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Star Wars: A New Force

@Renny

Just got back from catching Pokemon lol. Gunna start on my post XD

Star Wars: A New Force

@Renny
Lol, yep.

I'm going Pokémon catching with my brother and will be back in a few hours. I'll post then.

Star Wars: A New Force

@Renny

It was fine XD I'm so excited for all of this haha. We're finally getting to the main meat of the story X3

Star Wars: A New Force

Master Luke's words helped a little to ease the pain she was feeling, but not by much. She wanted to help Ben. She so badly wanted to go to him, to tell him she was there for him, and that everything would be okay. Things always ended up alright as long as they were together. Yet, as Luke went to leave, he told her to keep her distance from Ben tonight. That her presence might end up agitating him further. Instead, he suggested she care for the padawans. He was right. The padawans were likely frightened after such events. She needed to make sure they were alright. She was a Jedi Knight an they looked up to her. She needed to be there for them.

And so, she left to check on each of the padawans. Some seemed to be holding up okay. A little shaken but all together they would be fine. A coupe of the younger padawans were in tears, to which she held them and comforted them much like a mother might. After calming the padawans, Odette herself retired to her own hut, trusting Luke to speak to him like he promised. If anyone could help Ben aside from her, then surely Luke could. After all, the man had practically raised them, and was much like a father to Odette herself. She trusted Luke with her life, and trusted him to help Ben as well.

Once returning to her hut, Odette took to studying the books that piled around her small home. With her and Ben always off on missions, Odette found it useful to study up on different cultures and languages, which had come in handy on more occasion than one. She sat up with that for a few hours, before finally retiring to bed, believing that all was well and that come morning everything would be calm and peaceful once again.

Only, late into the night, Odette was awakened by a frantic knock on her hut door, causing her to sit up in shock, rushing to her door to open it up, having heard the fear in Ben's voice. Quickly pulling the door open, she feared the worst. He looked so scared, there was even a tear streaked down his face. This wasn't like Ben. He was normally so calm and composed. Just what had happened to cause him to slip into such a state?

She quickly pulled him into her hut and shut the door, eyes scanning him for some sort of injury. He looked roughed up, with dust and small pebbles sticking to his robes. She was frantically checking him for injuries, speaking hurriedly and in a rushed tone, panic and fear for him in her voice, "Ben? What happened? Are you hurt?"

Star Wars: A New Force

@Renny

Awesomesauce x3

Star Wars: A New Force

If you want, you could copy and save that post in a word doc or something for a few posts from now (since obviously he's going to leave with everyone dead in a few posts anyway XD and we could write the part with the interactions between her and Ben. And perhaps what happens when he sees the hologram (probably killing the Padawan or two that did that to Odette?)?

Star Wars: A New Force

@Renny
Also, quick question XD I noticed in your post that you already did the assassination of the padawans. Weren't we going to do the interactions between Ben and Odette before that? With Ben coming to her and after a short discussion between the two (seeing him in disarray and her asking what was wrong) he does the Force Sleep thing to her and hides her away to keep her safe? Only for her to wake and get injured by the Padawans he chose? Him thinking they killed her from seeing the hologram?

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Hmmm, while it does sound interesting, I don't think Odette would be with someone unless she really loves him. And as twisted as he may be, she would probably feel being with someone else is betraying Ben.
Perhaps, we can kind of mix both of our ideas? Like, rather than her having a fling with him, the four of them (Rey, Finn, Poe, and Odette), have to go undercover on some planet and so they pose as two couples (Rey and Finn as one and Poe and Odette as another). Ben sees this and thinks its real. He flips out in jealously, tracks Poe down, and badly injuring him? Then we could do the pairing with him and Tatooine girl later on once he's recovered?

What I'm thinking is that, perhaps, after the attack and her being held captive in secret by Snoke, she escapes and heads back to Luke's temple in hopes of finding him. Only he has already run off in shame of what happened with Ben. She's searching whats left of the temple for some sign of where he could have gone, when she finds a piece of the map to the first Jedi Temple. Now she has three of the four pieces and just needs to find the last piece (finding a clue of where it is in some of Master Luke's writings). She is preparing to leave, when a ship lands on the planet. This ship ends up being Leia, Han, Chewy, and some of the other rebels. Leia, having lost contact with Luke and fearing the safety of her son, came to the planet to see what happened. They bring Odette off of the planet, where she tells them what happened. At the news of this is when Han leaves and Odette tells Leia her plans of finding the first temple and continuing to train, basically hiding herself away. She knows she's not ready mentally to face Ben and decides to train until she is. With that, Leia gives her a ship and Odette leaves with BB-11, leaving BB-8 there with her as a means of Leia finding her if need be. I figure her meeting Leia is a bittersweet thing for both, considering for Odette this is the mother of the man she loves, and for Leia, Odette is kind of like a daughter in law in a way XD I can also see Leia telling Odette that she knew of her and Ben, Luke having told her long ago about the building relations between the two Jedi.

I figure Odette finds the last piece of the map to the last Jedi Temple (perhaps the temple Luke was at in the Last Jedi was not the First Temple, but still a very old temple). She hides herself away there, continuing to train. I figure we could have Luke die in some other way than the disappearing thing XD Something more dramatic, such as him being killed by Ben or dying protecting Leia. And after Luke dies and Rey still needing to finish her training, Leia knows they have no choice but to reach out to Odette again, Leia and all of them going to where Odette is to convince her to help them.

From there it'd be pretty open XD That's just my thoughts of how it could go. What do you think?

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I was thinking of an OC. Perhaps she's a pilot (just not for the resistance at first). Perhaps a girl from a lesser known planet? Maybe even Tatooine (Luke's home planet)? What do you think? Any ideas on your part?

Star Wars: A New Force

The Light....it was almost as though Ben had some sort of a shield around him. One that refracted her Light, sending it back to her, the Darkness she was feeling continuing to course around him. It was suffocating in himself, making her feel lightheaded and weak. Rather than facing her like she wished for him to do, he merely slipped his arm from her grasp, turning and walking away without a glance her way, speaking of heading to bed. She was left there, kneeling there where he left her, eyes wide and her mind racing. It felt as though this were....a tipping point. One where there was no return from. One that left her in a panic, trying to find some way to crawl back out and bring Ben with her.

She finally looked up, glancing about at all the padawans, some looking on to the retreating Ben in concern and fear. What had just happened shouldn't have. They knew nothing of the darkness that truly resting in this universe. In the time she had spent traveling with Ben, she had seen it, the darkness within the Force that threatened to snuff out what little Light remained in the Universe. The Light that the Jedi protected and that was endanger of being forgotten.

Taking a steadying breath, Odette stood from where she knelt, looking to all the padawans, ever the composed Jedi Knight, her voice commanding but soft, "Go. Return to your quarters."

With that, the padawans hesitantly moved, heading toward their own huts, leaving just she and Master Luke standing there. The moment the two were alone, Odette's calm composure fell and she could feel tears spill from her eyes as she fell to her knees, looking down at her hands, "What do I do, Master Luke? Ben...he...he's been getting worse...I've been trying to help him...draw him from the dark...but he just gets further and further away the more I do..." She sobbed and shook her head. She loved him, though she feared admitting that to Master Luke. And it was killing her inside, knowing that he was suffering and nothing she was doing was relieving him of that. She had never felt so useless, feeling as though she were failing him with little hope of bringing him back, "I don't want to loose him...I don't know what I'd do..."