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“There’s that old saying; ‘Breaking a Mirror is seven years of bad luck’... I guess that’s what we’re living through now”




Splintered Reflections is an RP set in a world where humanity has allied with a number of alien races from various worlds across the galaxy, in a fight to stop the ongoing expansion and domination of an interplanetary empire known as The Totality.
This situation came about after an accident tore open rifts in space between various planets across the galaxy that have since allowed Earth and these other worlds to interact with one another.
As well as The Totality, there are also other threats - hazardous environments, alien flora and fauna, extra-terrestrial contagions, as well as other threats from within and without.

To fight back, after a series of battles and a crucial victory against the Totality, the Coalition - as the alliance of human and alien species has called themselves - formed new units, equipped with the best equipment they could bring to bear, and staffed by the best people they could find.
SPEAR - Special Purpose Encounter and Response teams. They are the first line in finding a way to not just survive.
But a way to win.












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There is a Discord server I run, where we may discuss out-of-character details, if you want to join, please send me a DM for an invite.
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Ok. I've read the whole thing. I'll start thinking about character. I've got a few ideas rattling around while I'm working. But I'll refine it all later tonight.
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Ok. I've read the whole thing. I'll start thinking about character. I've got a few ideas rattling around while I'm working. But I'll refine it all later tonight.


Superb, I'll look forward to seeing what you come up with, and I'm always around to answer any questions if needed.

Going to update the OOC 0th post with the details for you teams' MAS Suit and the optional weapons, and I'll also post my own character in the Characters tab as well. He'll be acting as the team leader.
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@Rhona W

When was the Dranfel home world rendered uninhabitable relative to the start of the game? Would a younger member of their species have no concept of a home planet at all? Or was it a more recent thing?
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Here is my character sheet. Let me know if anything needs changing to fit the lore, anything that I might've overlooked.

Name: Veep

Age: 42

Species: Felness (Male)

Appearance:
Veep has Black Fur with white under the chin. He has a long black tail and Green Eyes. He has a scar on his left cheek from an old battle wound.

Personality:
Veep is friendly, but tends to always have a guard up. Having lived a rough life, fighting with the Resistance and under constant tyranny, he has problems trusting new people, but is willing to extend trust where he perceives it's been earned. He'll sometimes fall into deep thought when not engaged in conversation, as he thinks back to the days when his brother fought by his side.

History:
- Veep and his twin brother Siva lost their parents to the Totality when they were young. They were taken in by the Resistance and cared for, as well as being trained to fight and operate MAS Suits.
- When the two were 31, Siva, adept at close quarters combat, was part of a raid on a Totality convoy. Veep stayed behind with a leg injury. Only a couple of Resistance Fighters came back, saying the rest were killed or captured. Devastated, Veep hopes his brother was killed, because he dreads to think what he'd have to endure at the Totality's hands if he were alive but captured.
- When the Resistance base was discovered and attacked, the surviving occupants fled through a ruined village. The Totality forces gave chase and picked off the fleeing fighters one by one. Using his stealthy skills, Veep evaded detection, then came across a Mirror that led to Earth. He leapt through before they found him.
- Now, 11 years later, Veep has adapted to human society and helps fight the Totality wherever he can.

Key Skills & Abilities:
Veep's primary talent comes from sneaking. His black fur means he hides in shadows really well and can move softly and quietly. This means he can slip behind enemy lines to plant bugs or bombs.
Though he is equally capable at going loud with MAS suits.

Special Abilities:
Don't know. Open to discuss.

Personal Weapons:
9mm Handgun with Suppressor
Combat Knife
High Voltage Taser

Personal Equipment:
When on missions that may require it, he tends to carry a small amount of Remote Explosives and Detonator.
Can also carry listening devices or electronic bugs for planting.

Also has a silver locket around his neck with a photo of Siva and himself as young kits. He takes it everywhere. The only memento left of his family.
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The MAS sounds like ye olde Scopedog.
-I'll need to remember to make a note to pack a spare change of clothes (or at least a field-cloak) in storage in case she needs to abandon the MAS.

Felix is probably going to be biased against elves for reasons unmentionable in polite company, but will 'tolerate' augmented paranormal humans to the point of defending them.

As for herself, she'll likely be the result of anhur attempts at genetic modification to combine the best traits of multiple races, but largely inherited none of the positive traits aside from being the black-fur covered swan of the batch. That and being nearly wingless. Whether that story is true or not is another matter, but it's the one she sticks to when questioned on it; and listing her as an anhur makes it easier to tick a checkbox than to list her as 'other' and write a whole first-contact form.
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When was the Dranfel home world rendered uninhabitable relative to the start of the game? Would a younger member of their species have no concept of a home planet at all? Or was it a more recent thing?


