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The first part of the collab is up, finally.

Still only like... A fourth of everything that goes on in around that collab.

Part 1 of 4 or 5 of the end of White Knights/Black Stars arc!

Finally.

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Btw, people involved in the collab, look over it because it is edited and changed around some. I kept the dialogue basically the same, but some actions and lines are cut or re-worded.


It all seems good so far.
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Good!

No idea when the next part will be up. Editing four to six simultaneous fights in a way that makes sense is like... Pick a cliche.
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@Burthstone Reminds me, we need to make the ending a little less...cut and dry.
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@Zarkun You mean like how they're just back and Jarvis is like "Welcome back!" and it ends?
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@Zarkun You mean like how they're just back and Jarvis is like "Welcome back!" and it ends?


That and the lack of any real confrontation between Damian and Greggory, and everyone just letting Melina leave with Iron Enigma.
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Hmm... is this immortal thread still open? o.o ~
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@Zarkun How much of a confrontation do you mean/want?
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Hmm... is this immortal thread still open? o.o ~


It is indeed good sir. And a good point to join, since the Grand Magic Games arc is finally at an end.
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@Zarkun How much of a confrontation do you mean/want?


I don't know, maybe more of an argument. I mean, essentially what we have now is a "You're a jerk" and the response is essentially "You're an ass." Nothing actually confrontational.
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Hey @Burthstone, I'm not sure if I missed something, but since Leslie left, did you have something planned with Luna while she was working with the Council?
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I don't know, maybe more of an argument. I mean, essentially what we have now is a "You're a jerk" and the response is essentially "You're an ass." Nothing actually confrontational.


Fair enough. Shall we just... re-do that conversation in the collab?

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Uhh, we have a collab where she joins them, but I'm not sure what I'm going to do after that.
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<Snipped quote by Zarkun>

Fair enough. Shall we just... re-do that conversation in the collab?

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Uhh, we have a collab where she joins them, but I'm not sure what I'm going to do after that.


Okay, because I was thinking about some of my characters and what they are currently doing and what they might do in the future. I had a thought of maybe Grane could send her off on some mission for the Council or something. But again, just a thought, I don't really have fully fleshed enough out idea yet. But are you interested in a possibl idea like that?
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[This collab is too damn long.]


Long? Pish tosh, I've had toenails longer then that. XD
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<Snipped quote by Burthstone>

Okay, because I was thinking about some of my characters and what they are currently doing and what they might do in the future. I had a thought of maybe Grane could send her off on some mission for the Council or something. But again, just a thought, I don't really have fully fleshed enough out idea yet. But are you interested in a possibl idea like that?


Yeah I'm indeed interested in such things, since I actually kinda like Luna...

Also, things are going to happen in the future that are going to significantly impact Luna's character, and it'd be a shame if she couldn't do anything.

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Long? Pish tosh, I've had toenails longer then that. XD


You've had 100,000 character long toenails?
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<Snipped quote by Zarkun>

Fair enough. Shall we just... re-do that conversation in the collab?

EDIT:@Expolar

Uhh, we have a collab where she joins them, but I'm not sure what I'm going to do after that.


We can. Would probably be best.
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<Snipped quote by Expolar>

Yeah I'm indeed interested in such things, since I actually kinda like Luna...

Also, things are going to happen in the future that are going to significantly impact Luna's character, and it'd be a shame if she couldn't do anything.

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You've had 100,000 character long toenails?


Darn it, I was hoping you wouldn't take it seriously

Eh-hem

I read back through what I wrote, and I found myself thinking "Wow! Did I really write that?!" I love how Valak is turning out, and I can't wait to develop him more.

Edit: Hmm...the question is, where would he be now...?
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@Crimson Raven Uhm, well, uh, hate to possibly rain on your parade but...

Most everything anyone did, including myself, was edited (Not what was said though).

Unless your reading through the original, in which case: Yes, yes you did really write that. Otherwise, only maybe.

Also... Tense errors...
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@Burthstone
Now that I think about, I remember that the collab started a long time ago. Do you remember long ago it was started?

And cool, if you have any ideas, just PM. We could try start what ever we have planned in the IC if you want it to be during the current time. Or we can do a collab and set the event in another date in the future of the RP.
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Why are you all so chatty at near 10pm my time ;____;
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@Crimson Raven Uhm, well, uh, hate to possibly rain on your parade but...

Most everything anyone did, including myself, was edited (Not what was said though).

Unless your reading through the original, in which case: Yes, yes you did really write that. Otherwise, only maybe.

Also... Tense errors...


Tense errors happen, but I'm reading the original too. After I noticed the changes in the post. :P

Don't worry, every one on my parade brings umbrellas.

Edit: Just so you know, I'm fine with the changes.
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