Hidden 7 yrs ago 7 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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There was an old world, with its own people, its own architecture, culture, a life of its own. Then they came, and it died. Their crops razed, their life sunffed out. Their world swallowed.
We were those invaders. Or at least, who they used to be. Now, only dust is left, and that was ages ago. But those people aren't gone. Enslaved or captured, I don't know, but now they're like us, living in the world of dust that generations of greed and fear had built. Though their way was killed, they found a new way, living off land we long thought dead and barren. Now, as the new starts to falter under its own weight, the shadows of the old rise again.
The spirits of the old life are flowing again, granting their gift to the children of the new. Powers, knowledge. Brotherhoods. Now thrust into a world they don't understand, they struggle to find their place in a world that doesn't have a use for them- or trust them- with powers that, for some, only seem to cause pain. This is their story. Wrought from the dust.

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Elegy of Dust

Your life is rustic, but it's all you've known. Roughly constructed plank buildings to guard against the harsh, salted wind, technology -from a place you've never even thought of seeing- which never quite worked, and an unforgiving landscape- but this was home. Simple, sure. Boring, oppressive? Maybe, but it was life, and you were used to it. Life was ordinary.
Until one day, by accident, or for seemingly no reason, you gain a power that is certainly beyond ordinary. Maybe you try to hide this power, or perhaps you use it for your own gain. There are some who would gather in groups, try to understand it, while the rest of the ordinary world shuns these new, strange happenings. What purpose could there be for these powers, and what is heralded by their coming?




Any questions, concerns, or comments? Feel free to let me know.
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Hello, again! Glancing over this, the biggest concern I think probable players might have is in terms of plot. There's a set-up here regarding the powers, but there's not much of a "rising action," if you will, being insinuated. Like, what conflict(s) might present themselves to characters? Might they share a common ambition?

Also, as a suggestion, the interest check appears to have additional details on the world. Transferring those to the official thread would be most obliged, I suspect. Expanding on the post-apocalyptic setting to the greatest extent that you can, too, would be especially helpful for inviting diverse characters, as well as giving players something to chew on and aptly visualize when constructing posts in the future.
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Quick question-why no real person images?
Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@ayzrules Just personal preference. I find it slightly creepy when someone else is used as a character image without their consent.
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psst. Tobiax, I PM'd you.
Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@Durnehviir I know. I just haven't had time to sit down and give a thorough enough answer. Mostly becausespotty recently.
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Ah gotcha. No rush~
Just let me know what I can do when you can.
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So, with that now out of the way, anyone have questions?
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If I am going to make a character for this RP you are going to have to explain the fuel thing better.
Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@Burning Kitty Sorry, the Fuel is the theme of the power. The characters will learn more about it later, but I want to conserve the surprise.
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So would a character with a healing ability work like it does in comics and Heroes tv series or would it work differently because of the fuel?
Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@Burning Kitty Define "healing ability". I didn't watch all of Heroes.
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Think Wolverine from Marvel with the addition of if there is an object in a certain part of the brain you won't heal.
Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@Burning Kitty So Claire. I saw that part. That amount of regeneration is significantly over par, if you get what I mean.
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Only par I know is golf and I have no clue what it means. Something to do with the scoring system.
Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@Burning Kitty It means you have too much. At first I wasn't sure, when you said "healing", if you meant regeneration, of the ability to cure others. Regenerationon the level you mentioned is outside the scope of this rp.
Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@sassy1085@Solaris@ayzrules Are you guys still interested?
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@tobiax Unfortunately, I think I will have to drop this RP :( I haven't got any character ideas, plus school just started so I have a lot less free time

I'm really, really sorry!!!
Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by sassy1085
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@tobiax
I'm still interested
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@sassy1085 Do you have any character ideas?
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