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Fun fact, Undead get taxreductions!


Dang Liches and their nepotism. I knew we shouldn't have let them on the city council.
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"We are dead. We can't expected to pay taxes!"
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"We are dead. We can't expected to pay taxes!"


"But didn't I see you shopping in that magic shop yesterday? You paid sales tax."
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I added the History part! And that's Kepli Grub all done! Woo!
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I like this concept and may be interested if you're still accepting~ My character might be up in 2 days or tomorrow night (I'm in Japan so keep that in mind please.) ^^
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@sakurasan You still have time!
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@Flynn

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Omg sorry, I didn't mean to post in the Character tab!
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@Legion02If he can just leave without the mages taking legal action, I don't think he's technically a slave, or even an indentured servant. His backstory makes him more of a standard servant that was just treated poorly by his employer.
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You are gonna need to work a little bit more on the backstory. Flesh it out a bit. But it is a solid start. I really like the tone of your writing!

Also, you should look trough it more carefully. It has the need of grammar and spellcheck. More then a few places that looks rushed and rough.
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I may or may not have gotten to excited and already have most of the IC post pre-written.
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I may or may not have gotten to excited and already have most of the IC post pre-written.


*perks up*

I'm really hyped about this rp. Can't wait for it to start!
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@TheUnknowable Apologies. The OOC said: "This ensures the magicians are either people of wealth or practically indentured servants to the guild. One way to escape such a service is becoming a guard." So I thought that leaving the guild to join the city guard was a way to not be legally prosecuted. Then again, it could also be that the service done for the mages guild could also be delivered to the guards, I guess. Could you shed some light on this because I Probably miss-read something?

@Hellis I will admit that the backstory is rather hastily written. I also did not have access to a spell checker of any kind. So my sincere apologies for this. With any luck, I can improve the grammar tomorrow. When TheUnknowalbe (or you) explained the magic guild situation a little I'll try to expand the back story.
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The indentured service part is that they basicly own you due to your debts to the Guild. These endentured mages are occasionally lent to the Guard, as a way to work off their debts.
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The indentured service part is that they basicly own you due to your debts to the Guild. These endentured mages are occasionally lent to the Guard, as a way to work off their debts.


Ah! So in theory, an indentured mage apprentice could also be lent out to the guards?
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@Legion02 Yes. Usually reserved for people they really don't believe has any hope in making them money. So like your farmerboy.
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Perfect! I'll rewrite my character tomorrow!
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make sure you flesh it out a bit. Who was his parents, how was life, what drove him to go to the city. Stuff like that helps fill out and give us a better picture of who he is.
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You know what. Fuck it. I am kicking us off.

WE WILL STILL BE TAKING ON MORE PLAYERS. THE POST CYCLE IS I WEEKS FROM NOW. GET YOUR CHARACTER IN BEFORE THEN AND WE ARE GOLDEN.
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i.e Too excited for life.
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