hahahahaha XD its okay, I mean I could call it Orean Cause but I want a short line that would early reel people in, not too much but make peek there interest like... you I put (Magical School?) if making a new one I want something else though.... need to brain storm but I get distracted to easily...
Here is the very short summary of the school
History of Orean Cause Orean Cause was constructed during the 18th century by a group of pioneers who discovered the land while searching for settlement. It was first the town hall but it burned down after two months of its construction. Many rum0ors and tales told in how the academy was used to be a hospital or ancient burial grounds but never were confirmed. The very first name of the school was Acadamia Novum, it later changed as the modern world began to progress.
It became one of the most famous school on the land, almost being the countries national school. The discovery of the supernatural of the school was in the late 19th century after a small incident that changed the school system. The Terra Arcanus Society decided to (Un this is where I need help with),
well there is one part here that Un type in that says that the note with the magic revealing the hidden magic society will reveal itself once the person with magic touches it even if you don't know you are magic or the power hasn't a waken yet... but I want that surprise factor, like I have my twins who are children of nephilims yet their powers isn't awaken yet I want them to be surprised or maybe other who as well to have that part where they can be like "Woah sh--- I can blow stuff up!"
I don't want to change much on what un Type but just that part is making go confused... how do I keep the surprise factor yet with that note with the magical ink.
its defiantly a hard one....
maybe revising this text would help?
"You usually know this gift as "magic", "superpowers", "psychic abilities", or whatever mumbo jumbo party trick associates with those. Or you don't have a power as you believe, but something strange inside you caused that ink to appear in your eyes, and you actually have a power but you haven't used it yet. It's not even possible that you absolutely have no power yet you even managed to read that secret society letter, because you really must have something strange in you to have seen it."
After editing the Op Un made here is what I got, its not much I think what have i edited and much better grammar by Un...hehehe.... Anyway here, check it out if I made any mistakes. There still something I need to be clarified but hopefully they will be answered soon.
Admission Notice
Greetings!
We are happy to inform you that after your application materials have been carefully reviewed, you were deemed suitable for enrollment in the Orean Cause in your chosen grade school/high school/college pedagogical program. We entrust to you the necessary knowledge and skills to be given in your upcoming years of higher education to put the fruits of your labor in both your studies and occupations in achieving your ambitions, whether to have you be recognized by the entire planet, to amass large amounts of wealth, to get all the ladies and men by your sides, to simply raise your own family, or to reach whatever you aspire to be or to do or just do nothing at all.
Bear in mind the following: 1. Dormitories are available for those who need such. You will be paired with another student and this is co-ed. 2. Orean Cause accepts many scholarship programs to fulfill the needs of the troubled, talented, or both. 3. Please familiarize yourself with the guidelines to be presented within the first few days.
We hope you have a good time with us in your days of that your dreams would come true.
May destiny guide your faith, study and hope
Regards, Orean Cause Administration
Written in special ink on the back of the paper, which only reveals itself when the hands that lay on it bears magic or anything supernatural:
IMPORTANT REMINDER FROM THE TERRA ARCANUS SOCIETY Any unworldly "special talent" you have must be kept hidden from the regulars, or else not only the Orean Cause or the Terra Arcanus Society that runs the school, but also the entire community of the "gifted" (and that includes you) may be plagued by controversy. Such an occurrence will result in disorder among the local populace, or worse the entire world if the news spreads to mainstream media or even capturing you and ended up being test subjects in an unknown project. I, the headmistress will personally deal with any mishaps like this, but do not create a problem where it's beyond my capability to suppress. Don’t dare to test me…dangerous consequences will be made.
Second note: Orean Cause offers magical training services at 1 AM, hence the curfew at 12 o'clock. If staff approaches you and attempts to scold you, simply inform them that you are to attend the magical training service if desired, and they will lead you to the rooms where the classes are held. Be careful though that not all staff is informed of the training service you can identify the ones who do know with an armband with the Orion constellation symbol on it. If you do meet a staff with no armband do say that you going to meet with me.
We hope you understand this reminder.
Sincerely, Cornelia Heidelberg T.A.S. Secretary, Orean Cause Administration Head
Orean Cause was constructed during the 18th century by a group of pioneers who discovered the land while searching for settlement. It was first the town hall but it burned down after two months of its construction. Many rumors and tales were told in how the academy was used to be a hospital or ancient burial grounds but never were confirmed. The very first name of the school was Acadamia Novum, it later changed to Orean Cause as the modern world began to progress. The building never changed exteriorly only in the inside it did. An old looking school at the outside yet a complex and very modernize school in the inside.
It became one of the most famous school on the land, almost being the countries national school. Even though it’s a very grand school it wis quite open to the public with scholarship offers and lenders causing a high population there. The discovery of the supernatural of the school was in the late 19th century after a small incident that changed the school system to cope with the Supernatural or the weird. The Terra Arcanus Society decided to help with the problem and let them mostly control the magical students at least from exposing themselves to the public and helping them with their powers.
Here you are, standing by the gates, with the unsettling gaze of an enigmatic hooded statue that seems oddly misplaced looming over you.
Brochures, word of mouth, advertisements, family tradition- there are many things that got you here in this place. You would expect things as you would when you are transferred: new strangers to form bonds with, new places to explore and hang out, and new transformations to your lives.
Maybe you've been here for years. You might have your own squad of friends. Or a couple. Or none. You may have met many teachers, some of which you wish they were your parents, and some you believe are the personal servants of Satan. You might be a topnotcher. Or a stack of bricks. You might be a punching bag. You might be the person who throws punches at the bag, and has detention as a daily subject.
