damage, durability and blast radius. They are less lethal than conventional explosives, e.g. a hand grenade, but will inflict knockback, burning and minor electrocution upon anyone caught by them.

Mikael charges these 'Energy Spheres' at a rate of 3ft diameter per tick, or 5ft if charging a sphere with both hands; the latter of these is considerably more exhausting. Their weight and durability can be compared to hardened glass -- yet, due to their being plasma, Mikael alone is able to shift them with relative ease.

Once having released a sphere, Mikael may detonate it instantly, or after a timer dependant on the sphere's size (a 5ft sphere = a 5-second timer before detonating). The explosion's size is also proportional to the size of a sphere (5ft sphere = 15ft blast radius). Alternatively, Energy Spheres will detonate if enough force is applied to shatter them.

Finally, these Energy Spheres share properties with Mikael's 'PlasTec Conversion'. This means that a blast from a Plasma Sphere may launch another sphere -- or Mikael himself -- at a heightened speed, without causing direct damage. By standing at the centre of a blast, Mikael can propel himself at up to 10 mph times the sphere's size. Spheres smaller or larger than Mikael can be launched at higher or lower speeds, respectively.

Equipment:
•A post-modern combat knife, 5 inches in blade length with a charcoal finish. It is either kept sheathed on his belt, or wielded in his left hand. Its materials are highly refined and robust, and the blade is a little thicker than most.
•His jacket is made from a sturdy leather, his trousers fireproof, and his shoes notably resistant to wear.
•Often carries one or several caffeinated beverages on his person.

History:
The youngest of three orphaned siblings, brought into an unnamed research project following the aftermath of a nuclear apocalypse. As the few survivors underwent altered genetics from the planet's radiation, it was discovered that a select few were compatible with the PlasTec Gene; a nigh-magical technology discovered long before the incident, but which no human was able to utilise prior.

In return for their shelter and newfound power, authorities behind the project expected the subjects to aid in their cause of ending the current world anarchy. Mikael however, who inherited the most destructive PlasTec Concept, was one of few who declined. In direct conflict with his eldest sibling, a fight arose -- causing damage across a city-wide scale, and obliterating the research base in the process. The few remaining authorities and factions branded PlasTec wielders as threats, and all that were involved were forced to scatter.

Mikael enters the Everlasting Arena as a playground to test his widely unexplored powers, and in high hopes of encountering a foe who could compare to his older brother. As an extra, any fame he garners could only help in guiding the many dozen stragglers who still seek revenge for their exile, whom he equally anticipates.

[LeeRoy]

You neglected to mention his physical strength, Tantalum.

Drall, your character is accepted.

[drallinix]

I would like to submit this character as a tier 3 entry and would enjoy playing him more than Adrian.

name: Storm

gender: male

age: 19

size/weight: He is 6'2 and weighs 210 pounds with his armor on.

appearance:

race: augmented human.

Tier: 4

equipment:

armor

This armor is made of regular cloth and leather. It holds no special properties, but due to his strength it does not hinder movement at all.

sword

This weapon is his only weapon other than his natural attributes. He was raised using this weapon and is a master of it in all rights and regards. It is extremely durable, and fires .50 caliber rounds. These bullets travel at high velocity, and come from a barrel that runs along the spine of the blade. This sword is always as sharp as a razor and cannot be dulled. He always carries at least 20 shots for his gunblade with him.

bike

This bike can move up to 700 mph. However when riding at that speed Storm cannot fight and must focus all of his attention on driving. He can fight at 600 mph and can also drive while doing so. He has been locked in intense battles astride this bike before and is therefore able to maneuver it and fight astride it naturally.

stats/ abilities: These are due to the disease he was born with. However when he received Martyr training they enhanced them even further. On top of this the augmentations he went through during Martyr training stopped his aging process.

strength: He is able to lift seven tons and throw it with effort. He can lift up to nine tons but must remain stationary to do so.

speed: He is extremely fast and can barely be seen when in combat. To a normal human he would appear as nothing more than a blur of black and silver. His gunblade bringing death and desolation. His maximum sprinting speed is around 300 miles per hour. He can swing his sword fast enough to block bullets and his reaction time is fast enough to allow him to do so.

