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Tentative interest here. Any in-depth D&D lore knowledge needed?


Nope! Pretty much the only actual D&D information you need is just the basic understanding of your character's species, and that's easy enough to just Google.

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Skeleton farm rancher coming through, fellas.


Welcome to the party lol

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Alright. I'll DM you in a few minutes.
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This looks fun. I have a character I've been sitting on for a while and I think she might be a good fit with a tweak or three. Is there still room for people to jump in?
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This looks fun. I have a character I've been sitting on for a while and I think she might be a good fit with a tweak or three. Is there still room for people to jump in?


Yeah you can definitely write up a character sheet and apply
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@The Bork Lazer Oh I meant to tell you this earlier, and I'm sure you might already know this, but skeletons can't talk so you would have to figure out another form of communication. Sign Language is acceptable, or something else
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Here's the character. She's more of a faraway city-dweller, but hopefully she'll fit well enough. Let me know if there's anything I should change.

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Here's the character. She's more of a faraway city-dweller, but hopefully she'll fit well enough. Let me know if there's anything I should change.



Overall she looks good! I've just got a couple of things I'd like you to tweak.

In the questionnaire section, it's supposed to be less of an interview, and more of a self reflection thing. I should probably specify that more clearly, that's my bad. So basically just a little rewording in that section should clear that up.

And also I understand the vibe you're going for with you're character, and that's absolutely fine, I just want to caution not to let it get too out of hand because characters that are prone towards being depressed and dreary all the time can drag down the rp if you aren't careful with it. Maybe make her just a tad less intense overall.

So like... She can definitely have that underlying depth and pain, but when it comes to her everyday interactions, I'd like her to be a little less intense, if that makes sense.
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This is very much a work in progress, but here's an example of the basic concept of the formatting of the CS and whatnot

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@Shiva That's fair. I wanted to play with the questionnaire a bit, and thought this would make make the character a bit more expressive. Should I actually change it around, or does it get the point across as it is?

Don't worry too much about her being excessively intense in the day-to-day. She should keep that to herself for the most part. The questionnaire gets a fair bit of it because it's her talking about herself, but it should get better once we move away from introspection and get her focusing on other things. Like investigation teams and murder mysteries.
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@Shiva That's fair. I wanted to play with the questionnaire a bit, and thought this would make make the character a bit more expressive. Should I actually change it around, or does it get the point across as it is?

Don't worry too much about her being excessively intense in the day-to-day. She should keep that to herself for the most part. The questionnaire gets a fair bit of it because it's her talking about herself, but it should get better once we move away from introspection and get her focusing on other things. Like investigation teams and murder mysteries.


Alright, that's fine then!

And I'd appreciate you changing it around if you don't mind, just for the sake of keeping things relatively in the same format.
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Thought I'd throw down a WIP too, it's been fun reading everyone else's.
Shiva, if you spot a problem early please let me know!

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Faint 1.1a patch notes: Added some stuff in the likes/dislikes section. Changed the quote. Changed the questionnaire (might be more depressing than before since the questions she had avoided needed an answer, actually)

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Faint 1.1a patch notes: Added some stuff in the likes/dislikes section. Changed the quote. Changed the questionnaire (might be more depressing than before since the questions she had avoided needed an answer, actually)



Perfect!
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This is to let you guys know that acceptance is closed except for the people who have already been working on characters. So if you're just now coming across this, sorry. But if you've been working on a character, continue on! There's no rush.
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Version 0.7 posted below. I still need to read through things again and do some editing, but it's starting to get closer to being done.

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My character is finally up!

Version 0.7 posted below. I still need to read through things again and do some editing, but it's starting to get closer to being done.



Awesome! You can post her in the character sheet tab at your leisure.
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I can't decide on a character :(
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I can't decide on a character :(


It's all good. We're not in a rush yet, since the majority of people still haven't finished their CS.
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This is still WIP, hope I can join and let me know if I need to change anything

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This is still WIP, hope I can join and let me know if I need to change anything



I'm sorry but I'm only accepting applications either from people I have invited, or who have already shown interest/posted their WIPs on this thread.
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okay no problem, sorry to bother
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