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Okay, I know there's always arguments about Superman keeping his secret ID. I can live with him just putting glasses on and it changes everything... usually. Though when he's built like a weightlifting champion how does he maintain his secret identity?


Christopher Reeve does a good job of demonstrating how glasses and posture can visually change a person in this clip
youtube.com/watch?v=BIaF0QKtY0c
@Blue Demon

I like it.
"You are an old soul, child..."

Two floors down. Left at the seated Buddha. Right past the golden tapestry. Inside the third door.

For as long as he could remember, Kai-ro dreamed of a place inside the temple that he had never been. A wing damaged during the Chinese invasion of Tibet. It was forbidden to pass down those halls. He had never been there.

Except in his dreams.

...had it been a dream?

The memories were so vivid. So real. Hallways that were just as they were in his dreams.

Inside the third door was a room. Empty, except that hadn't always been the case. Someone had lived there.

...had he lived there?

The back corner concealed a loose floorboard. There was a box underneath a coarse piece of canvas. It had been waiting for Kai-ro to find it.

Or had Kai-ro been waiting for it to find him?

He knew what lay inside it, even though he had never opened the box. Not even in his dreams. It was a ring. A single jade ring.

Kai-ro was one of the young monks who was believed to be the reincarnation of a teacher. But which teacher? It was a question that the elders seemed at an impasse to decide, even as Kai-ro grew older.


"You are an old soul, child. The question is, whose soul?"



G R E E N L A N T E R N
"MARY JANE'S LAST DANCE" || PART II || POST THEME



"KID!"

Ch'p and Aya's panicked voices permeated the thick fog that seemed to be suffocating him.

Which, for the record, was not helping matters.

Green light pierced the darkness, illuminating the wreckage as the emerald hued figure pushed himself up. A large slab of concrete and rebar rested on top of the young figure, a collapse of the floors above him having sandwiched Kai-ro between several layers of a building that was teetering on the verse of a complete structural failure.

Except there was a lifesign, buried far within. Someone was still in here.

Someone had to help.

On his hands and knees, the child coughed as he tried to get his bearings. The wind had been knocked out of him, and now he found himself struggling to catch his breath. His vision was blurry. A sense of vertigo washed over him, as he could feel his consciousness start slipping...

Aya's voice interjected inside of his head. Your physiology is still that of a juvenile of your species, Green Lantern. Your ability to maintain this level of activity is not sustainable without considerable risk.

Breathe in.

"In brightest day..."

Breathe out.

"...in darkest night..." As he spoke, he seemed to find a second wind. The Tibetan boy's brown eyes flashed with an otherworldly, eldritch light as they turned a brilliant shade of green. Slowly, the boy rose to his feet. The large slab of concrete falling from off his back as he casually came up from the ground.

How many hours now? Five? Ten? Twelve?

He didn't know. It didn't matter. There was still more work to be done. There were still more people who cried for help.

The boy felt his nose running. Sniffling, he brought his hand up to his nose and saw his fingers stained red as they came away from his face.

Omicron Ceti IV needed a hero.

Instead, it had a ten year old with a gaudy fashion accessory.

Swallowing, the boy tasted the acrid copper on the back of his throat. Steeling himself, he pushed further inside the collapsing building. A sweep of a green hand lifted debris out of the way, revealing the huddled and broken form of an older woman crumpled to the floor.

Cradling the woman in his arms, the child's green aura began to spread across the stranger's body.

She was still alive. She was still here.

Kai-ro wasn't a hero. But maybe he could make a difference.

The boy started to lift the woman up from the floor when he heard the sound.

People breathing.

He turned his head. His eyes connected with theirs. People. Ordinary, normal people. Frightened people. Huddled together in a corner, unable to move. Unable to run. Unable to make a sound.

The building came down on top of them before Kai-ro could even open his mouth.
@Sep

Uatu is watching more than just you in the shower.

Dude is seriously a creeper.
@Blue Demon
If she is accepted I'll work on how Shi'ar fits into the whole GLC, Nova Corps and other space faring military forces.


How do you want the Shi'ar to fit into the universe at large?

