@Shoryu
Youtube comments are cesspools just like Reddit and 4chan. Better to simply ignore them than to feed to the fire.
Youtube comments are cesspools just like Reddit and 4chan. Better to simply ignore them than to feed to the fire.
Ariamis
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STATUS: Looking forward to Nerves In Carbonox based on how the interest check was received. 1 yr ago
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@Cassowarysaur
Accepted.
Accepted.
@LHG100
By having all the pilots gather in a single base dedicated to the Framewerk Project after having been transferred from separate training facilities, and have them meet their superiors for the project.
By having all the pilots gather in a single base dedicated to the Framewerk Project after having been transferred from separate training facilities, and have them meet their superiors for the project.
@Shoryu
The fact that you're making insults and twisting my words instead of trying to come up with solutions to these problems doesn't help your case here. Still, I'm tired of having this argument in the thread, so I'll give you more options: you can have a four-armed mecha with the single repair device and the nonchargeable rifle, a two-armed mecha with a chargeable rifle, all the repair gadgets intact and without the big arms, or a four-armed mecha with all the repair gadgets and without the rifle.
The fact that you're making insults and twisting my words instead of trying to come up with solutions to these problems doesn't help your case here. Still, I'm tired of having this argument in the thread, so I'll give you more options: you can have a four-armed mecha with the single repair device and the nonchargeable rifle, a two-armed mecha with a chargeable rifle, all the repair gadgets intact and without the big arms, or a four-armed mecha with all the repair gadgets and without the rifle.
@hoopadoop
I am saying that I'll take another look at your sheet once you get a bit more familiar with the site and roleplaying in general.
As for the look I did: The sheet has a lot of problems with grammar. Garrison can't have a military backstory. The Framewerks already have neural connections with their pilots if that wasn't made clear yet, so it's redundant. The field generator will either have to take up the secondary weapon slot or not be included at all. The techno-babble irks me due to the fact that it looks like you threw it around to make the sheet look more impressive than it is. Am I supposed to deduce that the primary weapons are the mecha's fists? If I was, then the primary weapon section failed in its purpose of explaining it clearly. Using fists instead of weapons does not equal low offensive power, so you'll either have to drop the high armor or the high speed.
If this is the level of writing I'm going to expect from you, then I recommend you seek another RP.
I am saying that I'll take another look at your sheet once you get a bit more familiar with the site and roleplaying in general.
As for the look I did: The sheet has a lot of problems with grammar. Garrison can't have a military backstory. The Framewerks already have neural connections with their pilots if that wasn't made clear yet, so it's redundant. The field generator will either have to take up the secondary weapon slot or not be included at all. The techno-babble irks me due to the fact that it looks like you threw it around to make the sheet look more impressive than it is. Am I supposed to deduce that the primary weapons are the mecha's fists? If I was, then the primary weapon section failed in its purpose of explaining it clearly. Using fists instead of weapons does not equal low offensive power, so you'll either have to drop the high armor or the high speed.
If this is the level of writing I'm going to expect from you, then I recommend you seek another RP.
@redbaron1234
As long as the information relay and the HUD-marking are dropped and the trajectory calculation changed to calculating accuracy probabilities, then yes, you can have it as part of the gun. The experience gaining system is fine.
Anzû is an accepted sniper-type mecha from the interest check.
As long as the information relay and the HUD-marking are dropped and the trajectory calculation changed to calculating accuracy probabilities, then yes, you can have it as part of the gun. The experience gaining system is fine.
Anzû is an accepted sniper-type mecha from the interest check.
@knighthawk
I'll keep this suggestion in mind when Romeo unlocks his SA.
@redbaron1234
I can't believe it, it's actually another girl. And I thought I'd never see one again.
While I understand the reason you have the PFCM, it's unfortunately too similar to Diver's data transmitting, and should be changed to something else. The Cannon can be manually aimed like Anzû, with an aim-assisting system added to compensate for the non-humanoid form. Otherwise a great concept for a sniper-type.
I'll keep this suggestion in mind when Romeo unlocks his SA.
@redbaron1234
I can't believe it, it's actually another girl. And I thought I'd never see one again.