I had in mind it was many generations ago, and their original world is something of a passed-down tale among the current generations. Maybe some of the very oldest Dranfel might remember it, but the younger ones would see it only as a story and something that exists in pictures. Their 'home world' would be the world(s) that the Dranfel settled on subsequently.

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Here is my character sheet. Let me know if anything needs changing to fit the lore, anything that I might've overlooked.
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All looks good to me so far - you don't need to have any special abilities necessarily if you don't want to. Happy to Approve him if you want to post in the Characters tab - although, please format the sheet accordingly when you do.

The MAS sounds like ye olde Scopedog.
-I'll need to remember to make a note to pack a spare change of clothes (or at least a field-cloak) in storage in case she needs to abandon the MAS.

Felix is probably going to be biased against elves for reasons unmentionable in polite company, but will 'tolerate' augmented paranormal humans to the point of defending them.

As for herself, she'll likely be the result of anhur attempts at genetic modification to combine the best traits of multiple races, but largely inherited none of the positive traits aside from being the black-fur covered swan of the batch. That and being nearly wingless. Whether that story is true or not is another matter, but it's the one she sticks to when questioned on it; and listing her as an anhur makes it easier to tick a checkbox than to list her as 'other' and write a whole first-contact form.


The Scopedog was definitely an inspiration, although I have never seen any VOTOMs anime or read the manga, I am well aware of it (as any good mecha enthusiast should be).

I'm fine if your character is biased against elves, but do let me know as GM why, so I can be aware of it and incorporate it into the narrative appropriately.
The genetic manipulation background is fine too; there's certainly enough precedent for it given the amount of it going on in the setting as a whole.

I have also updated the Oth post with details on the standard MAS Suit your characters will all be used, and the options for their loadouts.

I'll put together a character sheet for myself as soon as I can soon - but every time I've sat down to do some writing for this so far this weekend, I've been hit with 'could you just help me with...' of course xD

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@Rhona W Ty. Also, Idk if anyone else is having this problem, but I can't see your character image.
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Ah, looks like I checked out the wrong thread. . . anyway, I'm somewhat interested, so I'll be glancing over this.
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@Rhona W Ty. Also, Idk if anyone else is having this problem, but I can't see your character image.


Hmm, I'll have a fiddle with it. TBH; I'm going to redraw it anyway, as it's an older piece of art, and I can do a lot better with the experience I've got since then.

EDIT: Updated it - reason was it was a link from FurAffinity, and those always seem to be weird for linking off-site. Changed it to my DeviantArt gallery instead. I prefer that picture anyway.

Ah, looks like I checked out the wrong thread. . . anyway, I'm somewhat interested, so I'll be glancing over this.


Only somewhat interested? What could I do to get your excitement up a bit more than that?
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I mostly just need more time to read through and see if any interesting character ideas float to the front of my head. I've been in a bit of an RP funk lately with the end of the games I've been running and I'm not actually sure whether I want more games yet, or if this particularly group would actually be a good fit. Don't worry too much about me.
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McYeeting an app, y'all can invent a new nickname for her; since that's how callsigns are made.

Name: Felix || Nickname: Felix / "Four foot hate" / "Sun-Shorty" / "Bucket" || Age: 22

Species: Anhur (officially), but she tends to leave it ambiguous/will usually not correct anyone if they assume wrong.



Personality: Despite being generally an outsider to nearly every community she's been 'in' by pretending to be almost every race other than her own, she has longed to find a group that accepted her as herself and as a result gets rather defensive of any perceived threats to her SPEAR team-mates. Tends to venture out of her MAS during long missions due to low stamina, allegedly hiding it "under a rock or something" and doing most of her reconnoitering on foot as she feels she's harder to detect that way.

History: According to Felix, she is the result of anhur attempts at genetic modification to combine the best traits of multiple races, but largely inherited none of the positive traits aside from being the black-fur covered swan of the batch. That and being nearly wingless. Whether that story is true or not is another matter, but it's the one she consistantly sticks to when questioned on it.