My only idea at the moment are that Sector 1014 (H'lven's home sector, the planet that Ch'p and B'dg are from) is basically in a Syrian Civil War that the GLC and Nova Corps are working together to contain, though for now it's just a background element that will be fleshed out over time. The Shi'ar could be completely absent or complicit or even a cause for the current situation. I'd leave it to you.

Everything else is just Kai-ro pulling over Skrulls for speeding, issuing Uatu a citation for loitering, and boldly going to donut shops across Sector 2814.
@Blue Demon

Any Shi’ar concept gets all the yes from the resident GL.
That is not dead which can @Gowi lie.
The Kai-ro plot has begun.

I'll be chillin' over on Omicron Ceti IV while I do the initial universe building, then get him over to Earth once I've set up the foundation for Space Cops.

Obligatory disclaimer for the legal department: Space Cops is filmed on location with the men and women of the Green Lantern Corps; all suspects are innocent until proven guilty in a court of law.
"...so I said to Tm'i and... Oh! Get this. You won't believe this frackin' shit."

Jor P'lmbr settled into the co-pilot seat of the Durango. After coming up from Nok in the cramped confines of a Jast-1 cockpit, sitting in a Jast-2 felt like upgrading to first class. Eighteen hours down on Omicron Ceti IV in a hotel room though? Shit was like going to the damn casinos on Ungara.

While the pilot rambled on, Yim threw a headset on and said, "Flight control, flight control, flight control. This is..."

Frack. What was their callsign again?

The last one had been Delta Vega... something something something Dark Side. Digging through the glove compartment, he found the flimsiplast sheet he was looking for and read the designation. "...Coyote-Two-Nine. Repeat, this is Coyote-Two-Nine, outbound for Talkor. Request clearance to depart."

"So, Tm'i was talking to Dena. You know? The Ungaran chick in finance with the freakin' chest like to here," Jor was saying, with the absolutely obligatory gesture to help illustrate the questionably relevant point of the precise dimensions of that particular part of Dena's anatomical structure. "I swear to gaaaaaawd, she was wearin' this white thing the other day and it was like, the hills are alive, man!"

"Acknowledged, Coyote-Two-Nine. Please proceed out on heading two-one-one mark four until clear of all vessels, then you are free to manuever."

Yim reached up to toggle the comlink. "Coyote-Two-Nine. Roger. Out."

Jor turned his head and belched loudly, clearing his throat before he looked over at Yim and asked, "Where we going again? Talkor?"

Pulling up a datapad, Yim sketched out a quick flightpath and passed it over for review. "Yeah, take us up the Scylla Trade Route toward Asteroid Blue Heaven, then just drop back a parsec."

Jor started shaking his head. "Nah, man. Nah. Are you kidding?" With his finger, Jor swiped upward and then across. "Run up the Styggian Sector to the Milky Way and then it's a frackin' straight frackin' shot, man. Half the time, brah."

Leaning back in his seat, Jor reached over to pull the release on the docking clamp and started easing the freighter away from the landing bay. "So anyway, Tm'i was talkin' to Dena. And she said, get this, she was talkin' to her boss and he said the frackin' board was voting to kill our dental coverage."

"What?"

"I know, right!" Jor exclaimed, as he guided the freighter up into the air. The starport fell out of view, as the freighter began easing overhead of a futuristic metropolis. "And I just put braces on my kid? Frack this, man. We get back from this, I'm doin' it. I'm callin' that MogulTech recruiter back." Pausing a moment, Jor leaning forward as he peered down and checked his instruments. "We good on your side?"

"Hang on a second, we got a light on engine three..."

There was a sudden explosion, but neither man heard the sound. Instead, the sudden drop in altitude was the only thing on the mind of either man, as both raced to try and perform emergency actions.

There merely wasn't time as a high rise apartment rushed toward them, as the orientation toward the ground began to spiral out of control...



In the greater cosmos, the people are protected by two sides in the interstellar justice system; the Lanterns who investigate crimes and the local authorities who prosecute the offenders. The call came in at five oh-eight, Oa Standard Time. A emergency call on a planet inside Sector 2814. That makes it my problem. My name is Kai-ro. I carry a ring.
G R E E N L A N T E R N
"MARY JANE'S LAST DANCE" || PART I || POST THEME




The fire spread across five city blocks.

