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Hello !
Straight to the point; this looks amazing. That depth, those overwhelming information... I'd very much like to try and throw a character at this if you'd be interested to have me.

Crowns are handed down, if I understand things clearly? The 8 main ones mentioned are; Wrath, Joy, Fear, Madness, Disgust, Grief, Contempt and Pride? Of which roles are limited, but only Pride was chosen thus far?
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@SimpleWriter Crowns are chosen by the Whisper, which crops up whenever it feels like so no passing them down. Those 8 are Ethereal ones, which are limited, yeah. Prismatic ones are not and can be anything you have a word for. These are all covered in the magic and combat section, but I'm around if you have further questions.
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I still need to find Themes and maybe put some colours, but I wanted to give it a start and see if my 'all or nothing' kind of magic / attacks would be accepted? Hehe...

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@Eviledd1984 Looks mostly fine. The katana you mentioned will be the โ€˜realโ€™ weapon of the Crown but otherwise his fighting style is fine. Mention clearly what the crown is on his outfit, then go ahead and throw him in the CHAR tab.

@SimpleWriter Iโ€™m tweaking the first skill to be long-duration to affect allies, too, so they get the defense buff as well. Second skill is fine, but limiting it to melee range only. Third skill Iโ€™m tweaking to a short-duration buff that increases hers and ally dexterity but at the cost of taking more damage. If youโ€™re okay with the changes, add another star to her Dex stat and throw her in the CHAR tab. She also canโ€™t use any skills concurrently.

Oh, mention clearly what her weapon is, because certain Crowns can have misleading โ€˜weaponsโ€™.

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@Eviledd1984 Oh I keep forgetting things. I'm putting an upper limit on his size power. He can get about as tall as a five-story building and that's where it stops.
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@January Hey ! Thanks. Also, Third Skill tweak confuses me a bit...Basically you are telling me to get rid of the AoE attack and make it a AoE Buff? Also, she takes more damage, or everyone affected does?
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@SimpleWriter Yeah, it's a buff. Ethereals aren't really big attack types with the exception of Pride, but Pride has its own drawbacks. And she takes more damage, not the allies.
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@January Got it.

My bad, I forgot this detail... Would you prefer it if I changed my Crown then? Or the whole power set. I feel kind of bad for forgetting that Ethereals weren't supposed to be all about offense. Also, as you said Pride already went with the all in kind of build... I might just rethink the whole concept...Hmm...
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@SimpleWriter Well, it's up to you. Just get all the changes done before playing since it'll be harder to swap out characters you didn't feel like playing once people are interacting with and invested in what you've made.
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@January

Thank you i apologies for any inconveniences.
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@Eviledd1984 I still need you to add a clear line telling me what his crown is in his costumed form. And also to add a line clarifying exactly what the weapon is. I would prefer these changes made before you put the CS into the CHAR tab.

Since this is becoming a general problem, I'll update the "CHARACTER SHEET" section of the OOC to reflect this.
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Got bored and felt like giving this a shot, so Imma just yeet this one over and see what y'all think.

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@Vocab The subskills in Swordfall are bordering on being separate skills themselves, and there's too many. A skill that comprises basically seven different other things/effects is too much. Pick one or two effects max, please. Also no hidden skills. Everything on the sheet should be visible to the GMs so we can adjust/balance things as best we can.

Also tweaking the last skill to only affect one target at a time and switching targets resets the timer on the "instant death" thing. Disclaimer that not all enemies are going to be insta-killable.

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@January Technically, I wouldnโ€™t call them skills. I just didnโ€™t have a place to properly list them, but wanted them to exist in a place where I could easily see them. Theyโ€™re techniques, which rely solely on combat prowess rather than any magic. Itโ€™s literally just different ways of attacking with a fancy name that Iโ€™d otherwise forget. Equally, theyโ€™re not hidden, I just... havenโ€™t actually come up with the other four yet, and didnโ€™t wanna delay the sheet anymore.

Also, uh, Ruin of Damocles is already resetting when switching targets. I guess thatโ€™s worded a โ€˜lil bit poorly, Iโ€™ll rewrite that.
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@Vocab Oh, okay, as long as they're not skills it's fine. Sheet is otherwise good to go for dumping into the CHAR tab.
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@January

Again my apologies, i have edited my character sheet. Let me know if i need to change anything else.
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@Eviledd1984 It's fine, I should have mentioned it in the character sheet section ahead of time anyway. But yeah, just add in a line for me clarifying what his weapon is (is is the suit? or the katana?) and it should be fine.
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@January

Again edited my post, If their is anything else i need to change let me know. If not then i will wait for the first post and try to figure out where to start.

Edited- I also wonder how i can get a color for my character?
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@Eviledd1984 Oh, I just post color by the accent/main color scheme you use on the CS. If you didn't bother with them, I figure you're defaulting to white, otherwise you can just tell me what color/hex code you'd like and I'll change the roster.
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