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@Saber For sure!
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@EmpressAPPRPOVED. As always, be responsible with ya powers. Aurelia can be moved to the caharacter tab.
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Well, I did something

Edit: changed some small things to make her "unnatural luck" trait easier to understand.
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@13org I'm not the GM and it's probably none of my business at all, but if someone else was turned down for making reference to "The Monkey King," making similar reference to the Cheshire Cat will probably net you the same ridicule:

The character looks good, but I'd prefer changes in the Title. Maybe something that isn't based directly on an already existing story.
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Again, I'm not the GM, nor pretending to be. But I bet fixing it now will save some time when she reads the app later.
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Actually, the reference is only on the name of the power (not even her title) nothing more (originally it would be called "Alley Cat").
Its just something to summarize the power. Only for flavor. But if there is a problem about it I can change the name.

The character itself has nothing to do with the Cheshire cat at all. Its actual inspirations were Egypt goddesses such as Bastet, Sekhmet, myths about cats on many cultures and mythologies and the "trickster" theme.

PS: she has a backstory, but since no one wrote one I decided to not put it on her CS as well (the backstory would explain why her manifestation was called "alley cat")

I thought it wouldn't matter if I named her manifestation "Cheshire" since its name is not something that will be used on the RP (Differently from her title.)
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Looks fine, but I want to ask what her Auspice actually is. I don't see a partial or complete transformation. She turn into a cat-girl? Or is the transformation her eyes?

Also, not all Auspices are full tranfmogrifications.

The inexorable luck thing is fine, but I thought I'd use this time to point out that stuff like that won't always work. Try to be responsible with her power, like I say to everyone.

You can move her over. I'm glad you didn't give her that name. Pug was right. I would have argued against it.

Edit: Changed some stuff for Phantasm Manifestations to make them less lame.
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Partial transformation. (I actually specified on the Cs. Claws, tail, ears, eyes &etc. Not a full transformation.) The only thing I did referencing Cheshire cat was the name of the ability (didn't have a better name...)

The name I used before "alley cat" (She is an orphan, expelled from the orphanage as 16 due to her terrible behavior (aka. stealing things, getting into problems , fleeing the orphanage only coming back at dawn, ruining her clothes & etc. She lived on the streets all her life.)) didn't sounded that well so...

The Luck trait is something to be used only on life threatening situations. Is her last lifeline, not something to be used at all times.

Ps:About the unique and unusual quirks on her character I told you about on the CS... She has a very cat like personality, including short attention span, completely disregard to authorities and anything that doesn't interest her... These traits were already strong on her before, but after she died, they only became stronger due to her ability.
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@Empress, @13org

You two can put your characters in the approptiate tab, now. They're APPROVED! In case I didn't already say that.

Edit: I must've missed it, my apologies. Just woke up, hahaha. You're good on the last-resort luck, etc.
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Oh! And I hope you doesn't have a problem with that, she is flirty and promiscuous. If she sees something she wants, she will have it (be it an item or someone.)

(Her personality traits were inspired by the goddess Bastet. In the Egyptian mythology, Bastet is seen as not only a fierce protector of the lower Egypt and even Ra itself, but also as the goddess of love and family. Depicted as being promiscuous and a very devout mother.

Edit: one more question: I actually plan to make her transition from her auspice form and normal form quite a lot (especially due to her feeling so comfortable on that form) is it ok?
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@13org Ah, nah, I gotcha. No problem, on my end. I'm curious to see how the whole group will interact.

Edit: Yeah, sure.

Edit 2: May be making another character. Due to a conversation I had, earlier.
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@Saber Been rather busy, as I'm starting at a new job, as well as year-end schooling stuff. I'll try and get my character put together within the next couple of days, if that's okay!
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as well as year-end schooling stuff.


Speaking of, @Saber: this is a very preemptive warning, but if the IC is up within the next week, it will probably take me several days to get around to a reply, too. Once the course work finally ends, I'll have a bunch of 1x1s to reply to first on top of that. (Hey, I'm loyal.)
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@Vashonn For sure. Take your time.

@pugbutter Ah, alright. I'll probably get around to posting it this weekend. Though it's hard to tell.
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Made another Discord. I shouldn't end up locked out of this account. So, hopefully we can have some OOC discussion in there.

It's not super fancy or anything, but I plan to do more work once I get to a computer.

Not that it'll be super fancy, then, but it'll at least be more organized.
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Liking the direction everyone is going, can't wait to interact with your characters!
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Discord invitation expired :-/

Looking forward to interact with everyone as well XD

Ps: watch out for Amaya. If she decides she wants something, it'll be difficult to convince her otherwise. Even if it's someone and not something
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@13org Here ya go!

Fixed the link in the intro post, too.
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Reading up on things! Sorry for the silence @-@ I've only got two weeks of school left so final projects and school stuff have been cropping up lately.
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