While I understand the reason you have the PFCM, it's unfortunately too similar to Diver's data transmitting, and should be changed to something else. The Cannon can be manually aimed like Anzû, with an aim-assisting system added to compensate for the non-humanoid form. Otherwise a great concept for a sniper-type.
@Shoryu
I'm not going to argue with you about the changes you need to make to your sheet. You can always seek a more lenient RP if you disagree with how I run this. The like was misclick, by the way.
@hoopadoop
Sorry, but I don't accept people who haven't posted anything on the site. Come back when you have 45-50 posts under your belt.
I'm not going to argue with you about the changes you need to make to your sheet. You can always seek a more lenient RP if you disagree with how I run this. The like was misclick, by the way.
@hoopadoop
Sorry, but I don't accept people who haven't posted anything on the site. Come back when you have 45-50 posts under your belt.
I hate to say this, but the sheet is honestly a complete mess. While I'm not a grammar nazi by any measure (in fact, English isn't even my native language), this crossed the limit of what I can deem as acceptable writing. It is full of typos, bad grammar, improper use of capitalization and even has parts that are unintelligible such as these:
@Shoryu
[*]Secondary Weapon System:
[hider=secondary]
It has a secondary set of smaller more agile arms well protected behind the larger primaries, as well as a Couple of stored devices these arms are able to manipulate, as well as several the purpose of maintenance on the primary arms that are expected to take quite a pounding.
[/quote]
@Shoryu
Once he got over his past, he seemed to settle into the behavior of a Fiercely protective older brother... tooo, just about anyone who wasn't an enemy really.[/quote]
It needs to be spellchecked alongside your OOC posts, which are also a sore to read. Then there's the character itself. I won't accept a 16-year-old built like a buff adult with the excuse of genetics; that reeks of a Marty Stu, and I hate those. Russia hasn't existed for thousands of years, and no Russian actually has red hair and gold eyes. Seriously, who has that combination of colors and doesn't look like a joke? And why does he 'like' with air-quotes? Is that implying he doesn't actually 'like' things or is that a repeating error?
Then the Framewerk. The repair drones, repair tendrils and railgun-style charging shot of the rifle have to be dropped, and the rifle's name changed to something else, since there already is a Battle Rifle in the RP. The Repair Kit and the Welder Gun are the same device with only a difference in flavor text, having both of them is unnecessary. Any repairing the Framewerk needs to do can be done with only the secondary pair of arms and a single device, anything else added on top of that is redundant.
The forced blast of the primary arms needs to have the drawback of being unable to activate the shields on them for couple of turns after using it.
And the most important thing: you need to stop using emoticons. This isn't a chatroom, and adding a 'XD' to every post like a texting teenager is aggravating to read.
@Shoryu
[*]Secondary Weapon System:
[hider=secondary]
It has a secondary set of smaller more agile arms well protected behind the larger primaries, as well as a Couple of stored devices these arms are able to manipulate, as well as several the purpose of maintenance on the primary arms that are expected to take quite a pounding.
[/quote]
@Shoryu
Once he got over his past, he seemed to settle into the behavior of a Fiercely protective older brother... tooo, just about anyone who wasn't an enemy really.[/quote]
It needs to be spellchecked alongside your OOC posts, which are also a sore to read. Then there's the character itself. I won't accept a 16-year-old built like a buff adult with the excuse of genetics; that reeks of a Marty Stu, and I hate those. Russia hasn't existed for thousands of years, and no Russian actually has red hair and gold eyes. Seriously, who has that combination of colors and doesn't look like a joke? And why does he 'like' with air-quotes? Is that implying he doesn't actually 'like' things or is that a repeating error?
Then the Framewerk. The repair drones, repair tendrils and railgun-style charging shot of the rifle have to be dropped, and the rifle's name changed to something else, since there already is a Battle Rifle in the RP. The Repair Kit and the Welder Gun are the same device with only a difference in flavor text, having both of them is unnecessary. Any repairing the Framewerk needs to do can be done with only the secondary pair of arms and a single device, anything else added on top of that is redundant.
The forced blast of the primary arms needs to have the drawback of being unable to activate the shields on them for couple of turns after using it.
And the most important thing: you need to stop using emoticons. This isn't a chatroom, and adding a 'XD' to every post like a texting teenager is aggravating to read.
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