If you somehow read a letter from the mysterious organization of Terra Arcanus Society from the back of the admission notice that officially declared you an Orean Cause student, and you do know you have control over something strange and out of this world, then you know this place is not at all the school the normal see and you know that you are in for a hell of an experience.
You usually know this gift as "magic", "superpowers", "psychic abilities", or whatever mumbo jumbo party trick associates with those. You may actually have a power but you haven't used it to its true highest. If you don't have a power as you believe, then the note was never seen. The hidden in you may unlock in the future but it’s by your own hands that you can truly unlock it.
How did you even find you special talent? You might be born in a family of wizards and taught you it since you were born. Maybe some game of Cops and Robbers made you accidentally burn your former school's lawn. Or you got mad, gone hulk crazy and destroyed your own home. Or science did it. Or you tried finding it-- and succeeded-- after reading the Terra Arcanum's hidden letter. Whatever reason you have. Still, you are considered supernatural, and you decide to see that as good or bad. Or you simply just don't care.
Or you actually don't have a "speshul" gift, you simply never read the secret letter, and you're just going to live your school life the way it was meant to be. Or you just don’t know yet if you do have the power truly yet but maybe in due time you will. Good or bad, smart or stupid you decide you faith here. That is, if the special kids don't put you in their strange matters. And if they do…. Whetre you like it or not you deal with it.
Hi!! My name is destiny as you can see and stuff XD You might have seen this multiple times already but once more we are restarting! After a number of people left without saying anything we decided to restart a new one. This wonderful rebranded Opening was made by Unfortunately who will be my co-gm here! Better grammar and all this stuff!! Let give him/her around of applause! –claps loudly- I did some editing work, just a tiny bit I think, just fun and rainbows from here.
I am not really good in words but I have the heart for it! Also sorry if my grammar is bad…English is not my first language…I am glad that you are interested in this RP! As you can see this is a very open and free style (Not in typing or writing) rp, anything can happen! With permission of course that is very important! We treat each other like family and respect is needed. This is still my first rp to gm for the idea it self but I learned a lot from before and I stronger than ever!
I am a very kind person…a bit to kind but don’t test mew though I can be stand up very well as well! Also I am very open to a lot of things. There are something I would not tolerate but I am not shutting them off. You can contribute plot ideas and hopefully we can build a good community here!
I want to build a community off Rpers together here and hopefully we can all bond together! Lets make social links! (Persona!)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Commandments (Read them first!!) 1. No godmodding, no powerplaying, blah, blah. Yeah, we all know this one. Also… No Gary or Mary sues… 2. KEEP ALL YOUR BICKERING AND CONGRESS DEBATES IN PMS CHRIST'S SAKE! If not then I have to bring my war hammer! 3. Do consider if you will actually stick around, instead of just leaving suddenly like a redshirt and cluttering our Character tab. Don’t leave people without telling them at least. 4. Unless you can provide a valid argument, my and the co-GMs' words are absolute. (The Gm is very soft but the co-gms are tough so good luck breaking to them…) 5. No speedposting, no posts less than 4 lines. If I allowed those two, then i'd put this in the Free section. 6. If me and the co-GMs ask you to stop doing something bad, STOP. In the name of love! 7. 5 characters maximum. Too much and interaction vanishes. 8. Some plots may occur at some point in time. Feel free to contribute ideas. 9. If you want to get real kinky (bow chica wow wow) and want to get detailed about it, take it to the PM because mods and work. 10. Put your sheets in the OOC for review, instead of putting it directly to the Characters tab and cluttering it. 11. When you want to do something with another person’s character you need to ask permission first! No puppeting unless they allow it!
CS Time! Appearance: (First the human or humanize appearance of your character then if they have another form that as well. Also put in the height and weight of the character as well.)
Name: (Whatever your character is named.)
Nickname: (Something easier to call them)
Age: (For human students, you can be a grade school age but for more recommendation purposes high school to college ages are better. For human teachers, above 22. Emphasis on human since some age differently.)
Sex: (Male, female, trap, trans, both, non binary…any really o-o)
Job: (Staff characters only. Be a teacher or a janitor its all up to you!)
Powers: (Magical characters only but if you character has a power but doesn’t know ti yet you can put it there as well.)
Weaknesses: (Optional for regular humans, obligatory for anything else. For specification like fears or allergies or what they just can’t stand.)
Personality: (Character behavior. Short or long up to you.)
Skills: (Talents or something your character is really good at)
Hobbies: (What do they like to do on their spare time?)
Background: (Any length, as long as it comes with an explanation for enrolling in the orean Cause.)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Optionals: (anything else you want to add here, you have an option to put it or not such as in likes and dislikes)
Likes:
Dislikes:
Theme song:
Clubs:(Do they have an extracurricular activity the like to do?)
Dreams: (What to they dream for?)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Notes: - Certain characters, such as the Headmistress, the vice Headmaster, or a non-player T.A.S. member can be controlled by me and the co-GMs.
- Feel free to show off your characters' powers right away, as well as get their asses kicked by the administration heads.
-The campus and many other facilities are on the block where the statue stands. The village-looking settlements to the left hand side of the statue are the dormitories.
-Outside the school wall, which is two feel tall, is a semi modernize suburban area with a couple of shopping district and further on that is very modernize shibuya, new york style city.
What the semi modernize suburban area look like a bit…
Hey Evil...mind being my second co-gm, I think two co-gm would really help me! Also you think its good enough for the interest checck post now? I do want to post it now but not sure though.
