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@Cherrywitch yesss m'dear, we're still in the orientation and a few others want a flashback anyways, drop your char here (in ooc) first please~
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Name: Raphael “Raph” Offgood
Age: 15
Race: Actually is a changeling from the seelie court of fairies, meaning he was swapped for a human child and grew up in a human’s family, which is where he gets the name “Offgood.” If asked, Raph will swear he is human, because he finds it embarrassing to be called a “fairy.”
Gender: Male
Proficiency/Abilities: Raph is a light magician, able to conduct light into weapons. He has minor healing magic, but he barely knows how to use it. Raph inherited the skill of mind manipulation as well, but at his current level it only works on humans with weakened minds and is more of a suggestion rather than full control over their bodies.
Likewise, Raph suffers from chronic migraine, and if he is put in a place without any form of light, he will becoming weaker and weaker and can eventually even die without it.
Identification: Due to his fae genes, Raph is quite short, barely making it above five feet. He has a very feminine face, with wide beautiful auburn eyes surrounded with thick black-brown eyelashes as well as thin golden eyebrows to match his groomed straight medium length hair. He has a thin nose and thick lips, always seen with some sort of layers of roped bracelets and ear piercings at random. Raph is usually seen in a long green jacket with a white sleeveless undershirt, black skinny jeans and black converse. He is often chewing gum or has a lollipop in his mouth, generally appearing unamused.
Personality: Raph isn’t the most talkative of kids, in fact he usually keeps to himself. He’s quite sarcastic and judge mental, someone easily annoyed by others. He usually doesn’t get his work done and if he does he does it at his own pace when he wants to, often getting distracted easily by minut details. Raph can be temperamental and aggressive if you pester him too much, but he never looks to hurt anyone. Underneath it all he’s not a bad kid, he’s just not friendly.
Backstory: As mentioned previously, Raph is a changeling. The true Offgood son was swapped with him at birth, allowing Raph to grow up in a well off human home. He grew up his entire life believing he was human, though he detested the luxurious lifestyle he was in. Raph was a thief and generally acted out at school, so the Offgoods had to homeschool him.
Recently, his fae mother returned to collect him as his powers emerged, but Raph was furious at her for giving him away. He ran away from home, and stumbled upon the academy, where he took up residency.
Originally, Raph was just a squatter that they repeatedly tried to drive away, but once they found it useless and saw how well adept he was with his powers, they enrolled him as a new student.
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@Cherrywitch ...hmm, seems alright. The Headmaster probably knows of his nature as a changeling but keeps it a secret, and enrolls him because he's got talent. also, does he have fairy wings?
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@OliveYou Yea that’s what I meant sorry it was unclear. And no, it’s one of the reasons his mother wants him to return to the fae court because he can’t sprout his wings on his own.
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@Cherrywitch okay, accepted! post it in the character tab please~
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@Cherrywitch If Raph isn't a bad guy why is he stealing wallets?
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@Insert Alias Hehe, hes kinda a pick pocket, but the type that’ll realize he has no reason to really take them and so just slips it back later untouched. He’s not bad, he’s just a little messy.
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@Cherrywitch mhm. I guess he's just trying to get ahold on how much power he has (but Headmaster's gonna keep a close eye on him owo)
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@AGenericUser Fenine is such a snob im laughing so much right now
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@OliveYou

Thank you! I've wanted to write a character like him for such a long time. And boy am I loving writing him - turns out writing a snob is really fun. And I'm really enjoying writing his search for inspiration. It's a little weird writing a writer, and I love it.
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he's amazing. writing abt writing is certainly... confusing, but you explain it well!
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If you guys are still accepting new members I could have a cs up in about an hour.
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@pandapolio yup, you'll just appear in the orientation with the others. :)
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@OliveYouk I'll get it out tonight. (Sorry if I wasn't clear about the hour thing, meant 1 hour from seeing the go ahead.)
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Please tell me what needs to be improved on it. Thank you.
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@pandapolio capitalization on the sentence starts, and you're going to have to be VERY careful about not making him into a godlike figure with infinite power or something. it's good that he has a damper - it uses tons of energy - but be careful. otherwise, he seems alright. just be cautious around randomly jumping from time to time (since that would probably take the most of all; maybe too much would kill him?)
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@OliveYou Ok I will fix the capitalization. He doesn't yet have the power to time jump, but he can just subtly manipulate it, like slow or speed it up. That also takes much energy and he uses it very rarely. Thank you. Am I accepted?
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@pandapolio yes, you may put it in the character tab now.
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@pandapolio your hider looks like it messed up...
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