[OOC] Kingdoms of the Sky Online.

[Ryu]

deadpixel101 said
Ryu. Have at it.

No problems with your CS as far as I can see, you explained everything well, her class and her skills, so it's not very overpowered or underpowered.

Good job. You get the...

RYU'S STAMP OF APPROVAL

[Tyrant from the West]

Pixie send it again idk i think i might have declined it on accident. Or maybe we are on diff servers idk.

[DragonBeastMode]

Well I wouldn't know what the OP part would be, so it probably wouldn't happen, and Silver and Dead can tell you that I'm am far from having an op char. xD. So now I just wait on Ike.

[Ryu]

Detailed

I'm not going to be kind on this one.

Alright, let's start. Small CS, so this should be relatively quick.

Okay, the class.

It looks to me that you have no sense of direction of where you want to bring your character to be. Why does your character become deadlier when they level up? Your character is a TANK. A TANK. Let me emphasize that.

A TANK.

Tanks are meat shields, they receive tons of damage and do little damage for the sake of their team mates. This class will not work out at all. Right now? This class is a DPS class more than anything else just from the description. If you want a DPS class, change it to a DPS class. If you want a Tank class, don't be ignorant and listen to what Ike said to you on PMs and what I'm about to say to you right now.

Let's see what catches my eye?

Strengths: High HP, Strong Attacks, High Physical Defense, High Critical Attack Rate

No. No. No.

Not possible, you are a TANK. You want that? Go be a DPS and remove the high HP. A tank cannot have all four of these things, a tank sacrifices TWO of these things to actually be a tank, can you tell which ones they are? If not, Strong Attacks and High Critical Attack Rate. Those are for DPS, a Tank almost NEVER has Strong Attacks or High Critical Attack rate, sure, a Tank can land a lucky Crit Chance, but that's rare.

Weaknesses: Low Attack Speed

This is good, Tanks are meat shields, they do not attack fast, so good job on this aspect.

Jobs: Blacksmith, Armorsmith, Alchemist

Simply put? No. This is the holy trinity of the crafting skills, basically, and I don't think you can have all three of them WITHOUT it being OP. Instead, have your character know two of them and then have your character learn the third one (Alchemist) later on from another character.

Passive
No. You are a tank. You are not a DPS, you want your character to be a tank? Then stop trying to make him into a DPS class. This passive increases endurance, but in the worst way possibles. Tanks do not have critical chance, so landing one would be rare, and he gains back 20% HP back? Even on a DPS class, THAT IS TOO OP. At the most, it should be 7% for a DPS class if they had this passive AT MAXIMUM LEVEL. Remove this passive entirely and add in a better one to increase endurance/survivability for your Tank character.

Active One
This skill is great for saving some team mates and getting them off their back, but 25% HP at a cost? No. That is too high and that will get your character killed. Fix that ratio and turn it into something less, like 5%.

Active Two
Nope. This skill won't work, change it, and if you turned this class into DPS, that ratio is way too high and that time is also way too high.

Active Three
No. You are a tank. A tank. Not a DPS class, a tank. Do you want to keep this? Change your class into a DPS.

Equipment List: Chain Armor, Great Sword, pike
You are a tank. Would a tank be able to run around in chain armor on the battlefield killing his enemies with his OP abilities? Hell no. A tank would be the first one to arrive on the battlefield and be the slowest one out of all the characters but have the most armor and HP.

Edit: This was the revision before I edited it to be much more nicer and shorter.

[Hibiki No Echo]

If anyone is wondering where Chrys might appear from, chances are he's looking at your window right now.

[Ryu]

Hibiki No Echo said
If anyone is wondering where Chrys might appear from, chances are he's looking at your window right now.

( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

[CoyoteKisses]

Hibiki No Echo said
If anyone is wondering where Chrys might appear from, chances are he's looking at your window right now.

oh shit, his next title should be The Pervy Peeker

[Silver Fox]

Hibiki No Echo said
If anyone is wondering where Chrys might appear from, chances are he's looking at your window right now.

or being cuddled by a large kitty guy

I mean whaaaa?

