Hidden 9 mos ago 9 mos ago Post by Remram
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This is my rough draft for my dude. Probably made him a bit overpowered lol. I have no idea what to make his Black Regalia.


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That is the second character born out of wedlocke, uses a pistol as a secondary and got adopted by an aunt.
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@Digmata
Had to actually look to see who the first one was lol.
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I would like to suggest there are different handgun types you can pick. Machine-pistol, handcannon, revolver, suppressed pistol, flintlock/matchlock, dual wielding of any of the above too.

There's also that secondaries don't have to always be a gun. You can have an additional melee weapon too, or even both primary and secondary be guns.

Also I see, Macbeth. Solid choice, but those skills are pretty in line. The Authority reminds me of Rohan from Jojo too. I will mention that your Authority should be based on your chosen Desire, as the app is trying to help you fulfill that.

I most likely will open the OOC end of this week.
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Thanks for the feedback. I'll apply those changes soon.
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I still have yet to make a character sheet…
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I think this looks neat, and I'm very much a Persona/SMT enjoyer. Any more open slots, or nah?
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@Cat22@Bacon the player limit is intended to be fairly high so fear not.
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I had nothing better to be doing, so I threw together a rough draft. Thoughts?

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@Bacon the crime background will actually make you very easy to integrate into the beginning of the RP, and a little differently too. I don't recommend everyone go for this though due to Japanese societal stigmas.

Your Authority could be stronger. Perhaps instead of just getting everyone's attention it also compels reverence, making it easier to ask everyone affected to do what you want. Plus they will all glaze your character until the effect runs out. It's not an explicit full obedience, so results vary, but a big taunt isn't too strong on its own.
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Edits made to the sheet. Other than portraits that might need resizing, how's this?
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@Bacon Looks good. Only thing is possibly dialing back a little on the crimes. He would actually be locked up for that many. I'd say keep the theft out mainly. The rest I can see, even if not caught for it like drinking.

I have hurriedly added a mask and codename spot in Combat Information, so please add those too. That's kinda important unless you want to be at risk in the real world too.
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