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I worked out more details about Piero, but I still don’t know how to feel about it. Anyone has some thoughts/advice?


- A picture of someone without the mask would probably help imagine him,
- If you want "The Damn Pub" to have more effect maybe put it in bold, italics or maybe both and all lowercase? the damn pub!
- Perhaps talk about the repercussions of Piero not being that sociable with the group/settlement,
- Maybe recount what he's done to people after the lovers' event, has he become vile towards other dam engineers? Has he hurled abuse at them, shoved them even?
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Ah, it looks fine to me. Indeed, a picture with a face would be nicer, in this case. Also, maybe to clarify: Kids go to school up until like 15, from they they start a traineeship with a job. They can change once, which is what your character did, so this is fine.

I feel like this is enough, we'll get to know him better in the story itself.
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Ok, I updated the picture, that’s a pretty good general idea of what he looks like.
I’ll wait before adding the things that @pokemad1 suggested, as they could be discovered in the story.
Thanks!
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Also, oh my, would Astor like to not be single? ;)


He'd be down for a relationship, but his work keeps him quite busy, and requires him to be quite friendly to everyone. Real life has taught me that this can put quite a strain on a relationship - a partner starts to feel like they're not as important as a job, or they become suspicious that the other is a bit too nice to other people.

That feeling when you spend ages finding the best picture to go with your character but then you see that someone (@SonofJET) is using a picture that looks oh so similar to what I have.... ("o.o)

Dengit, want to be brothers or should I change my guy?


Brothers, cousins, people who just happen to look alike... I'm fine with whatever. :)
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Brothers, cousins, people who just happen to look alike... I'm fine with whatever. :)


I'll finish writing my guy then :)
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He'd be down for a relationship, but his work keeps him quite busy, and requires him to be quite friendly to everyone. Real life has taught me that this can put quite a strain on a relationship - a partner starts to feel like they're not as important as a job, or they become suspicious that the other is a bit too nice to other people.

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Sounds like you had a jealous partner. Luckily, I’m not jealous fast. Fay just will have a huge crush then 😜
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Actually, I was the jealous one, but we worked it out. I had to learn that many people have different levels of friendliness based on their upbringing. :P

And one of my gamer buddies just had to deal with the issue of a woman he was interested in being too busy with work for a relationship.

No one is safe from being used as inspiration for my writing - not even myself. :D
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Makes for the best writing.
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I'd be interested in rolling a medic :)

I imagine a character who's been an assistant for so long to the aging town medic. Ya know, the old dude who can't remember his name or where he put his tool kit because dementia has taken over?

Instead, hire the new person, they'll take real good care of you, even if they're still learning...
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@Rawk Sounds like a plan to me ;)
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@Days, about how long ago did the "accident" happen that tore the two settlements apart?

Also (not sure if this was addressed), but what else exists outside of the walls of the Firefly/Water Leaf settlement? Can people venture out there if needed? Do they need armed escorts?
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The “Lover’s Accident” happened about a month ago, I think that might be a good place to start our story.

Outside the walls there’s ruins and greenlands. There’s not much else, except for some rogue “roaches” pirates. When people go out or to the dam, guards will be present because of the wild animals and possible other threats.
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That brings up a good point, @Days. How has the environment changed since the earthquakes? From what I remember, there aren't too many dangerous creatures endemic to the French/European countryside.

From what I've read, in France specifically, there are ticks, black widows, asps, wolverines, brown bears, and wild boars. Expanding out to Europe in general, there are also Eurasian wolves, and the ocean has typical ocean stuff (Portugese man'o war, sharks) - not that that seems too likely to come up.

How has the loss of human population effected the animal populations? Without competition for space/resources, I'd imagine the prey animal numbers skyrocketing (deer, boars, hares, etc.), and the predator species multiplying accordingly.
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Well, I am no wildlifee expert. But it seems to me it is as you said. Specifically wolves will have a bigger population, since there are more roaming grounds. I feel the specifics of flora and fauna or not needed. Any not accurate description of someone can easily be ignored.

TL;DR: wolves, bears, and lots of ‘m.
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@Days CS draft :)

I added a "Personality" line as well since I find those to be fun to read about a character, and it also helps a as a guide for RPing said character.


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@Rawk Looking good 👌🏻

Is there any reason why she is from Water Leafs instead of Fireflies? It would seem like quite a lonely RP if you're the only one in the settlement. I'd prefer most if not all characters to be from Fireflies.
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Honestly thought I'd be able to finish the app by now but alas it wasn't so... I'm going off the grid for three days of camping very soon and so the earliest that I could post him (my character) would be late Friday... Sorry guys :(
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@pokemad1 Oof, not to be avoided. We may or may not start without you, but you can easily jump in love. Have fun!
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@Rawk Looking good 👌🏻
Is there any reason why she is from Water Leafs instead of Fireflies? It would seem like quite a lonely RP if you're the only one in the settlement. I'd prefer most if not all characters to be from Fireflies.


Oh...I thought we could choose since both options were there, and honestly, she was going to be fairly neutral in her dealings with either settlement since "the wounded are still wounded".

But if it makes it easier for the social structure, then I can easily change it.
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@Rawk

The neutral is great and will still be good. I'm sorry, I should have specified better that I prefer everyone to be from fireflies. Extra characters or NPC's can be from waterleafs though. But for now, let's start at Fireflies.
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