~Heads up~
@Savo@VecAfter talking it over with Ogo for a bit, this is going to be the last NPC-only collab that will be allowed, at least for now.
Why? Because you guys are basically adding a bunch of needless fluff to the story. I dislike being somewhat...harsh, but this is not a story about the NPCs/Non main characters. This is a story about the trainers on route 29, who have just started their journey. It's all well and good you're fleshing out the region, but that amount of fluff is ridiculous. It contributes nothing to the story, aside from a small mention of something about the cave-ins. Everything else...is exactly that. Pretty much fluff/Filler.
And no one likes Filler.
Now, if you want to do one later: Talk to us first. It
must have some relevance to the Main Characters and not be full of needless fluff. What you should have done, is make it shorter and go ahead and get right to the good plot stuff that Savo told me you had. Maybe have one scene with Ashton and Mayu, and then one short scene with Blake, then put whatever that is important after that.
that post is long, and holds no relevance to anything mostly.
Collabs involving MCs and NPCs and other non/player characters is fine. But NPC/Gym Leaders/Reporters is a no. If you want, to do one you run the whole thing by Me and Ogo first, so we can see if its just needless filler.
@Savo@VecFinish the second part of that Collab ASAP. And try to keep needless filler out of it this time, or I'm going to have to get my GM hammer and ask you to reduce the fluff.
And you really don't want me to do that~
