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Guess what?! It’s that time again! The entries from the 2nd-ever RPGC are in, and we’ve got an awesome bunch this time around! The task of reviewing may be a bit less daunting this time, but it’s still just as important!
Please go here to review voting and review guidelines. I know, I know, you’ve done this before, you know all those rules. Humor me.
Just a couple of things before the entries are revealed.
1: A lot of authors have put in amazing quantities of effort into composing their pieces. But they cannot grow as authors without feedback. THIS IS WHERE YOU, YES YOU! CAN HELP!! Seriously, though. The reviews are probably the most beneficial part of this contest. Any input that you can provide will be immensely appreciated.
2: This time around, we’re trying something NEW! Entries have been posted, to the author’s request, as either anonymous or “nonymous” to encourage discussion. I encourage all of you to tag those authors that you are reviewing.
… And that’s that. Goodness. I certainly don’t beat around the bush.
Anyway. Drumroll please…..
I Present….
THE ENTRIES!














THAT’S NOT ALL OF THE ENTRIES! DON’T MISS THE REST OF THESE ENTRIES TO BE FOUND IN THE POST IMMEDIATELY FOLLOWING THIS ONE!
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And this concludes the entries!
If I forgot your entry or screwed up on anonymity/nonymity, please mention it to me and/or complain loudly in this thread and/or notify @mdk that I am unfit for this assignment, and know that I am terribly, terribly sorry for the oversight.
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So begins the great nonymous experiment. A friendly reminder before we start -- feedback is crucial, all the more so when it's something you don't want to hear as an author. We're in this together as Fonz-cool writers helping Fonz-cool writers. We haven't tried this with names before, and we're not sure how it's going to play out, but I'm standing by to help resolve any conduct issues. I'm not here to make people say nicer things -- that would cheapen the feedback! But if you feel like a line is being crossed at any time, you can contact me directly.
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Dedonus Kai su teknon;

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Feedback: 10 / 12 Prose

Spoilers in hiders, so if you haven't read an entry, don't look in the hider! :D

@Author


@Kurai Assassin


@Psyga315


@Anonymous


@ScienMalefica


@NewSun


@WiseDragonGirl


@elitestpotato


@PlatinumSkink


@Ellri


@Alice
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I went out of my way to try to write as short a story as possible while still writing as normal and satisfying my story-sense. My conclusion;

It is impossible to write a short conversation.

It still became long. XD

Not as long as *points*, buuut... XD
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I went out of my way to try to write as short a story as possible while still writing as normal and satisfying my story-sense. My conclusion;

It is impossible to write a short conversation.

It still became long. XD

Not as long as *points*, buuut... XD


the struggle is real. Brevity is the soul of wit -- I think I'm somewhat witty, but apparently I have no soul.
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Loksfjoer Lucky flame

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Length-wise I managed to write my average length for a short story, around 5 pages in word.

Deadline for the reviews/voting is the 31th of May, right?
I hope I can find the time to provide decent feedback for everything. All I can promise is that I'll do my best to get it done.
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Impressions of the short stories, RPGC2. We'll not cut back on things, but neither will we be unnecessarily harsh (we think). They do appear to be somewhat shorter towards the end. We did not provide reviews of any of the poetry, as we're no poet or critic of such. It would not be fair.


















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Huh. Those are gonna be some plot holes for me to fill.
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No doubt you'll figure it out.
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Second-post reviews are ready, so have a batch! I'm saving @Keyguyperson for later because it takes me a while to be constructive over such a long piece.

@Alice


@Dedonus


@Keyguyperson




@RomanAria


@Dark Wind




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phase two, 5/23

@PlatinumSkink


@Ellri


@Elitestpotato




@WiseDragonGirl


@Darcs


@NewSun


@ScienMalefica




@Psyga315


@Kurai Assassin


@Ellri



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Tip Prime example

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I just want to say I enjoyed reading your story. 'Tis good.
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Kurai Assassin Edgelord

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@Tip Thank you very much
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Ellri Lord of Eat / Relic

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not much activity in this thread...
@RomanAria, @mdk, do you think it could help to get a thread to make this more visible in the news section?

These days, Mahz' Dev Journal isn't very active, so a thread there will be more visible than it otherwise is. (mostly that thread is kept active by 3-4 people posting every few days to keep it from dying)

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yeah, was planning on doing that. I'm a little busy ATM but I'll get something up shortly.
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No worries.
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PlatinumSkink

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Alright, done with nine out of seventeen. I want to post all of them in one fell swoop, no discrimination against those with entries first or last or in the middle of the list. All of them at the same time. I'm done with over half of them. Let's check the next-

*opens tenth hider*

... ... ... ... ... ... ...

Being done with over half the entries does NOT mean I have read over half the words. XD
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It is now we should whistle innocently, yes?

Ours is only the second longest, @PlatinumSkink, so have no fear.
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I'm going to be starting with the poetry, once I get done obsessing over clarinet practice.
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