[DragonBeastMode]

I could take out of the critical stuff then, but the chain armor I think is ok I mean, I know alot of games when tank classes wear chain armor, and having those three is not op, Ike didn't say anything about which three we can have, we can three, just alchemy would be my weak job skill. Took out the hp thing, and made it defense, which is good for a tank class, and I already said my char is not a dps it's a tank aoe, class, uses area attacks to attract enemies, so they would have some type of good attack power. I don't think I went to out the box, my char is now a mix of every type of class. But I can take out the crit part and make the passive something else.

[Tyrant from the West]

Welp now that the post is done its time to league 8D

[Ryu]

DragonBeastMode said
I could take out of the critical stuff then, but the chain armor I think is ok I mean, I know alot of games when tank classes wear chain armor, and having those three is not op, Ike didn't say anything about which three we can have, we can three, just alchemy would be my weak job skill. Took out the hp thing, and made it defense, which is good for a tank class, and I already said my char is not a dps it's a tank aoe, class, uses area attacks to attract enemies, so they would have some type of good attack power. I don't think I went to out the box, my char is now a mix of every type of class. But I can take out the crit part and make the passive something else.

I didn't diss the chain armor. I dissed the character wearing the chain armor. Your character was basically running around in chain armor bashing people with his weapons. As a tank with chain armor, you don't do that because chain armor is heavy.

[deadpixel101]

Tyrant from the West said
Pixie send it again idk i think i might have declined it on accident. Or maybe we are on diff servers idk.

Please.

Everyone.

Call me Pixie.

It makes me so oddly happy for some reason.

I don't even care that it probably sounds really lame or girly or whatever.

Ryu said
No problems with your CS as far as I can see, you explained everything well, her class and her skills, so it's not very overpowered or underpowered.Good . You get the...

WOO.

I have made it a mission to get my CSs accepted by hard markers on the first time.

So far I've gotten right :D

Now to just wait for Ike...

[Silver Fox]

deadpixel101 said
Please.Everyone.Call me Pixie.It makes me so oddly happy for some reason. I don't even care that it probably sounds really lame or girly or whatever.WOO.I have made it a mission to get my CSs accepted by hard markers on the first time.So far I've gotten right :D Now to just wait for Ike...

Man Prince already makes your characters feel girly so why not, Pixie?

And you did better than me. Told ya you were awesome. XD

[Ebil Bunny]

Was my character accepted? I read a few pages after my CS, and it didn't seem like anyone mentioned it.

[Silver Fox]

Ebil Bunny said
Was my character accepted? I read a few pages after my CS, and it didn't seem like anyone mentioned it.

If they were accepted, Ike would have (unless he forgot) put them on the second post of the OOC. If they aren't just pm him xD

[MyCatGinger]

Dragon. << Pixie. *furiously paws at*
I'm not...impatient or anything, and I totally can wait for Ike's final, final judgement on the characters, but...>> If you two post, it'll be 12/15 and that'll be great and at that point we can turn around and make more interactions happen! The remaining three characters, the Light Knight Pyro and DaDrummer's Character and G3njii can drop in and play too. ^^
Ah, I hope I'm not being a bother, Ike! I'm just so excited! And I hope we're not moving at a pace that's too fast!

[DragonBeastMode]

I think is better now. I took out the crit, had to change skills around, but it should be better. Can you check again Ryu^^.

[Pyromania99]

deadpixel101 said
Please.Everyone.Call me Pixie.It makes me so oddly happy for some reason.

I shall call you Pony as you have the default Avatar still.

I need to post in the IC. . .

[Silver Fox]

MyCatGinger said
Dragon. << Pixie. *furiously paws at*I'm not...impatient or anything, and I totally can wait for Ike's final, final judgement on the characters, but...>> If you two post, it'll be 12/15 and that'll be great and at that point we can turn around and make more interactions happen! The remaining three characters, the Light Knight Pyro and DaDrummer's Character and G3njii can drop in and play too. ^^Ah, I hope I'm not being a bother, Ike! I'm just so excited! And I hope we're not moving at a pace that's too fast!

Ginger Dragons character is not accepted yet I think xD

[MyCatGinger]

Seriously? o.O I thought it was. Like, in the main big blob post in the beginning. Hence assumed Grand Total. EDIT: Okay not accepted my mistake. ;;
It shouldn't be a problem if Ryu's not amping up his skills but dulling them down for a two-day character, eh? I'm sure Ike wouldn't mind.
Would you? Ike-sama? <3 *bats eyelashes*
Unless...we're maxed out for now.