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Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by smarty0114
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I'm gonna get to work on a character. Should have one up by tonight :)

Edit: Here he is :) Let me know if anything needs to be changed.



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Wow, you were fast. Forgetful as I am, I have now added code for the character name in the sheet.

This is a good foundation for a character. But you still have a lot of time until the actual roleplay would begin, so I suggest you flesh things out whenever you feel like it.

Charles' parents could prove to be interesting secondary characters for a sub-plot. Perhaps something happens wherever they live when the army is mobilized, which forces them to decide whether to leave or stay. There is a bit of potential there.

A wealthy family on the western coast of Tenebra would probably live in a rather large city. Maybe you could create a name for it, so that I can put it on the map?

I also added some code for spirits. Could I ask of you to concretize Charles' spirits? Think of them as spells rather than manipulation.
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Before I flesh out my character I wanted to ask -- would a fisticuff Guardian be impractical in this roleplay? I'm really digging the idea of some shotgun Gauntlets -- definitely ripping the idea from RWBY -- but I just wanted to ask before I have it set in stone.
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Go for it. Nothing is more badass than punching aliens to death.
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Go for it. Nothing is more badass than punching aliens to death.


Great! I'll go ahead and work on my little bruiser then, and while I'm at it I'll just fit the lore I've been working on into her profile. It relates to her anyway.
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Lovely.

◆ Added an optional 'Appearance' section to the character sheet.
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Figured I'd post to at least confirm that I am indeed in this. I'm working on a character as well, but it won't be up super quickly.
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I'm currently working on my character sheet too, although I'll be on a plane for all of tomorrow so I'm not sure when it'll be up.
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Hey Prisk, do you mind elaborating on what spirit powers/abilities are?
Are they like purely elemental or can they be mutations like enhanced strength/regeneration, etc.?
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Sure!

So, you can think of the roleplay as two parts: there is the written part, and then there is the game with the meters and aspekts and all that. Guardians are already extremely strong and durable because of all the spirits within them. But, on the 'game' side of things, the powers/abilities can provide 'buffs', 'enchantments', whatever you want to call it and other such things.

What you can do is to add 'exotic effects' to your spirits that enhances strength or provides some kind of protection, whatever you want, and attach it to an element that makes sense. For example, the earth element is usually known to have a lot of strengthening and protection magic. So, the spirit could have some kind of attack related to the earth element, which at the same time gives your character some kind of buff or enchantment.

I will go through everyone's suggested spirits, so you don't have to get it right or perfect on the first try. Just go crazy, and then I'll balance things for you.
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@Prisk Alrighty so I think I fixed the spirit issue, let me know if I need to do some more work in that department. I only gave him three main abilities, wasn't sure if that's below or above average so if it's either I'd be happy to lower/raise the number. I'll be sure to flesh out his history a bit, I'm kind of playing around with the idea of using his best friend as a secondary character. And I do love the idea of a storyline involving his parents, one that could put him in a stay with the army or leave and protect family situation. Oh and I put in his history that he and his parents lived right outside the city of Lucidus.
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Cool. Your spirits look good. You can change and tweak them as much as you want until your first in-character post. I created a new exotic effect for 'Aura', check the hider. It prevents the 'meltdown' exotic effect; a nifty buff.



Everything else sounds awesome. That is a good secondary character, indeed. I will add Lucidus to the map the next time I edit it.

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I'll have a character up soon. Most likely a WIP however.
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Lovely. I'll ignore Ideology and Warfare for now, as you marked them as WIP.

But! The background section is nice. There's a lot of potential for sub-plots, as well, here and there. The first thing that comes to mind: would you care to write some lore for those 'mobile bases'? Like, some technical stuff that I can put in the Technology section of the codex? You don't have to, but as you mentioned them, you probably have a decent idea of how they would work.

*Helston, no 'e' at the end. Anyway, I'll place Concordia on the map the next time I edit it! Yet another thing you can write lore about, if you would be interested in it, and create sub-plots for. Maybe something about Jack's father?

At first I was a bit confused about the timeline there. I assumed the 'Event' you described to be the Calamity and the emergence of the Mordrem, which was twenty years ago. But, then you described a bit of delay: "At first there were no signs of anything being wrong", so I think you're right on track.

You can just put the names of the Aspekts in the section, no need to indicate what they do.

Anyway, looks really good so far! Healing bots are always welcome. Keep at it, there's still plenty of time.
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I just realised that the fanatics remind me of the Cleaners from the Division.
youtube.com/watch?v=0WT9Dpn4nqs
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Yup, that was the main influence for the Fanatic faction! Pretty cool video there. Captures their ruthlessness.

◆ Moved all combat information and spirit creation into a hider next to the Codex.
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I made it a moral obligation to purge every single Cleaner off the streets of New York. I regret nothing!
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