Assuming this is true, Felix was born well after the war had claimed her homeworld, and as she bore little resemblance to the other anhur -even the most disfigured ones of the plague- was almost immediately ostracized -you'd think it'd involve more ostriches- but thankfully the Dranfel took her in despite the beak and obvious lack of scales. However, life among them was hard; she had to fight even harder just to prove she wasn't a burden to their society. Contact with humans was almost a relief as the non-discerning human just figured she was 'just another highly-skilled alien' on their side, and she promptly joined the SPEAR units just before the assault on the Florida Monolith.

Key Skills & Abilities: As a fighting-style, she tends to favor setting herself up in a well-hidden position from which she usually strikes with a vicious surprise-attack; typically in close-quarters and a confusing flurry of movement and a well-practiced economy-of-motion. Although she has opted to take the sneaky snipey approach when harassing the enemy or simply trying to shape the battlefield to her advantage.

Skill-wise, apart from standard levels of marksmanship and being a concealed close-quarters brawler; she's able to mimic voices/noises with some degree of precision to help create a distraction.

Special Abilities: Her larger than normal ears provide exceptional hearing in addition to some rather keen eyesight, this combined with her innate spatial-awareness and excellent memory tends to make her an exemplary scout despite her personal preference for conducting raids.

What should have been wings on her back ended up developing as arm-blades. Due to being pretty much engineered and raised with the intent of having the best of every race's abilities she has had practice using technology and augments to mimic several abilities she otherwise would not have, but seldom well enough to fool anyone for more than a few seconds.

Her strength was augmented at some point with additional synthetic muscle fibers and dermal-plates, allegedly in an attempt either to keep-pace with the dranfel, or just to 'fit in' with them better, this coupled with her tendency to shave her fur off has resulted in her sculpted proportions and appearance.

Personal Weapons: Suppressed FAMAS, KS-23 shotgun, and either an MG-3 or some anti-material rifle
Personal Equipment: Aside from default MAS pilot-suit, her camo-kit and survival/web-gear (SERE-kit), she usually has a spare change of fatigues and a pair of 'pebbles'.
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McYeeting an app, y'all can invent a new nickname for her; since that's how callsigns are made.


I vote 'Sunshine'.

BTW: Yes, I am making profiles. They should be done sometime soon.
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She seems mostly okay; I would say that I'd imagine both the Dranfel and the Anhur would be more accepting - but then maybe she just fell in with a particularly bad group on both occasions, as they're as individual as anyone is so there's bound to be bad apples.

I'm going to veto the sawn-off 4-gauge, as I think that's a bit OTT, especially if she's only 4'8", and it's double-barrelled, as that just seems a bit... much to me. Same with lugging the MAS Assault Rifle - especially when you could just take an anti-materiel rifle that's actually made for the job, it's a bit unnecessary. It would also come with a scope, instead of the MAS ones which don't, and would be massively oversized for the hand controls and have horrible ergonomics for firing, as well as no recoil compensation for human-sized people. Especially at her size. And I mean, the point of having the MAS Suits in the RP is to use them.
If the idea is that she has enhanced strength/endurance/etc because she's genetically engineered, that doesn't fit well with the concept that she has no advantages from the process, IMHO.

Rework those things a bit, if you please, and I'll give her another look over.

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She seems mostly okay; I would say that I'd imagine both the Dranfel and the Anhur would be more accepting - but then maybe she just fell in with a particularly bad group on both occasions, as they're as individual as anyone is so there's bound to be bad apples.

I'm going to veto the sawn-off 4-gauge, as I think that's a bit OTT, especially if she's only 4'8", and it's double-barrelled, as that just seems a bit... much to me. Same with lugging the MAS Assault Rifle - especially when you could just take an anti-materiel rifle that's actually made for the job, it's a bit unnecessary. It would also come with a scope, instead of the MAS ones which don't, and would be massively oversized for the hand controls and have horrible ergonomics for firing, as well as no recoil compensation for human-sized people. Especially at her size. And I mean, the point of having the MAS Suits in the RP is to use them.
If the idea is that she has enhanced strength/endurance/etc because she's genetically engineered, that doesn't fit well with the concept that she has no advantages from the process, IMHO.

Rework those things a bit, if you please, and I'll give her another look over.


Yeah, I had a thunk over it while at work. And realized I kinda glossed over the part of her basically having learned to mimic things like a parrot/chimp to make it seem as though her program was a success, until that wasn't enough. The failure was largely in lack of a proper genetic-hybrid, as a technological fascimile is not only more expensive and time-consuming, but also kinda detracts from the goal of solving the issue with birth-defects and low birthrate when you're result is the physical abomination that is Felix.

