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this bio is 2 pages long already
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At the Council meetings, Portland is always discussed and Comber and the Elders All agree that we need to take it at least as a resource base it's just the cost in Troopers.

In the old world when a Fighter was lost in combat they were almost anonymous but in Lasthope's population a loss everyone feels. You may not have been close with him but you knew him, saw her at the dance, or loved their recipe for a dish, how they played the guitar and other things so we don't start wars lightly and Portland is an Urban environment which is the most deadly of combat zones.

That understood when Lasthope does war with the Pirates it will be hit and run, we will make working for Feng a fearful profession. We will free his slaves target his boats but never give him a standing battle and we will do it in the time of year when he will be the most restricted because he is unwilling to fight in the winter snows.
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this bio is 2 pages long already


LOL

I've done that before
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Poor Feng.
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We plan on allowing him to stand before his victims and the victims of his policies and giving them a say in his punishment

Feng will be reduced or executed then Last hope will have the Columbia River, we will take the Mist Fields and their natural gas resources, begin trading and explore the river; out at Cape Disappointment is a group of people that are Sailors and Fishermen lead by a fellow they call the Fox who once retrieved 3 of their fishermen that were caught by Feng from right under his nose.

Then there are the rumors of Salem having an enclave of survivors eking out a life and protecting their own
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Salem.

Town of sex and witchery.
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welp heres trevor... i will be gone most of the day tomorow so dont be too brutal... looking at you DD.


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Besides spelling it looks good.
Norse gods making me like o.0
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@DeadDrop oh yeah I only ran the history through spell check should probably do with the rest of the sheet
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Posted from mobile so its short
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I like him but haven't considered an outsider from a Trading partner city joining the Expedition. The reason for this is that Lasthope is a Democracy but to vote you must be a Citizen. This vote even includes Jain's position which in a 75% vote or more she can be removed and another commander elected, even turning the expedition around and heading home. This is done so that people don't feel as if they live in a Military Junta and they don't follow orders blindly.

It will need approval if he stands as he is or if his story is rewritten to draw him into Lasthope as either a Trooper or Scout.

Oh and his Bow could be replaced with a finely crafted Ash longbow or laminated recurve bow with precision sharpened broadheads and steamed shafts with goose feather fetching.
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@RumikoOhara well if you don't mind I think I'll wait see if the others don't like him I'll change it up so then so he was accepted into last hope
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As one of your first sticking points on the other submitted character was that she was an outsider I think sbould stick here as well; Even where allies are involved. Afterall this is a quest to improve Lasthope. Even someone sent from an allied group will have that groups needs before even Lasthope's. It would make sense for someone like that to join the second expedition or third, so they can ask for or claim stuff Lasthope doesn't want/need.

Also are we fast forwarding through the actual sweep or?
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Here is my character! Feel free to tell me if I need to adjust anything, or if I should explain something more thoroughly. I will go through it more when I don't have tired brain.



@DeadDrop answered all of my qualms with the sheet. You can find his list at this link, @Asher890.

welp heres trevor... i will be gone most of the day tomorow so dont be too brutal... looking at you DD.



And again, @Dnafein made my points for me. @ReusableSword

In consideration to your question, @Dnafein, I would rather us draw out the searches (maybe 3-5 posts). I know there is a lot of houses to search, but spending time searching at least one house or two before summing it up would make it feel less rushed. Of course, this is just my opinion, so you would want to ask @RumikoOhara and @Wick too.
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So one more suggestion before i overhaul him. Would it be okay if for the last 3 years he was living with them as a citizen and representative of New Fort Stevens as part of their allianc? Or they could have just joined straight up and became an outpost kind of thing with last hope. His father would go for this as he would know about the battle of the locks and would deem them worthy basicaly.
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Wifi is back.

Lewd turned to max???
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So one more suggestion before i overhaul him. Would it be okay if for the last 3 years he was living with them as a citizen and representative of New Fort Stevens as part of their allianc? Or they could have just joined straight up and became an outpost kind of thing with last hope. His father would go for this as he would know about the battle of the locks and would deem them worthy basicaly.


The last is more feasible, Comber has turned Lasthope into almost Sparta without the baggage and he would accept Fort Stevens into Lasthope as long as the Meet to vote in their own community and show up for important votes.

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Alright I can work with that thank you
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@Wick muh text -.-
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What? You picked the same color? No biggie Only becomes an issue if we write together.There are actually a lot of blues in here. Maybe I will change it up.
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