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It’s none of my business what people say of me and think of me. I am what I am and I do what I do. I expect nothing and accept everything. And it makes life so much easier.
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“There is no such thing as a new idea. It is impossible. We simply take a lot of old ideas and put them into a sort of mental kaleidoscope. We give them a turn and they make new and curious combinations. We keep on turning and making new combinations indefinitely; but they are the same old pieces of colored glass that have been in use through all the ages.”
- Mark Twain

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Berlin was quiet in the wrong ways. No children laughing in courtyards, no trams clattering past shop windows. Just the wind sifting through ruins and the occasional knock of loose bricks falling like brittle bones from a time forgotten. The war had ended two years ago, but the silence felt worse now. Like the city was waiting for something.

Like it hadn’t exhaled since the last bomb dropped.

Detective Emil Weiss stepped over a collapsed balcony rail and into the shell of what used to be a tenement lobby. Half the floor was missing, the rest slick with rain and ash. His dog Sam was close by his side, and the man gave him a reassuring scratch behind the ear. The dog was tense and had been all week, but Emil trusted his instincts more than most men’s. This was the third time in the span of a week he had been in or around this city block, searching for clues on yet another murder in connection with three others that have been a real thorn in the side of law enforcement. The war wasn’t ugly enough without the senseless slaughter of innocence even during a time when things should be in recovery.

As the sun was nearly set, Emil scanned the growing shadows, when he heard the faintest of sounds. Somewhere between the slight gusts of wind whistling through buildings and the tick of his wristwatch. A woman’s voice? Distant. Echoing. Speaking his name.

Not yelling. Not begging. Just…saying it.

“Emil.”

He turned full circle. No one. No movement. The street was empty except for a flickering sign above an abandoned tailor’s shop across the street that hadn’t worked in ages. Sam’s ears went flat. Emil stayed still a moment longer. That stillness was a detective’s instinct, which essentially gave the moment a chance to unfold and perhaps reveal itself. He thought he saw something shift in the third-floor window of the tailor’s building. A curtain drawn back by unseen hands. But when he looked again, it was just broken glass and darkness.

He made no note of it in his book. Not yet. Besides, this wouldn't have been the first time since the end of the war when he was hearing or seeing things that may or may not have been there.

Instead, he clicked his tongue and he and Sam moved forward again. The dog didn’t bark, but rather kept glancing over his shoulder like something was following and keeping pace with the pair, and far enough not to be seen.

By the time they cleared the building and crossed the alley toward the next, the voice was gone, and the light rain had slowly turned to mist.

The plane crash almost a week ago still buzzed in his mind, and the chatter through various Allied news sources and street-level whispers were sparse and unusual to say the least. However, regardless of the strange occurrences, Emil continued to feel something in his bones: Berlin was waking up.

Or maybe it had never gone to sleep.
It’s been made also it’s kinda irrelevant to the story… it’s like a plane crash you would see in a newspaper


Nice opening post!

So did this happen at a point where our characters would know about it already? As you said, maybe they read about it in a newspaper.
@Rawk

By the way could you post Emil in the character section?


Done :)
Emil Weiss

Gender: M
Age: 47
Nationality: German


Personal Effects:


  • Walther P38 pistol with leather shoulder holster
  • Extra loaded magazine, secured in a small belt pouch
  • Leather gloves, carried in coat pocket
  • Small canvas evidence pouch
  • Leather police identification wallet
  • Leather notebook with pencil
  • Small folding knife
  • Tarnished silver pre-war pocket watch
  • Pack of 6 hand-rolled cigarettes
  • Dented brass lighter
  • Handkerchief
  • Coin pouch with a mix of Reichsmarks and Allied currency
  • Pack of chewing gum, courtesy of American GIs
  • Small water-damaged portrait photos of his late wife and missing daughter



Background:

Occupation:

Homicide Detective with Kriminalpolizei.

Backstory:

Confidential Journal Entry - 1947

I was born on a quiet street in Charlottenburg, back when Wilhelm II still had his portrait hanging in every schoolhouse. My father was a train conductor, and my mother worked her fingers raw just to keep soup on the table. When the Great War came, he marched off with a crisp salute and a promise to be home by Christmas. We buried an empty box two years later. After that, it was just me, my mother, and my little sister Anna. She was the light of our house, sharp as a tack, always humming something sweet.

Sadly, Spanish flu took her early and fast, and I never had a chance to say goodbye.

In 1924, I joined the Kriminalpolizei, or “Kripo” as it was shortened to, figuring if I couldn’t fix the world, maybe I could at least hold a corner of it together. I worked homicide mostly, focusing on murders, disappearances, the kind of cases that crawl under your skin and stay there. I wasn’t the fastest or the loudest, but I had a nose for the truth, and I kept my reports clean. Didn’t take bribes, didn’t look the other way. That made me a pain in the ass to some, but reliable to the ones that mattered.

Then the Nazis came, and the whole department turned sideways. Half the force put on black uniforms and started sniffing out “undesirables.” I kept my head down and my file thin. When the war hit full on, I reenlisted just to get away from what Kripo had become.

Now it’s 1947 and I’m back in Berlin, walking beat-up streets that don’t know if they’re dead or just sleeping. My wife, Klara, didn’t make it. I was told exposure to something nasty during the final raids. My daughter, Lotte, vanished in the confusion when everything fell apart. Some nights I hear her voice in my dreams, calling from somewhere deep underground.

I keep working cases though, which keeps my hands busy, my mind half-sharp.

The city talks to you if you know how to listen...broken windows, blood on the bricks, whispers in the ruins. Something’s wrong here, more than just war trauma or ghosts of bad decisions. The air feels...tight. Like Berlin’s holding its breath, waiting for something to crawl out of the dark.

Despite all of it, I keep showing up...
I'm going outta town for a little bit so it's gonna impede the rp until around july 17th, BUT i will still be active.


No rush, my dude!
<Snipped quote by Rawk>

Maybe it’s because of my phone idk, but thank you🙏🙏🙏


Could be. I used to RP a lot on my phone back when I was taking a train to and from work everyday. I think I'd gotten it down to a science, but it still sucked, esp bc (at least at the time) Guild's site was not mobile friendly.


your image address you pasted didn't have the file extension, so it doesn't know it's an image.


roleplayerguild.com/users/adeline/ima…


The way you embed an image into a post is you need to put it in the [img] tags, like this:

[img paste link here.. [/img

You need the closing brackets. If I add them in the example, it disappears, lol

Accepted but when it comes to IC posting, do it in third person.


Oh yeah, I only write in third-person. That backstory was an exception.
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