Avatar of Dedonus

Status

User has no status, yet

Bio

User has no bio, yet

Most Recent Posts

*facepalm*

I probably should have said I needed a few clarifications before I accepted the application instead of saying that there were problems/issues.

Anyways, I just needed clarification whether you actually meant Slovakia (real-life country) or Sokovia (fictional MCU country). That was it (besides his relationship to the X-Men, which was vague in the character sheet). I just needed a simple clarification on these two questions. But I guess it doesn't matter anymore if you are rescinding your application.
Well first off Dazzler is actually based on her Ultimate version who was a punk rocker.

After searching Ultimate Dazzler on Marvel Wikia, I see what you mean...

As for if his in the x men or not I was having him just now becoming an established member after doing a little personal soul searching.

So that's a "No, he is not on the team at the moment so he is not going after Spider-Man or the Brotherhood. However, he has had a connection with the Xavier School and is trying to get onto the X-Men roster"?

Honestly the only reason I did the whole sokvia stuff was because it worked into Era's plans. Really though if you don't want to accept it I don't mind. Would just be easier on everyone else I think.

No, no. I don't have any real problems with that part of the background. I just wanted to point out that in your application, you wrote that Quicksilver is from Slovakia, not Sokovia. If you really meant to say Sokovia (i.e. the fictional Eastern European country in Age of Ultron) and NOT the real-life modern day country called Slovakia, which use to be part of Czechoslovakia, you need to change those references. From the post I am quoting, it seems like you meant Sokovia (MCU country); however, your character sheet says Slovakia (which was NOT in Age of Ultron).

And when you say "Era", I assume you mean Eru. As your character sheet stands as of now, it does not conform with Eru's "Purple Man" CS. Right now, according to your CS, Magneto was fighting the Communist Regime in Czechoslovakia and NOT the Shadow Conquerors in Sokovia. Again, if you meant for the 80's Brotherhood to be fighting the Shadow Conquerors in Sokovia, you need to replace all references to Slovakia to Sokovia. I am fine with and all for your character sheet matching up with Eru's Purple Man. You just have to make sure it actually does.
@DrewVonAwesome

A few problems/issues I see in your application.

1) Quicksilver (and Wanda) are from Slovakia, the real-life central European country, or from Sokovia (from Age of Ultron)? Just asking because the spelling is quite similar. If you intended on having them from modern-day Slovakia, note that during the period that Pietro and Wanda were growing up there, it probably would have been Czechoslovakia (the dissolution of Czechoslovakia happened around 1989, so that is about around when the Brotherhood ended). Technically there was a Slovakia (or rather a Slovak Socialist Republic), but it was still part of Czechoslovakia. And I assume Magneto was fighting against the Communist Regime, correct?

2) I don't know about anyone else, but I kind of envisioned the 80's Brotherhood similar to The Company in Heroes. Of course there would not be the "one of us, one of them" rule, but they would have worked more in the shadows. I am fine with mutants being around for quite some time and everyone else (non-mutants) just did not have a proper name for them yet (and the X-gene has not been discovered until relatively recently in the IC. Maybe I should write up an NPC applications for Professor X, Magneto, and Nick Fury so that everyone is on the same page.

3) The application does not make it really apparent whether or not Pietro is currently part of the X-Men at the moment. That would be important due to the X-Men related story-arcs happening at the moment. The sample post makes it seem like he is, but he isn't.

4) After trying to look up Eastern European, I finally concluded that no one can really agree upon the boundaries between Central, Eastern, and Southern Europe. I give up! Wikipedia says that Slovakia is Central Europe, but the Eastern Europe page is a total mess.

5) I see you name dropping Dazzler, although apparently she has the mouth of a sailor now...
@DrewVonAwesome I'll look over the Quicksilver application sometime today/tonight.
@Raptorman Hopefully the collaborative post between me and @NeutralNexus should be up maybe tomorrow. We just need to finish up the last bit.
<Snipped quote by Sep>

Was this the war on Iraq for oil gaining purposes? Under George "double yuh". - Captain America lead the black ops team that captured Saddam Hussein. Later he infiltrated Pakistan where they found Osama Bin Laden's hideout. The war on terrorism was only just beginning.

The news would be so much more interesting if that were the case. XD

"Yeah send Cap to ISIS. He'll sort 'em out!"


In the Ultimates 2, Captain America leads a SHIELD super-soldier army into Iran and disarms Iran of their nuclear weapons.
@Angel Vicky X-Men post is up. You may make a post for Jean, but don't engage the Brotherhood yet. I have a Ms. Marvel most for setting that up. ;)

A blinding, ruby concussive beam blasted out of Cyclops’ visor as he aimed for a wall turret within the Danger Room. Once the turret had exploded from the energy beam, Scott dove to one side, dodging the rounds of ammunition that one of the other turrets shot at him. Rolling into a knelling stance, Cyclops pressed a button on his visor, releasing yet another beam at the turret that was just targeting him.

Then, several robotic training dummies appeared from trap doors in the Danger Room’s floor. They rushed at Scott while he shot lower-powered concussive blast that knocked each individual robot onto the ground, disabling them in the process. However, since there were more opponents than Scott could down before they all reached him, Scott was overrun by them. While he tried to put a fight up against them, swinging his fists at them, the training robots swarmed him. Now, they had pulled Cyclop’s arms behind his back while one of the robots was preparing for the finishing blow and the rest gathered around in a circle.

