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1 yr ago
Current Looking forward to Nerves In Carbonox based on how the interest check was received.
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7 yrs ago
For some reason Discord is acting up.
8 yrs ago
Ended up sick, trying to respond once I get better.

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Your posts are always the best ones, Pi.

On another note, new post will be coming tomorrow, to give the last stragglers their final chance before this moves on.
Changed my mind.
@redbaron1234
After the meeting. She was just called in.
@Penultimate_Pi
Thanks for letting me know.
@redbaron1234
He was AFK for too long without any warning. And yes, Lorenzo's on a different level.
@KaiserAuto
So I can assume Krysstof is not going to spend an entire post looking at an empty corner?
@Cassowarysaur
There's one in Emperor, Krysstof/Krystoff's Framewerk.
@ArkmageddonCat
There is a quadrupedal Framewerk with a mounted rail gun and another with a sniper weapon, but not one that's specifically using artillery.
@KaiserAuto
So he's a character that doesn't interact with others and doesn't observe what's happening around him? If so, then his personality has to be changed to someone who at least pays attention to his surroundings and thinks. If he's not going to interact with his surroundings in either active or even passive role, then he might as well not exist at all in terms of story. Story interaction is to me one of the basic principles to writing characters, and if the character lacks that it's not a character, but a tool.

@ArkmageddonCat
I'd say two to three paragraphs, though I prefer detail in posts more than length. If you can keep up with the others you're pretty much fine.
@KaiserAuto
To start with, you can write a bit about how he feels about his pilot training ending prematurely, and how he's suddenly whisked away from a familiar training facility and to a completely new environment. He could think about what he expects of the other pilots and their Framewerks, if he can fit in with the squad despite his sudden integration, that kind of stuff. He can also notice the Lieutenant's appearance and choice of words when addressing him.

Then there's the whole Lorenzo's lecture. You could note about the things the pilots failed in. You could look at them while they're addressed and try to figure out what kind of people they are based on appearance and what they said back to him. Then there's all the material that can be written from the newest post, with Lorenzo answering questions, the mysterious nature of Stukov's death, and a reaction out of the guy slapping a cute pilot and mutilating another. There's lots of stuff the character can observe upon.
>Is having a hard time introducing his scaredy-cat/sometimes awesome character into the IC.

Do you need help with that?
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