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Blue Demon || Female || Older || Ace

I go by Blue, Demon or BD. Or even Hey You if it's clear enough that you're talking to me. XD I prefer Blue or Blue Demon. And no, I didn't choose "Blue" because I'm sad. It's my favorite color. (And now you know.)

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Also, I just discovered DMC and now I'm Dante trash.

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Hey, did I say I was going to find my life?

Well, it must have ran off faster than I could. XD

GLs are okay. As long as you chuck the God Complex. (Speaking of, did you read the new comic where Hal becomes a God. It actually was written very well.)
@FacePunchI'd do that in a heartbeat. Mailsi would do the same.

Kyle on the other hand... wont. After the whole incident earlier in the day, he's not feeling very confident in himself. If someone told him to crawl into a hole and die, he just might try. Plus, It's his first session and he has no idea what's allowed and what's not. He doesn't realize he can defy orders.

Still, thanks for the thoughts. :D

EDIT:
And I've been online all day today. I need to go find my life before it's gone. I look forward to seeing all the new posts tomorrow!

EDIT #2:
But before I go, I leave you with this:
Anyways, what @Tyler said is probably what I would have if I put more thought into it :P. So if that's the sort of feedback you were looking for, that's what I would offer up, too.


I was looking for more how to clean up and improve what I had already written mainly. But @Tyler did make a good point on where to go next.
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It... that... I edited it. I suck at jokes.


Well, if it was a joke, then okay.

Sorry I kind of jumped on you.
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Well, I'm so-rry that you aren't a terrible writer. Just, like, post it. We'll all flood it with likes and make you feel better. Right guys?


Actually, that will have the opposite effect. Please don't. Please and thank you for not.
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It reads well, in my opinion. I reckon it's good to post.


You are all making me frustrated. Seriously. Only Wraith was helpful. And his was a technical error.

*Walks off pouting*
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I'm actually going to have Kieran suggest an alteration to the plan that involves Kyle.


A.K.A. Hold off on Kyle. Don't feed the poor baby to the wolves. XD Okay then. I'll go back to waiting.

EDIT: If anyone still wants to give their two cents, I'm all ears. :)
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Only thing I should note is that the Suicide Squad were dropped inside the research facility whereas the All-Stars are dropped a few kilometers out.


Righty-o. I changed it. A simple fix.

EDIT:
@FacePunchWell, thanks anyways. ;P
You didn't think it was disjointed, choppy and had poor flow?

Because it reads like a massacre.

P.S. I'm not trolling for complements. I really want good constructive feedback.
@Blue Demon Well. I feel the most obvious piece of criticism being that you didn't post anything.

Other than that, its looking great.


I didn't want to post it if no one was going to comment. :D

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