Endurance: His body underwent changes during the process of becoming a Martyr and the disease changed it as well. He can take multiple shots from handguns and rifles, but with enough fire they can bring him down. He has the same vital spots as humans but his muscle is denser and harder to cut through. He does have to rely on skill, because if someone does shoot him enough he can and will die.

dexterity: He is able to multi task effortlessly. He can shoot and fight with his gunblade while moving 600 miles an hour on his motorcycle. His reaction time is almost instantaneous able to analyze a situation and react in mere fractions of a second.

bio: He was born with an extremely rare disease that killed all but .5 percent of those who got it. However those who survived were immune to toxins, and had enhanced attributes for all of their lives. A government discovered these people and using them as what they called "Martyrs" took over the world. Storm was raised as a child to be one of these Martyrs. He was one and underwent all of the training, he even ecame one of the best amongst their ranks. As he trained and grew up he had two friends that followed him. When Storm finally saw the corruption of the government he broke away and started a revolution. One of his friends followed, but the other a boy named Creed did not. Creed remained loyal to the government and led their armies against Storm and his few followers. The second of Storm's friends was named Revelation. They met on the battlefield and though Revelation disarmed Creed he couldn't bring himself to kill him. Creed quickly grabbed his blade and plunged it into Revelations heart. Seeing his closest childhood friends fighting and then seeing the one he considered a brother murdered before him Storm snapped. His anger turned to bloodlust. Storm and Creed met upon the battlefield surrounded by burning corpses and broken memories. Storm's rage granted him strength that even Creed couldn't match and Creed was defeated. Creed begged for mercy at Storms feet, but the Storm cared not. Storm plunged his blade deep into Creed's heart and then pulled the trigger ending his life. Thus ended the revolution Storm had lost. All of his men were dead and there was nothing left but to run. So Storm disappeared and now searches for a way to end this government.

lootable items: He carries four stones that each glow with a mystical aura. These stones each allow the user to augment a weapon of theirs with a particular element of its stone. He can only use one of those stones and it is unlootable it is the fire stone. However there are three that are earth, wind, and water. He cannot use these, but if another combatant defeats him they can take them and use them. When used the allow the weapon to fire or throw lines of them at an opponent.

stones:
(non lootable) fire: This allows the user to project an incendiary blast from the weapon. In the case of Storm it allows his blade to fire flaming bullets. These bullets burn at 2200 degrees Celsius. This does not alter the round it still has all the power of a normal bullet with the added burning benefits
.
earth: allows the user to slam the object into the ground making a line of spikes jut out towards the target. The line of spikes is three times the length of the weapon augmented and the spikes are the size of the weapon.

Water: the user can make their weapon throw lines of water at the opponent like whips that cut them. They can only make one whip at a time and it is nine feet long maximum.

air: the user can sheathe their weapon in wind making an ultra fine cutting blade. On top of this they can make the weapon deliver gusts of wind with each slash. The wind speed on these gusts are roughly 40 mph.

[Tantalum]

Further

LeeRoy said
You neglected to mention his physical strength, Tantalum. Drall, your character is accepted.

Added a couple sentences on his general strength, and clarified his powers a little better.
Edit: Also expanded on his equipment a little. He really doesn't have much to take, so I'll opt not to lock any of it.

[Lalliman]

Creed and Revelation? There's a pun to be had there.

My humble contribution: the info on those lootable stones is rather vague. I assume the fire stone makes the sword hot, but how hot? And the others are even vaguer. How do you infuse a weapon with earth? Does it turn into stone? That doesn't seem beneficial. It seems far more logical to replace water with ice too.

[Green]

So.. Storm is basically a final fantasy character? Gunblades, and Materia-.. Err, I mean, elemental stones.

You probably want to add a mention about his durability. Sure, he's strong and fast, but what happens if someone drives a truck into his face? Also, the ability to utilize big weapons doesn't exactly tell us how strong he actually is. Should probably elaborate.

An extremely augmented human is no different from an augmented human, in terms of racial profiling. You'll be better of calling him an augmented human. Since that's basically what he is. (In the same sense that a -really- strong superhuman wouldn't be called an extremely super human. And a heavily modified cyborg wouldn't be called an Extreme cyborg.

[drallinix]

I wrote the character at two in the morning and extremely augmented is fine man I mesn maybe it's just a grammar thing but it's still my char and if I wanna say that he is extremely augmented I csn. But yeah when I get back from school I'll add more on the stones and his strength

[Green]

drallinix said
I wrote the character at two in the morning and extremely augmented is fine man I mesn maybe it's just a grammar thing but it's still my char and if I wanna say that he is extremely augmented I csn. But yeah when I get back from school I'll add more on the stones and his strength

Eh. It was just an advice. No need to get defensive. If you wanna call your augmented human an extremely augmented human, you're well within your right to do so. It's just the sort of thing other characters are going to react to. Like calling a cyborg a manborg, other characters are likely to go "So.. what's the difference exactly?" - If you don't mind that, then go right ahead.

[LeeRoy]

Mikael is accepted, Tantalum

A couple things are needed to accept Storm, but let's start simple.

An indestructible sword? No. That's beyond a Tier 10 piece of equipment, as indestructible isn't allowed even at the highest possible tier.