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I just noticed that most of the people here are way taller and stronger than Lima. After a while, she might try to climb someone or make them carry her.

Yes.

Because of the character's sheer buffness, her childish side will shine through when they all get close.

I can see it now.
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@tobiax

Fixed my CS.

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Curious about how Ginto and my charac would interact. Prob good friends judging by what I see.

I just noticed that most of the people here are way taller and stronger than Lima. After a while, she might try to climb someone or make them carry her.

Yes.

Because of the character's sheer buffness, her childish side will shine through when they all get close.

I can see it now.


.... Trey totally would. Especially since he doesn't get tired like normal people.
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@HueMan I'd think so. Team MGNT is/ was pretty tight, so it would probably be a pleasant surprise for the both of them to find themselves in the same mission, if not a part of a team. Imagine Ginto being all scowly and having this murderous expression on her face as the rest of the team gathers around, and suddenly, Trey's hollering and the moment she sees him, Ginto has this excited smile tugging up her lips. If this was an anime, cue the disbelieving surprise of the characters. Some would be face-planting, I'd imagine. Face-planting while skidding on the floor, dust flying around.

*sighs* I miss watching anime.
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I just noticed that most of the people here are way taller and stronger than Lima. After a while, she might try to climb someone or make them carry her.

Yes.

Because of the character's sheer buffness, her childish side will shine through when they all get close.

I can see it now.

I agree wholeheartedly to this.

@HueManThank.

@Elle Santiago Edit is good, thank.
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.... Trey totally would. Especially since he doesn't get tired like normal people.

Ha, don't tempt her. She might ride him like a mighty steed! Up until they actually have to fight, in which case, she'll probably let go begrudgingly.
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Ha, don't tempt her. She might ride him like a mighty steed! Up until they actually have to fight, in which case, she'll probably let go begrudgingly.

In a tabletop game I play, our Gnome Oracle tried this with the Thricrene Warpriest.
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Ha, don't tempt her. She might ride him like a mighty steed! Up until they actually have to fight, in which case, she'll probably let go begrudgingly.


Cute version:



Not so cute version:



Choose wisely.
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"Tried"? I assume that the Gnome got thrown around?

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Psh, while it would look like the cute version; in actuality, she would be willing to scream as they go to war. So, it would end up with the not so cute version.
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@Polaris North No, he just didn't let her. Except when we had to run across trapped floor and onto a lowering wood platform.
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Aw, at least she still got the ride in the end I would suppose.
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I'll throw my name into the hat.
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First draft, might need to tweak wording later, but I wanted to make sure I had a product to show. There are two sheets referenced here that'll be following before too long.


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Plot hole- Semblances only work when you have Aura.
Also, let's be real. It doesn't look like your character's really based on Surtr entirely. There are more creative ways to pay homage. I'm a fan, but this is a bit much.
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@HereComesTheSnow Let me see what you've got.
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Also, let's be real. It doesn't look like your character's really based on Surtr entirely. There are more creative ways to pay homage. I'm a fan, but this is a bit much.


..... to be fair I'm just a happier version of Genos.... so... Penny (rip). But Genos.... kinda Ironwood? Looks like Mercury.

Derp.
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@HueMan Ye, but you're not literally either of them with the same themes. You weren't going for happy Genos, I just read your whole CS, and thought "this reminds me of a Genos". You also didn't pick an image that looks exactly like any of them. Okay, well, the hair, kind of like Mercury. The general facial structure and how he dresses and his motif(s)? Not like Mercury. Except from the knees down, haha.
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@AlternateMan So, there are some thematic disjoints and personality-to-combat inconsistencies that really stick out here. Also, your Semblance is way out there and doesn't really fit the character's personality all that much.
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@HueMan Ye, but you're not literally either of them with the same themes. You weren't going for happy Genos, I just read your whole CS, and thought "this reminds me of a Genos". You also didn't pick an image that looks exactly like any of them. Okay, well, the hair, kind of like Mercury. The general facial structure and how he dresses and his motif(s)? Not like Mercury. Except from the knees down, haha.


Secretly I just copied off of Genos muahahaha
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@Krayzikk <Snipped quote by tobiax> Plot hole- Semblances only work when you have Aura.
Also, let's be real. It doesn't look like your character's really based on Surtr entirely. There are more creative ways to pay homage. I'm a fan, but this is a bit much.


Thought image might be a bit much, even if it was an alternate version. Forgot some of the canon rules on Aura I've been playing in another RWBY game with its own internal rules because we didn't get any Aura exposition at that point. I'll rework it a bit.

Otherwise, though, Surtr really is the primary inspiration. I could do a section by section breakdown of what came from where. With the exception of its relation to blood, which is not from Surtr, even her Semblance is; Surtr's role in Ragnarok is to literally burn the whole world. It even affects where she's from, being from the southernmost city on that continent rather than the northernmost.
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@HueManExcept you didn't because Genos is a cyborg for justice and revenge

@Krayzikk I get what you mean. I know what Surtr is, however, it's still a bit too... on the nose. Plus the Semblance doesn't really work.
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