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Now in this part we're going to be getting into these characters problems and attempting to solve them. I'm also probably going to make a flashbaack for Britney later.

I'm going to post as Lynette later, maybe after @Atrophy posts as Penny.
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I might not be home until Friday, but I plan to post basically as soon as I get back.
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I'll try get something up tomorrow! Though we'll see if that happens
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I've p much written up Cael, Rien and Tuyen. Should I post that or wait until I've also written Min's bit? Cause I, as per normal, am having a massive mental block for him and that might postpone posting a fair bit (or I'll just tag something shit on at the end)
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@Ruler Inc consider it done
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@Ruler Inc consider it done


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I spent today putting together a desk so I could better write.

I now have a desk.

I did not have time to write.

I am an asshole.
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I spent today putting together a desk so I could better write.

I now have a desk.

I did not have time to write.

I am an asshole.


you son of a bitch
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@Scarescrow I like her character so far, but I'm personally a bit curious about her skills. I know I'm a bit of a stickler when it comes to martial arts and the sorts, but you have to remember this is some small town in the middle of nowhere. I doubt there's anywhere to learn Fencing, and I severely doubt there's anywhere to learn Kendo in Farmer hill (that's a whole 'nother discussion). That's just me.

Also, you mention at several points that she is called a "professional athlete" but you don't really mention anything like that in her backstory. Same with her skills.
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@Ruler Inc ok, got it. Will try to rewrote her backstory then. Thank you.
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@Ruler Inc ok, got it. Will try to rewrote her backstory then. Thank you.


You don't need to rewrite her entire backstory (because I honestly enjoyed it), just need to explain where she got these skills and stuffz from.
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Sorry there wasn't more! Gonna be slammed until the New Year and didn't want to keep y'all hanging.
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@Ruler IncCan you look over this to see if anything is needed to change? Thank you.

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@Scarescrow Veddy good. I assume you want me to come up with a power for her?
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@Ruler IncYes, thank you.
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@Ruler IncYes, thank you.


I have the perfect power in mind for her. When I get home I will write it
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SIGIL & LOCATION (okay I can't)
ABSTRACTION Glory-Waves, the ability to create explosive energy that also induces awe in people that witness it.
ABSTRACTION DESCRIPTION Vassia has the ability to, at will, to produce massive waves of gold colored energy that is plasmic in nature and is thus incredibly hot. This energy goes in all directions and will absolutely decimate most forms of matter. Wood will be disintegrated, metal will melt in time, and people will be burned up by the power that Vassia exerts. Glory Waves will also do insane amounts of damage to Extra-Normal beings, even if they're more resistant to it. This ability also has the ability to induce awe of Vassia's power in people that view it. It bypasses the Awakened resistance to such abilities, and even people that are possessed will be forced to dread and respect her, possibly breaking their possession. Unlike many Awakened abilities, there is no channeling or manipulating the energy - there is only an on-switch and an off-switch. The energy quickly floods five meters in all directions until it creates a dome, and it'll remain there until Vassia deactivates her ability. Vassia herself is immune to the heat that she generates.

IN THE PRESENCE OF THE MOUNTAIN Vassia's abstraction's range goes from five meters to fifteen meters and the heat will double, making her an incredibly destructive figure in the mountain. However, she gains the ability to channel small amounts of it through her body to, say, produce a beam of this energy as opposed to a bomb of the energy. In addition, she'll gain the ability to channel her awe without even having to active her bomb to say, intimidate a foe into backing down.

LIMITS Unless she's in the presence of the mountain, Vassia's abstraction is powerful and uncontrollable, which means that she's as much of a threat to her friends as her enemies. While the Awakened are resistant to it enough to withstand its effects, it's only for a short period of time. So it's difficult to use if she's with friends or in a place she doesn't want to destroy. Even in the presence of the mountain, channeling her abstraction into blasts is unstable, which means the abstraction can explode in her hands after excessively use. So the most that Vassia can keep the Glory-Wave going is around five minutes straight tops, or else she'll exhaust herself and pass out.

WEAKNESSES As stated before, the glory waves are incredibly destructive and will destroy anything that isn't either immune to heat or herself. So if she uses it in a building she may destroy the building, or hurt her friends in the process. In addition, it doesn't discriminate to what she has in her so it can destroy an important item, and often anticipates her clothing. It's also linked to people's perception of her; if they believe that she is powerful and is in wow of her abilities then she can access it. If she hasn't impressed a group of people with her skills, appearance, or personality yet then she will not be able to access its full power.


I like coming up with powers for characters like this, it makes me have to think outside the box. But, if you don't like the power I can come up with something else.
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