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Already wandering around the mansion was Mack. He had been with Sam since the day she had found him, and even though he could review his database within a second, the seven days he had spent with her felt like a month. As Bladewolf strolled around the mansion, he checked himself over for anything that could be updated. Currently, he was at one-hundred per-cent charge, as he had spent the previous night laying under the brightest light in the mansion, the solar panels absorbing the artificial light and turning it into electricity. The reason the light had been shining so intensely was because he may or may not have overloaded the fusebox of the mansion a little bit. The light was no longer functioning.

After another stroll, he find himself back where he started. A lot of the time at the mansion was spent trying to make a 'mental' map of the building. Mack used that map to direct himself toward the area where the new members of the team would be entering from. Upon arriving at the large mohagony doors, he saw that Sam was already there. "Good morning." His synthesized voice said. Mack had been constantly tweaking his social and communication routines, trying to get more into the concept of 'general conversation'. So far, he had been making some progress.

Suddenly, the door bell rang, as well as a lot of thoughts in Mack's head. Lots of holes needed to be filled in his data streams, and within a half second a lot of them were filled. "It appears we have someone at the door." Mack states the obvious, before quickly trotting up to the door. He let out a groan. Mack had learned that he had to 'let his emotions flow' in order to make himself a bit more interactive. Nonetheless, the groan showed how he was feeling about the door handle. The rounded door handle. Living in a mansion, he had learned how to open these, however they were still tricky. His tail reaches up to the door handle, and twists around it, tightening the grip. He then twists his tail, and the door opens.

Mack sees nobody at the door, but sees what seems to be some belongings. Stepping outside, and around the belongings, he sees a girl at the bottom of the steps. A quick look at her indicated that something had happened, most likely she had fallen down, indicated by the dirt streak on her dress. "Hello." He says, standing at the top of the steps. "Are you alright?" He asks, cocking his head at the girl.

ODSTs: Hunters Become Hunted (Datadogie + kalinsovrin)

Sarah, Helen, and Mary shake their heads. Sarah had a small smile on her face in appreciation that James had showed his thanks to her. Zee looked around her, and then shrugged before shaking her head. She smiles.

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Scarifar said
Hey uh, is this still open?

It is no longer open, but thank you for asking.

@xcalx1dw
This also applies to you, too.

@Charter
Your edited version of your CS will be reviewed soon.

@Everyone
Monster should be updating the first post to fix the link problem soon. The first post will be coming along pretty soon, too.

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@Charter
Many parts of your CS are good, however the CS needs more detail. The bio doesn't exactly state how he got to the situation he is in now, etc. Also, your CS has multiple spelling mistakes. That's a minor issue, but can be irritating at times, so please try to proof-read your post.
One thing that both me and Monster picked up on was the fact that Daniel randomly got made a battle suit. It's understandable why he was made the life-suit, but why would Dr Cold make him a battle-suit?

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@Disciple Cain
The healing ability at it's current stage isn't in a form to be accepted. However, if it were to be adjusted to having the larger the wound, the higher the power required. This would even it out, as it would come into playing your characters weakness should the wound in question prove to be more than the normal bruise, cut or scrape. Your character is accepted, but we would like you to keep this in mind.

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I'm only going to accept a CS if it is finished.

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The teams have been made up, and are now on the first post of the RP.

This RP is also now closed to new applicants. People who have spoken in the OOC may still submit or edit CSes unless they are already accepted.

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Shard said
I have a question ^^.
I read that our teams have an HQ, right? Or have I been sleep readin'? XD
Anyways, if we do, I was wondering...do we have a selection of equipments and weapons locked away behind some bullet proof glass? Skyler would like to know...*looks around*

You are right about the HQ, we are indeed going to have one. And I believe that the HQ will have a set of equipment stored within it, but nothing to advanced at the start of the RP. We might not even have a set of equipment at the start.

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@Asuras
Great! Monster and I will read over the CS later together.