Yeah, it's there. I'll have to go through it, naturally.
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STATUS: Is it *normal* to have a bunch of readers on your 1x1? 3 days ago
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Is it *normal* to have a bunch of readers on your 1x1?
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Yeah, man. Ghosts are rude.
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Is that how you get visitor messages? I thought you got them by being cool. ... oh, shit, I forgot I had any.
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Climb into space with Dr. Steve Brule
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If I ever imply France in an RP where, for example, the context for calling something "French Toast" doesn't exist, you can know that's not me.
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I'm a generally chill gomboblin that can be kinda particular. I grew up with plenty of electronics and video games, mostly with games like Final Fantasy, Zelda, and StarCraft. Lots of Nintendo. Dark Cloud is pretty sick. That's a lot of variety, and I do like to play a lot of different games. I like to blend magic and technology in my writing, bringing fantasy into space and sci-fi.
Magic in space is something that I find isn't done very much. Airships and spaceships could make for some cool centerpieces. Skies of Arcadia did a fantastic job of this. Perhaps that's not in space, exactly, but it's pretty close. Some of those ships may as well be space ships.
Magic in space is something that I find isn't done very much. Airships and spaceships could make for some cool centerpieces. Skies of Arcadia did a fantastic job of this. Perhaps that's not in space, exactly, but it's pretty close. Some of those ships may as well be space ships.
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This is pretty cool. It was run once before, but he's starting it up again. :D
This is pretty cool. It was run once before, but he's starting it up again. :D
Can I plug an interest check? o 3o
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Hey, it's this thing. :D
I'm gonna make another Aeva-paired. Though, maybe get a tighter handle on that "pacing" I've heard so much about.
I'm gonna make another Aeva-paired. Though, maybe get a tighter handle on that "pacing" I've heard so much about.
*covers Caits in plushies, one by one*
Sleeeeep.
Sleeeeep.
Oh man, 5-man-team melee.
I remember hearing once that reading good books can help you write better. Perhaps it's something I should do more of. I just got done with 1984 and Fahrenheit 451. I think I might read Dune, next...
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Burth's the only one asking, but I have no complaints about your writing either. You characterize decently well, with enough detail, strong verbs, and varied sentence structure to keep it interesting, and you clearly pay attention to your grammar, punctuation, capitalization, and spelling. You sometimes switch between past tense and present tense for no immediately obvious reason, which can be somewhat jolting, and you still use a bunch of passive verbs that could be changed into anything more interesting without too much difficulty. All in all, you're a good Casual writer. Fun to RP with and exhibiting competence, but perhaps in need of more editing to make sure everything's the best it could be.
That makes sense. They're all first drafts.
As for the tense switching... I think I use it as action vs. reaction? I don't notice tense all that much, myself. x:
Well, it's not that I don't notice it. More like... I dunno. *shrugs*
As long as everyone's asking, how's my writing?
Trinity Stratos
"Sasha." Trinity looked around cautiously, before lowering her hood. There was no way they'd get away with trying anything now, so close to the hotel with all her guild members in it. Though she was confident she had lost them for now.
"Not at the moment, but they tried again. I managed to evade them, but... too close." The minstrel shook.her head and glanced around again. "Let's go inside before we talk more." She began to move toward the hotel, intent on getting to the safety of inside.
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