-Kinda thinking "it's an anhur-thing" that the fungi basically filtering out the toxins means she can normally drink a Dranfel under the table without even trying, but I figure stressing her fungi from being out on extended missions/getting injured makes her a bit more... impulsive. We suggest using a laser-pointer to keep her on-task. Since someone who can mimic enemy comms, has unfettered access to an open microphone on their radio, and with no impulse control is going to result in more than a few prank-calls.
-Will probably explain the appearance of scales as dermal trauma-plating she installed one night when nobody was looking after a particularly long mission (ie: she surgically added them herself with a field-knife while higher than a weather-balloon). It provides little practical protection aside from extra padding beneath her armor and protection from blunt force trauma if her MAS gets ragdoll'd with her inside. As they aren't a natural part of her, she needs to surgically replace them herself as they become damaged. The other upside is it reduces her rate of minor bumps/bruises so now it usually takes longer before she gets loopy in a fight.

And yeah... 4 gauge/23mm nade-launchy/buckshot-chucker is probably a bit too much to be practical, although they do, indeed, exist. And yes, even "double-aught-stumpy" exists too.
-I guess I could settle for a single-barrel. The idea is it's a mildly ridiculous spicy-boy that uses ammunition common to her MAS. It's use is basically for doming enemy MAS units or similar at point-blank/knife-fighting distances, and is a bit more practical than using a 4 gauge blank to pile-bunker them in the chin.

The use of the MAS-rifle as a dismounted big-iron is kinda a nod to the era when dudes would lug a Browning M2 machine gun out to do the long-poke in single-shot mode. She doesn't really need to reach the trigger as long as she can manipulate the shear to drop the bolt/firing pin (in some cases, trigger doesn't even exist, is still not problem). Still, her tendancy to use it is less "planned" and more "I wanna shoot something, but I forgot my rifle/my rifle isn't big enough" so she just reaches over grabs the smallest gun off her MAS (less for practical and more for comedic effect; since as you said, in a serious situation she's probably be in her MAS). Like, 80% of what she'd be doing dismounted can probably be settled with an MP5 or an MG-3, or a 23mm grenade to the face.
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Alright, it looks like I'm done here. This is both profiles for my characters at once. Some things, I might have wrong, but we can discuss them. I try to include all the details I think are relevent, and hopefully this is workable here. MIGHT have to discuss some MAS Suit stuff afterwards, but getting the profiles done is a milestone, so here ya go.


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Approved, she sounds fantastic.

I especially love the designer earmuffs...!

<many words, I will not bother repeating from one post above>


She just sounds like she has too many 'cool' things going on to me. She's a hybrid and she has dermal plating she installed herself(!!), and she has an MAS shotgun she uses, and she sometimes uses an MAS rifle by hand, and she has a camo cloak, and she's really fast, and she's really durable, and she can do coms-wizz and hacker stuff, and she was a successful tank commander, and-
It's bit too much, and too extra for what I'm pitching.

Her being a hybrid is being 'special' enough TBH, as she's the only one of her kind. That and one of the other things would probably make her stand out. But even so; she's a bit too... extra in some ways for my liking - I have to admit, the 'installed dermal plating herself' thing made me audibly groan and roll my eyes, especially combined with the 'shunned loner, who works alone most often'. It's a bit of a cliche storm right now, especially adding in the 'and she carries really big guns she made herself'.
It needs a bit of toning down and moderation. Bear in mind, your characters are:
a) already part of an elite operations unit
b) already piloting mecha
They don't need to do much to be super cool, both of those things are few and far between in the setting, and your characters have been hand-picked for their roles.
Which, also, means that while 'quirky' individual personality traits and distinctions in actions are definitely wanted, things like 'got high and performed surgery on herself, and lacks impulse control' probably isn't going to put someone first in line for consideration.

Also, I'm just flat-out saying 'no' to the MAS weapons being used at character scale. Regardless of any real-world justification.
If you want her to have a big gun, have her personal weapons be something like an LMG, an auto shotgun or an antimateriel rifle.

Please rework her, or come up with a new character concept, as at the moment I'm not going to approve Felix as she is
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You must have posted them just as I was writing my previous post, as otherwise I would have said something.
I'll give the app another look over properly tomorrow, as it's getting late here and I want to re-read it all without fuzzy cobwebs. They look mostly all right, but there may be a few tweaks.

Also - the colour you used for Maxon's name at the heading caught me out, I thought it was a link because of the colours the Guild uses xD

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@Rhona W Yeah, it is pretty close to that color. Have a good night.
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