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The Twelve Labours

Hello, and welcome to the first entry in The Twelve Labours, a brand new writing contest alongside RPGC! As a little bit of a forward, I would like to issue a thanks to @mdk and the rest of the RPGC crew for being willing to work with me, helping to schedule our contests around each other. We both reached out and agreed to avoid a conflict of scheduling so that the people of the forum would not have to divide their attention between two great contests (Those of you who participated or voted in Inspired by a Song know just how much focus and time these eat up!). I would also like to thank @mahz, who offered to provide some technical assistance if necessary for the effort.

The Twelve Labours is intended to be much different to what those of you who were used to WotM in the Oldguild might be used to. For one thing, there is no voting, and there is no single winner! Instead, at the start of each contest, I will describe a challenge to be met. At the end of the contest, everyone who participated in the contest who managed to meet the criteria of the challenge while also adhering to a certain standard of quality expected of good storytelling is a winner! Wow!

Not to say I will be making things easy for anybody. The Twelve Labours, as a whole, is intended to challenge every participant as a writer and to push them outside of their comfort zone. Back before the Oldguild collapse, I had run several pilot sessions of The Twelve Labours in a private group called RPG Solace (Hello to any former members who might be out there). The results of those pilot sessions have led me to believe that most people will have more difficulty with the challenges than might be initially apparent. People even willingly submitted material they knew didn't meet the criteria of the challenge, because they couldn't do what the challenge specified (which is perfectly ok to do here as well. If you can't meet the challenge criteria but think the story should be seen anyway, submit it! You won't win anything, but we'll review it just like every other story).

As a general notice, please be aware that The Twelve Labours is intended to challenge writers, not to unhinge them. We will never present explicit or mature challenges. You can submit explicit and mature entries, but make sure you either follow the guild rules, or else post the story in a link offsite (any such stories will be specifically labeled as NSFW). This is reiterated in the basic Entry Rules below.

Also, each TTL challenge will be shorter than RPGC. Each submission period will LAST PRECISELY AND EXACTLY TWELVE DAYS, NO EXCEPTIONS, NO EXTENSIONS. There will follow a three day judging period in which I (and hopefully a few other judges, check out the discussion thread here for more details) will read every submitted story and determine whether it has passed the challenge criteria, as well as write a review for each. Since people are not voting on winning stories anymore, we can afford to have a shorter judging period! This all means that The Twelve Labours challenges will never take more than fifteen days! As of now, you can expect the next RPGC entry to be up on April 30th.
Entry Rules:

1. Jaffar's (left) thumb.
2. Follow the standard guild rules.
3. Obey the Dark Lord Sauron's rules as well (just to cover all the bases).
4. Follow MY rules too. Let it never be said we did not warn you.
5. Send your entry to @Terminal by April 30th.
6. Be sure to include whether or not you want your story to remain anonymous! I will add your name only if I am given your permission!
7. Any explicit/mature material must be kept off-site. I will only post links to them with NSFW notices.
8. I reserve the right to simply toss out any story if it doesn't possess a basic modicum of good sense and taste. Don't make me.
9. If your setting is borrowed from a franchise, make sure to include a disclaimer and credit the original inventor of the setting used.
Prizes:

Pending further developments by @mahz, the guild moderators, and the numerous contributors who are constantly attending to the site's functionality, every participant who submits an entry that clears the basic parameters of the challenge can win a cool forum title, as well as a trophy. In addition, we have a number of SECRET BONUS CHALLENGES, with any entry that meets their criteria having the chance to win additional trophies. These Bonus challenges are deliberately being kept secret in order to make sure everybody doesn't frame their stories in the same manner, but they will be revealed once the submission period has expired.

In addition, all winning entries will be saved to a public archive, a link to which will be permanently available in my signature! Winners will also be mentioned in the News section of the Guild. As a reminder, unless you specifically give me permission to include authorship of an entry, every posted story will remain anonymous.
The First Labour

"There is little difference between being invulnerable, and being indispensable."
Lord Vetinari, Discworld



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Here are all the submissions. As a general reminder, I have only included forum names if given permission by the author to do so - otherwise, these stories remain anonymous. Feel free to post reviews for these stories in the general conversation thread. Try to provide some helpful critiques and suggestions, and mention anything you liked.

Winners will be declared on May 4th, including those who cleared some of the secret bonus challenges. All winning entries will be saved in the Twelve Labours Archive with a permanent link in my signature, as well as mentioned in a report in the News section and General Discussion subforums. Once again, thanks to @mdk and the rest of the RPGC crew for helping to schedule The Twelve Labours. Another special thanks to @RomanAria and @CaughtInTheRiddle for volunteering as judges.

If you did not win, but feel you should have? Make an appeal to the judge who made the call for your entry (yes, you'll know which judge evaluated it). Keep it classy, and exercise some courtesy while making your case, and they might just reevaluate your entry. Please keep in mind, you only get the one appeal. Sometimes you just have to let it go.

DID I SCREW UP AND FORGET TO PUT YOUR STORY HERE? LOUDLY AND IMMEDIATELY KICK ME IN MY STUPID HEAD SO I CAN FIX THAT.

Without further ado, the Stories!


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Hey all!

So excited to be judging :)

I'll be reviewing the following entries:

The Deaths of Eima Illervin
Killing Alex
The Early Demise of Benjamin Wilkins

:)

Can't wait to get started!

- Riddle
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Hi people!
I'm sorry I'm late to the party--I've not had internet access all weekend...
I'll be reviewing the following:
The Death of Damian
The Death of the Watchman
On the Adversity of Death.


I'm super excited to get to in-depth-ly (if that's not a word it totally should be) analyze the works of all the authors. I'm under pressure from the clock, but after I get these three reviewed I fully intend to review all of the others.
~Aria
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By default then, it appears I shall be reviewing the deaths of Nicholas Santos, the Tumbleweed, and Peter.

Expect all reviews and winners to be up by Midnight tomorrow.
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...and there in the land of Nemea, a Lion, whose golden hide was impenetrable to weapons and invulnerable to injury, stalled the works and glories of men 'til mighty Hercules came and stole away its breath.
Euripides


Those of you who have completed this task - you have accomplished a great thing indeed, for you have slain a terrible creature, normally considered immune to mortal injury and peril. You are hereby worthy of bearing the title...
Nemean Assassin


Congratulations to the winning authors for the following stories:
-On The Adversity of Death, which won the Bonus Challenge: Criticality Accident
-Death of the Watchman by [@Holmshire]
-The Early Demise of Benjamin Wilkins by @WiseDragonGirl
-The Death of Nicholas Santos
-The Forgotten Death of Peter by @RomanAria, which won the Bonus Challenge: Schrodinger's Horizon

Your stories have been added to The Twelve Labours Victory Archives, to which there will be a permanent link in my signature. In addition, your victory has been announced in both the News and Roleplaying Discussion Subforums! Huzzah!

As far as the previous aforementioned awards vis-a-vi Forum Trophies that were mentioned, I am afraid that the state of the Guild's coding has rather unfortunately been forestalled due to shenanigans. However, be assured that if it all ever gets working, you can expect any trophies related to this event to be handed out retroactively.

Do not be discouraged though. The First Labour is over, but the Land of Lerna beckons...

Below is a list of all Twelve Secret Bonus Challenges. Note that entries only qualify for bonus challenges IF they also clear the actual Labour as well.


Below are reviews for each of the stories. If you feel your story should have won, but didn't, contact the specific judge for your story to make your case. Please exercise some courtesy, and remember that you may only make the one appeal.



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