@Shazamrock after @Sanguine Rose posts I can have David respond, being enthusiastic about the battle; then he hears Faye suggest seeing the city and gets totally distracted. Then we can circle back to the battle later; how does that sound?
Regarding direction, I've avoided reading anything about the towns so far. I might later, but I'm going for a dynamic where David knows nothing about the region and this might make that feel more authentic.
Regarding direction, I've avoided reading anything about the towns so far. I might later, but I'm going for a dynamic where David knows nothing about the region and this might make that feel more authentic.