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Night had fallen. Through the trees a nightingale gave pursuit to a particularly swift dragonfly. Between branches and over bushes they danced, the bird ever keen on it's next meal. This continued until the dragonfly had unknowingly flown past the treeline and into the Dead Peaks. Just a short stretch before the foot of the North Crown there was a swath that reached from the mountains barring the shore from the west all the way to the mountains barring the shore from the east where nothing lived. The tree line was a true halt for everything as Oao had destroyed everything that might hide intruders into her caverns. There were no trees past that point, not a single blade of grass nor any creatures who dared stray too close to these lands. Any creatures of course aside from the desperate dragonfly and the unwary nightingale.

The little winged pest buzzed it's way up towards the mountains, ducking into a cave well up upon a cliff side with the avian hunter hot on it's tale. The bird suddenly lost sight of it's prey as it vanished into the pitch black entrance. Not one to be dissuaded the plucky bird landed and took a few short hops inside, confident in it's ability to fly away should anything present danger. Listening it heard no sound aside from the empty whistling of wind into the reaches of the cavern. All of a sudden, much faster than it could react to let alone fly from, a pitch black hand reached out from the darkness and caught it fast in it's grip. The hold was secure but not too tight as to crush the thing.

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What it had failed to understand was that the hand didn't just come from the darkness, it was the darkness. With panicked chirping it struggled against the long flat fingers that held it snug within the darkness's grasp but to no avail. Slowly the darkness formed into a shape. It was a roughly humanoid form with a slender hourglass body, long smooth arms and numerous dark tendrils which extruded out from a single stalk like roots fanning out from the trunk of a tree. Her face was smooth and featureless like staring into the depths of a deep well and her hair flowed around her head in hundreds of thousands of small dark tendrils which seemed to gently blow in an unfelt wind. This was the avatar of Oao, a body shaped from the darkness itself which she has cast her senses into so she can operate beyond her caves without ever having to leave them.

"Shhhhh! Sh sh sh, Caaalm... Caaalm." She urged the panicked beast which listened to her soft wispy shushes but felt no calm nor understanding of the meaning. Gently she stroked a long flat shadow finger across the soft feathers upon it's head to try and coax it into a state of calm but it had no effect. It's feathered were all ruffled now due to all the struggling it was putting up. Gently she lowered her hand over it's head, her index finger and thumb holding the head secure so it couldn't move while a second thumb formed. The second thumb and her middle finger became sharp at the tips like long obsidian swords.

"Don't be scared. This will only hurt... A tiny, little... Bit." The panicked chirping crescendoed into full out screeching as the very tips of her second thumb and middle finger pierced slowly into it's eyes. Taking it nice and easy, not making any sudden movements or pressing to hard, Oao took to this task with every ounce of delicacy to ensure it went cleaner than certain earlier attempts. She gouged the eyes only deep enough so that it could no longer see, taking her painstaking time gently removing her claws so as to not cause undue hemorrhaging in the eye tissue. It issued pitiable cries of pain, still struggling to escape though more lackluster as it was suffering.

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"Please cry not. Unchained from the light you will fly with more majesty than any." She ushered words of reassurance to the poor bird, words falling on deaf ears. With the long thick tentacles of purest darkness she pulled herself up to the entrance of the cave on her stalk, bird in hand.

"Now fly! Fly with pride into the night!" She pushed her voice to what would largely be described as a somewhat louder whisper. She held her palms up and out to the wind, releasing the bird into the world as it left her grasp and started to fly.

Perhaps this one She hoped deep within her heart. This one will succeed and awaken all other beasts to the true potential of the darkness. Just as her hopes were about to soar alongside this nightingale of hers it lost it's way a took a fast nose dive into the dirt beyond. Her hands fell to her side and her head bowed in defeat.

"No... Just like the rest." She watched as the tiny bird flailed upon the ground, surrounded by a wide field of bones, all of them once belonging to birds not unlike itself. Some of them were killed in the procedure, some of them simply flopped down and crashed against the stones down the mountain. The rest, like this bird, had flown only to blindly crash at the foot of the mountain with all the rest.

She was crestfallen. Time after time she believes that she can break the light walkers dependency on light only to be met with such results. Why? She often wonders. How can it be that so many beings can be so dependent on light that by the simple act of taking it away they are rendered so helpless?

The large willowy figure shrank back into the cave. The edges of it's form stretched into tendrils which joined with the darkness which clung onto the walls of the cave, pulling the form apart until the individual pieces were reabsorbed into the darkness to conserve her energy.