“You think I need to touch my visor to use my powers?” Cyclops taunted them with a cocky attitude, “If that what you think, you’re in for a rude awakening.” Scott compressed both of his thumbs on triggers located on his gloves. He swept his head from one side to the other, blasting all of the robots that were standing in front of him. He was about ready to break out of the grasp of the two robots that held his hands behind his back, but the robots suddenly powered down and the Danger Room training program powered down.

A red strobe light flashed inside the Danger Room, alerting Cyclops that something important needed his attention. This fact was confirmed when he heard the Professor telepathically communicate with him. “Cyclops, meet the others in the War Room.”

Scott rushed out of the Danger Room and headed towards the War Room, where the Professor would prep his X-Men before sending them out on any kind of mission. When Scott arrived there, he saw that the Professor was already seated in his wheelchair in front of the holographic projector that was positioned in the center of the room. Next to him stood Storm, who was already suited up for the X-Men’s next mission.

“Well, we can get started while we wait for Colossus and Nightcrawler to arrive.” Professor X placed on his hand on the side of his hand, sending out a telepathic message to the two absent X-Men so that they could ‘hear’ what he has been saying. Meanwhile, the holographic projector pulled up a satellite image of the Eastern Seaboard, with a focus on New England. “As we all know, Senator Kelly has made his position on Mutants perfectly clear at this point. However, that doesn’t mean we should ignore any threat on his life because of his hateful views towards people like us.”

“Today, Senator Kelly was scheduled to hold a rally in Boston to bolster his chances as becoming the Republican presidential nominee. However, Cerebro has just picked up a mutant disturbance in the general vicinity of the Senator’s location. From the information taken from local news outlets by Cerebro, it seems that our friends in the Brotherhood has decided to crash the party. Cyclops, I would like you to…”

However, Colossus suddenly burst into the War Room, a worried expression painted across his face. “Professor, Kurt is missing! I checked his room before I came down here, but he wasn’t there. I searched everywhere for him, but our blue imp is nowhere to be found!”

Professor X placed both of his hands on the side of his head, focusing to see if he could find his missing student without the aid of Cerebro. However, the Professor could not find Nightcrawler within the range of his telepathic abilities. “Let’s see if the mansion’s security footage can shed some light on where Kurt might have gone.” After he had uploaded the security footage on the holographic projector, the video feed appeared before the four X-Men. While there were not cameras inside his student’s individual room, for privacy reasons, there was a camera placed in the dormitory hallway that lead to the bedrooms.

After the Professor fast-forwarded through several hours of video, he finally allowed the video to run at normal speed when he saw a red and blue figure appear on the screen. One moment, he was walking into Nightcrawler’s room. The next, he had Kurt in a headlock as they exited the bedroom. Before the figure forced Nightcrawler to teleport outside of the X-Mansion, the figure looked up directly at the camera, revealing the large white lenses that were framed by a black trim on the figures mask.

“Why would Spider-Man come all the way to Westchester to kidnap Nightcrawler?” Cyclops asked the Professor.

However, the Professor sat in silence for a few moments, collecting his thoughts before he spoke. “I don’t know, Scott. But I do know that we will have to change our tactics now, since our ranks will be spread then. Cyclops, you take Colossus and head down to Manhattan. I’ll assist you two in locating Spider-Man through my telepathic abilities. Hopefully we can resolve this issue without any violence.” Then the Professor turned to Storm. “Storm, take the Blackbird and pick up Jean and Hank McCoy. I’ll telepathically alert them to the situation before your arrive.”

As soon as the three X-Men knew their missions, they all rushed to either the Black Bird or the X-Mansion’s vehicle garage. While Cyclops, Colossus, and Storm were leaving, Professor X used his telepathic abilities to contact Jean Grey.

“Jean, I’m sorry to interrupt the fundraiser, but I’m afraid we need you elsewhere. Please excuse yourself from the party and politely ask Hank to come along with you. Unfortunately, we are having a small problem with man-power at the moment and we need every man we can get. Storm will rendezvous with you in the Blackbird”.

Then, Charles Xavier tried to determine Spider-Man’s location. However, every time he tried to use his telepathic powers, Professor X kept tripping something that was like an alarm. While this “alarm” did not prevent him from finding his location, it somehow allowed Spider-Man to know that someone was trying to get inside his head. Knowing that he could not continue to pry Spider-Man’s mind for his whereabouts, he decided to use his powers to see where Bobby and Angelica were. He knew that the two had teamed up several times in the past. In fact, today they went down to Manhattan so that they could “hang out” for a while.

Therefore, using his mutant powers, Professor X discovered that Bobby was with Spider-Man at that moment. However, so that he would not alert Spider-Man to their little ‘investigation, Charles Xavier decided not to alert Iceman to the situation. However, it was peculiar that Angelica was not with them. Something seemed very odd about this situation.
@Sep Should be fixed now.
Hey @Dedonus

What was the 2000 war like? :P

<Snipped quote by Dedonus>


Must have been a typo when I copy and pasted it so the bullet would still be there. Must not have deleted that one...

Edit: I see what I did. I pasted Doom's history note on the wrong bullet point.
© 2007-2026
BBCode Cheatsheet