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@Frater JeremiahThe Governor is accepted! Post him in the character section.

And with that we can finally begin the roleplay!

Everyone is free to post in the RP section now :)
@Caduceus The Tommy Sniper Type and Modified Scroop class are accepted! So is the SPEC-T3r, which I have to say I like a lot. It makes sense an intelligence agency use mobile workers to better blend in with rebellious and criminal elements. I never expected anyone from Zern to apply a mobile worker variant. Very nice!

@Golden Spiral I accidentally sent my feedback to you via PM, so you can look over it there. Once you make the changes to the aesthetics of the Companion then you're free to post it up :)
@Sakaki ChizuruLooks great! Just a note though, Venusian Habitats don't really have 'parks' in the traditional sense. Empty lots or vacant courtyards between buildings would be more appropriate.
@DostHouI'm so happy to hear! I suggest you hop on the Discord to brainstorm ideas and get some nice interwoven character backstories going on~

discord.gg/ZbmnMb

@GreenGoatYep! We're just about started, but you have time to throw your hat into things if you wish to join.
@KaiserElectricJohanna and BUN-e are accepted!
@YukitamasGyfnewid-00 and Gaia Dyrte are accepted!
@Phoenix347 Forge of Mars and Scutson SC are accepted.
@KaiserElectric Thank you for making corrections to Johanna. However I'd like you to remove all instances of mechsuits and replace them with mobile suits or mobile workers. Mechsuits isn't a term in this setting and doesn't accurately reflect the roleplay as a whole.

Now onto the BUN-E:

•LeapFrog Component
-Salvaged from an obscure mechsuit add-on, the Leapfrog is a modification that reinforces the leg joints and allows the thruster to perform a quick booster fire, effectively allowing BUN-e to perform high and long-distance jumps as needed.

Again, remove mechsuit and replace it with mobile suit. I should note that all mobile suits and decent mobile workers are capable of making thruster-assisted jumps and leaps. If the Leapfrog Component is meant to allow faster thruster-assisted jumps by eliminating any delays to ignition and providing immideate acceleration, you should try to specify that.

Also I'd like you to specify the caliber of the TMKF-Rifle.
@KaiserElectricI said this before, but wireless communication isn't very reliable or long range due to Wilberforce particles. And I told you specifically she'd need to wire into the physical lines running between the habitats. However for the sake of simplicity we can say that she's hacked into/modified the high power transmitters attached to the habitats and is using them as ad-hoc signal relays to reach all of/most of Venus.

Also, LAGO is cute and reminds me of Haro. Though I'd like you to go into more detail on how Johanna made them since Artificial Intelligences available to Zern and the public aren't common in the setting.
@Phoenix347Let me know when you're finished with the Forge of Mar's technical history.
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