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@PKMNB0YI finished my CSs, if you want to look at them.
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@TheUnknowable: Hm...

Okay, first and foremost, honest opinion: barring Inuyasha, the forms are all very, VERY light on information and detail. The personalities are also barebones for all three of them; the longest one's barely 3 sentences, dangit.

Now for more specifics. I like detail: what a character can do, what their limits are, etc;. Giving me a flat list of stuff without elaboration is like tossing a bunch of words in my face that have no meaning whatsoever. How strong? How fast? What defines "superhuman"? Because we're ALL over the spectrum here.

To hit on the next set of forms in turn:
Inuyasha: mostly fine. Needs (A LOT) more fleshing out overall, but fine.
Spock: Issue. Prime Directive. That is all.
Well, not really. He's kinda on the bland side, and idk what he's really DOING in this relatively crazy-powered cast (he doesn't particularly stand out much AT ALL even among the more normal guys) but big issue is Prime Directive rn.
Nightcrawler: I do not... Like characters who can TP on a whim without limitations. In a way, this loops back to lack of detail, but even so. Big issue.

That's... About it from me for now, I think.
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@PKMNB0YOk, I can add more detail to my sheets.

I didn't think of the Prime Directive issue. He would realize pretty soon that there was something strange going on here, but without evidence that someone else was interfering with this Earth's cultural or technological development, he would have to lay low and try to find a way back. That would be boring, though, so I'll probably replace him.

Nightcrawler is specifically limited to teleporting only where he can see or is extremely familiar with, which in this universe means that he can only go where he can see until he settles somewhere. If you don't like that, though, I can use a different character there too.
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@TheUnknowable: Replacing both might be for the better, then. I think. Yeah.
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@PKMNB0YReplaced Spock with a better alien, a Bounty Hunter that will help the others out, for the right price.

Trying to think of someone to replace Nightcrawler. Maybe Iron Man.
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If you want a villain PC to play against the other PCs, I think Chancellor Palpatine or Lex Luthor could work. Magneto could also work as someone to divide the PCs up, but only if the people of this world don't accept "fictional" beings.

In fact, I could play as Lex Luthor instead of Tony Stark, and just have him start building power in New York to try and take over.
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@PKMNB0YOk, I added a bit to Inuyasha's personality and listed the limits of his different abilities.

I also added two new characters, Tyr Anasazi and Tony Stark, and made sure that they had more detailed personality, abilities, and equipment.
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@TheUnknowable: Inuyasha looks fine now. Accepted.
Iron Man is also fine (though good luck to him in finding repair parts and stuff).
Tyr... I have to decline because:
a) I don't want that ship around. It's problematic in a few ways right now that I don't wanna get into.
b) We're still day 1 of the RP (somehow), so most of the stuff involving said ship wouldn't fly.
So honestly the ship is the big problem.
(Also guns will only scale so well but that's a different problem in its own right).
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@PKMNB0YI was planning on having Stark have to rig up whatever he could get off of the internet to fix his suit, though the fuel will need to be synthesized, so he'll need to get the money to build a miniature particle accelerator (at least a few hundred grand) or trick the staff at one that already exists into giving him access. Maybe he can visit CERN.

I'll delete the ship altogether, right now, if that's the only problem. He can just as easily be looking for a way off planet as looking for parts to fix it.

Edit: deleted the ship.
Edit2: forgot to add "visual acuity" to his genetically enhanced traits so added it.
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@TheUnknowable: The 'other' section is also invalid as a result, though; this development literally JUST took place, so something like bounty-hunting the other characters isn't an option.
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Also almost every other character would probably curbstomp him, all things considered, or at the very least put him at an incredibly severe disadvantage. And they're all grouped.
He's not getting off scot-free if he does lol.
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@PKMNB0Yok, I'll delete the "other" stuff, but he'll do his research before fighting anyone. Maybe he'll get his but kicked, but he'll probably end up working with Stark, as he seems to have the best tech, which means he's the best chance at getting off this world.
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The best tech in the RP are the Inteligent Devices of Vita and Nanoha, by far and wide. Nothing that Tony Stark can pull out can get even close to that.
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@KoLI haven't looked over the other CSs completely yet. Are either of them in New York?
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Nah, they are on Japan.
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@KoLI assumed those were magical items, but I guess they are super advanced devices.

Tyr is unlikely to believe in Magic, but that tech seems too unusual for him to recognize it. Stark's tech is more primitive than he's used to, but he is familiar with exoskeleton armor and plasma thrusters/weapons, as well as fusion reactors (though not as implants. That's a bit weird.)
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It's both magic and technology.
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The best tech in the RP are the Inteligent Devices of Vita and Nanoha, by far and wide. Nothing that Tony Stark can pull out can get even close to that.


Nah, I think Hibiki actually wins that challenge. The core of her stuff can't even be replicated. :P

... though it's... magic, science, alchemy, a piece of Gungnir, and powered by singing. It should horrify all mundane scientists.
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@TheUnknowable: He should be okay to go now, then.
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Added Tyr's post to the end of my post. If you happen to be in the Bronx, feel free to stop by your local biker bar.
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