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Side Note: Just after righting the majority of this noticed that Nightingale is also an Energy Manipulator but I personally believe that they are significantly different. But it is up to you if you think they are too similar
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Only just saw this now: as I'm not a GM, I can't really dictate to you what should be changed, but hopefully we can come to an agreement.
I love the character, but yes, I do think she is far too similar to Nightingale. Both in terms of skills and powers. Again, I can't force you to change her things, but perhaps a bit of tweaking may be necrssary to find more significant differences beteren the two.
Also - these are just a few discrepancies I picked up on while reading - you've stated at one point that her mother was Russian, and at another that she was English. I'm also confused as to how she's picked up that many languages so fluently - not just because of her age, but the fact she's been in a mental hospital for so long. Crazy houses don't give language lessons, from what I know.
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Only just saw this now: as I'm not a GM, I can't really dictate to you what should be changed, but hopefully we can come to an agreement.
I love the character, but yes, I do think she is far too similar to Nightingale. Both in terms of skills and powers. Again, I can't force you to change her things, but perhaps a bit of tweaking may be necrssary to find more significant differences beteren the two.


Do you have any ideas because I can't see a way of changing it without just changing her powers?

Also - these are just a few discrepancies I picked up on while reading - you've stated at one point that her mother was Russian, and at another that she was English.


Thanks for pointing it out, I changed a little of the back story late on and I was a little out of it yesterday

I'm also confused as to how she's picked up that many languages so fluently - not just because of her age, but the fact she's been in a mental hospital for so long. Crazy houses don't give language lessons, from what I know.


My belief is due to the fact that she was in contact with a large number of people from different nationalities during her childhood. Children that are raised learning more than one language have a much higher affinity to learn more especially if they pick these up while they are young but I can tone it down
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Sorry, I've been so swamped the past week, but now I'm back and better than ever! Aside from what Roze has mentioned, the bio looks okay, but yeah, update when you have tweaked the parts that need changing and perhaps revised your powers a bit. If both parties agree, I don't mind two having the same or similiar powers, it could be interesting and bring out alot of arcs regarding who's 'better' or if one has use and the other doesn't, but that's entirely between the both of you.

Also, if Anna's powers are not completely controlled yet, aka her still drawing in heat, maybe you'd like to go with something that cuts off the powers or blocks it from potentially harming other students, like the radiation suit that Hazmat had, but way more downplayed.

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@MiddleEarthRoze @knighthawk @Carlsberg Intro arc will be starting soon once, if you know of anyone still wanting to join, just drag them over here. Either way, prepare your characters.
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Me too! Thanks for accepting me. Super excited :) @tenebrae16

I'm also thinking of creating another character - a daughter of Tony Stark, maybe? Would this be possible? Thought it might be interesting with the daughter of Justin Hammer ;) Not completely decided, though. I might also think of Wolverine or Mystique.

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Me too! Thanks for accepting me. Super excited :) @tenebrae16

I'm also thinking of creating another character - a daughter of Tony Stark, maybe? Would this be possible? Thought it might be interesting with the daughter of Justin Hammer ;) Not completely decided, though. I might also think of Wolverine or Mystique.


Generally, we try not to make characters too close to canon main characters. Justin hammer I think is still possible, but connections to him or to any villainous parent has to be closely monitored. Either they've disassociated themselves from their parent or they are going undercover, which at least I or Castiel has to know.
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Oh no, I meant that there might be some interesting awkwardness/conflict if I made a daughter of Stark since we already have a daughter of Justin Hammer. :P

So, they should be minor heroes/villains if we wish to have canon fathers/mothers?
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Preferably, but I won't stop anyone going for canon characters, however, they will be more closely monitored and you have to understand that some story lines may not be well known to others if you want to implement them and that it may conflict with that of other's storylines as well.
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Oh no, that's all fine! I might not even do it anyway. :)
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Side Note: Just after righting the majority of this noticed that Nightingale is also an Energy Manipulator but I personally believe that they are significantly different. But it is up to you if you think they are too similar


I do have a question: did you read the other characters' that have been accepted bios?
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So sorry everyone! Got bogged down by the flu for a while!
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Hope you can get your profile updated soon, but the thread will start over this weekend with intros and getting to know each other and the roommate roulette. Thoughts on allowing mix gender roommates? Call it a clerical error.
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Mixed gender roomies sounds like fun
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@tenebrae16 Why not? x'D It will be chaos~!
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So sorry I've been racing around like a mad man in meetings and lectures. I'll tinker with the form after my lecture this morning!

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I do have a question: did you read the other characters' that have been accepted bios?


Yes I did. I have just had this character for a couple of years from an old mutants and masterminds campaign. I altered her for this form and then read the others. That's why it was pretty much done when I found out the similarities

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Made a few edits based on the suggestions! I've changed her powers so she cannot shape the energy just use it as a burst or shot but i can't see how else to change it without not giving her energy powers

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So sorry I've been racing around like a mad man in meetings and lectures. I'll tinker with the form after my lecture this morning!

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Yes I did. I have just had this character for a couple of years from an old mutants and masterminds campaign. I altered her for this form and then read the others. That's why it was pretty much done when I found out the similarities


We've all been busy so don't sweat it at all!

Well, I don't want to be that person, but her and Nick's pasts are a little too similar, in regards to Cap, and so a changing of that would be appreciated.
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ayy @tenebrae16 Is this still happening?
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ayy @tenebrae16 Is this still happening?


Definitely, we're working on the intro. The only excuse I can give is that the week's been ultra busy. Kinda lame, but true sadly.
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