The Durango had struck a residential apartment building, before breaking apart and raining chaos and destruction on the surrounding buildings. The impact alone had caused structural damage and created debris that would have been problematic by itself.

Except the fuel in the Durango had ignited, several components erupting into metal fires that burned with an intensity that challenged a terrestrial fire department under the best conditions.

These were not the best conditions.

Then, to top it all off, the apartment building had collapsed, sowing further chaos and debris across a wide area. By the time that the Green Lanterns had arrived, city and spaceport emergency services were already overwhelmed. As other buildings within and around the crash site began catching fire, the situation was quickly getting out of hand. Omicron Ceti IV was burning.

For the residents in 8497-J, there was no where to go but up. The lower floors of their building had become quickly engulfed in flame, the installed fire retardant system overwhelmed by the intensity of the metal-based fires that was carving a swath across the city.

As their building began to disintegrate, there seemed no choice but to stand and die... and jump.

Some jumped.

...and were shocked when a large, green hand reached out toward them.

The large green construct was connected to a creature who was, for lack of better term, a flying squirrel. "What fresh hell is this?" Ch'p demanded, as the H'lven Green Lantern scooped people from out of the air.

A large green blanket spread through the streets, as a young Tibetan monk -- covered in soot and ash -- worked to try and smother the flames. "The middle of an inferno is sooooo not the time for hell metaphors," the boy muttered.

A sound overhead heralded the overflight of a white Sentinel-class patrol cruiser. Based on Kymellian SmartShip technology, the Green Lantern vessel was isolating and working to extinguish the fire with green energy constructs of its own.

They'd been at it now for over an hour.

Kai-ro couldn't even tell if they'd even managed to slow the fire yet.

Character You're Applying For:
Kai-ro (Green Lantern)

Powers And Abilities:
Kai-ro possesses a Green Lantern power ring, which allows Kai-ro to create green constructs from the sheer force of will and imagination. The ring also provides a protective aura around his body, enabling him to fly in atmosphere or the vacuum of space, and allows for faster-than-light travel in space. The ring has the ability to remotely access the Book of Oa, supplying Kai-ro with knowledge and information overlays that aid his investigations and activities on behalf of the GLC.

In addition, Kai-ro was trained in police tactics by Killowog and is proficient with both armed and unarmed combat.

Origin And Backstory (In A Maximum Of Four Paragraphs):
Well, you see, what happened was...

Born into an impoverished family living in the Tibetan region of Earth, Kai-ro became one of many boys orphaned into the various Buddhist temples throughout the Himalayas. As a result, Kai-ro is fluent in both Tibetan and Mandarin Chinese, being formally educated in the latter while more often speaking the former in normal conversation while 'growing up monk' in the mountains. Functioning like a boarding school and orphanage, the monastery saw to all of Kai-ro's basic needs while providing for his education in both the traditional schools of thought.

It was during Year 0 of our story's continuity that Kai-ro's life became something beyond that of a simple monk, living and learning in a temple in Tibet. For it was in that year that Kai-ro stumbled across a jade ring in the Buddhist Temple. The ring seemed to come to life, flying onto his hand as a voice suddenly echoed inside his head and said...

Kai-ro of Earth, you have the ability to overcome great fear.

Transported across the stars to the planet Oa, Kai-ro's unexpected arrival broke open the all-but-forgotten cold case surrounding the disappearance of the Green Lantern known as Abin Sur. Now, as he graduates from his training and joins the interstellar police force known as the Green Lantern Corps, Kai-ro returns to the planet of his birth and finds himself in the middle of a murder mystery.

What Makes This Character 'Ultimate'?:
To start, Kai-ro (the Green Lantern of the Beyond universe) takes the place of Hal Jordan as Abin Sur's successor. Second, this concept focuses on the Green Lantern Corps as a crime drama, while introducing aspects of a larger universe that includes both the GLC and the Nova Corps (for myself, I'm picturing the GLC as operating similar to the U.S. Coast Guard in its function as a primary law enforcement agency, whereas the Nova Corps is more akin to the U.S. Navy in its function as a military force...)

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POST CATALOGUE



MARY JANE'S LAST DANCE
Part 1Part 2Part 3Part 4Part 5 • Part 6Part 7Part 8Part 9
Epilogue

ORPHAN'S LAMENT
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