So she sat, alone in her many tunnels
which were masked from all who'd pry.
She'd mourn the death of such a delicate animal,
she would wonder why she should even try.
I bring fair tidings everyone. I'll be making up a post soon but one quick question before I do.

Anyone interested in seeing the first new domain come up for grabs? Or would you rather get more stuff done between one-another first?
@Leotamer - That much is true. To invent things however one must first have the idea. Should a god be inspired to create something it would always be feasible so long as it isn't antithetical to their domain. Deities however tend to be fairly specialized in their domain, hence why a majority of creations tend to involve it. I am not saying that a sun god cannot create crops but given the era specified I just think it'd be a little odd. Not the most unlikely god for that but a jump like that is something better reserved for in-rp contemplation and discovery rather than something that happened in the past despite seeing no signs of it anywhere else.
@ReusableSword - It depends on what is used to maintain them. A basic entrance only really needs attention should something block it's way or should the frame get damaged. If there's any sort of effects or enchantments imbued upon the entrance then they'll require a god to regularly recharge their divine magic or the magic behind their effects will wear away until the entrances revert to normal. Unless you're proposing that these crabs act as conduits for Naswaru's divine power to recharge whatever effects you might have had placed on the entrances then all that's needed is to check for mundane wear and tear amongst other things every so often.

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On a separate topic, just to clear up something for everyone just in case there was any confusion, deity's are the only sources of magic in this world. There is no generalized "Magic" in this world that isn't the direct result of some god or goddess lending their power. The only other force in this world is unseen and unknown to all currently.
@Stern Algorithm - Hm. The way I saw it was that he simply had a bunch of people living in his unique realm construct. Iva'Krorh has a library and Anu'Varr has a tower after all. It made sense if he wanted to have his god's home set up with some followers of his own. Naturally the whole "Progressive human government maintained by humans in full on cities built by humans guarded with armies" bit certainly wasn't getting a pass from me but I did mention that. Seeing as my time was fairly scarce today I had little time to adjudicate the various edits his background was undergoing to monitor what content remained and what did not. I've read it over just now though and it seems in order.

@Lmpkio - One thing I will note is that in his history it states that he returned and made room for homes and crops. Given how the current age of technology is still in a hunter/gatherer stage unless it's specifically stated that he invented farming crops (Which I seriously doubt) it'd be best to eschew that segment of history.

Do bear in mind that while I do vet these things such matters take time, especially during the daytime. If there's an issue you all believe needs attention do hit me with a mention and I'll get to it at the earliest opportunity.

@ReusableSword - Do define what you mean by maintain. I'm not sure what it's supposed to be doing.
@Lmpkio - I've read over it and it's quite good. I personally don't see any issues with the state it's at now.

@Vega7 - Unfortunately due to reasons pertaining to the underlying lore of the world I can't accept a god of entropy. That's pretty much The Void's purpose anyhow and no gods would ever be born to serve it.
@Lmpkio - As far as physical stuff goes that's fine. According to his realm info the cities themselves got some potent light magic and unless it's Dirka's magic he's the one supplying the power ultimately. Such is the same with all light magic his followers use.

Edit:@Lord Zee - Well with each god having realms that include structures unique to themselves exceptions can occur. I will admit though that having his followers build these structures without aid from the god of knowledge or otherwise does strike a bit odd. It'd make more sense if it was his creation as opposed to his followers.
@Lmpkio - I'd say so. Do bear in mind that in creating all these powerful structures and such the god himself would be fairly exhausted by such an amount of work, not to mention if he cares to perform any actual upkeep on the majority of it.
@Lmpkio - As far as his army is concerned I think the armor and weaponry available to them is quite a bit further ahead of pretty much everyone at this stage of the world. Humanity's not really even at the bronze age yet so having a military comprised of flying knights clad in plate mail and such might be a bit out of his reach, especially given how he's the god of light, not technology or even metals.

I'd say that sort of army would probably be better left as something to work towards in-rp. Maybe he'd want to get Ferron in on that business, get ahead of the curve by being one of the first nations to develop proper metal armor.
Good evening everyone. I've been fairly busy reading over the recent posts amongst other things so I might have been a bit more silent and secluded than before. Just letting everyone know once I've read through these posts once everyone's gotten a chance to introduce their gods I'll get to work on a new post of my own. If I've missed anyone's questions as of late please remind me as I've been fairly scattered and unable to give everything quite the amount of attention it deserves.

I must say though I'm quite thrilled to see this succeeding quite nicely. I hope everyone's enjoying posting as much as I am enjoying watching you all post. All in all, excellent work everyone!
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