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Current Remember, nobody actually enjoys roleplaying if there isn't at least five shameful fetishes uncovered by the 2nd page.
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Somebody stole my mood ring. I don't know how to feel about it.
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7 yrs ago
Let's be honest, it's far more satisfying and challenging to actually imagine what a character looks like than paste a hundred gifs of a celebrity and call it good.
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So, a team of players who are good at playing as a team in a team-based game are individually bad players. Seems kind of silly when you put it like that, no?
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My goal these days is to have an RP that can actually finish, or the very least, last a few years. I see way too many die on page one to take chances
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A Light in the Dark


Things quieted down as the attackers’ numbers dwindled, the small group fighting in the dark fending off the Falmer in their own dwelling, their sight reduced sufficiently in the dark. Rhea’s sword was slick with blood, but she’d escaped from harm, in no small part thanks to the brave actions of Gaius and Balroth, who took down the shamans with great risk to themselves. She wiped the blood from her blade with a cloth, more of a rag really, and smiled as she looked around at her companions. They all fought well together, she thought. It would make for a good story later, when they were all safely away from their predicament. She’d look after them and see them through; they were here because of her, and Rhea was not the kind of person who let down people who put their trust in her. Her smile faded as she looked past the walls of their fortification, the lull in the battle allowing her mind to ponder about Daro’Vasora and Latro. It killed her not knowing what happened to them.

Focus, Rhea. You can’t falter in front of these people. You lose faith in yourself, they lose faith in each other. she thought, her smile returning as she turned to take a look at the wounded.

The last of the Falmer were exterminated with ease once the mages were dealt with accordingly. Brynja’s chest heaved with each breath, her face slick with sweat as she surveyed the scene. A massacre, truly. Perhaps the fact that their opponents were Falmer made the reality of that statement less daunting.

“Medic!” the gruff voice of Balroth echoed, catching both Brynja and Rhea’s attention.

Healing came as second nature for Brynja, she did it without so much as batting an eye. She glanced once over her shoulder at Rhea, who ushered her off with a wave of her hand, she would be fair well, the others… not so much.

“Help me get this pack off.” Brynja said, squatting down so that Rhea could reach her. With two hard tugs, Rhea had freed her rucksack and passed it to Brynja. She set off for Balroth and Gaius, gesturing for the Orsimer to lay the man on the ground. It took her mere seconds to realize what afflicted him. His skin was pale, and he was cold to the touch. Of course the gash on his forearm hinted at the underlying problem.

“Poison.” She murmured, more to herself than to Balroth. She had to act fast if Gaius were to survive the following moments.

“It is your lucky day, Gaius.” She lifted the flap on her rucksack, and discovered at once the source of the wetness she had experienced during the fall. A half dozen of ale bottles were shattered to pieces. She set her jaw firm, her teeth grinding against one another. She dug past the shards of glass for a wooden box buried at the bottom of the pouch. Fate was on their side today. Her potion bottles had survived the fall.

She uncorked one bottle, and pressed it to the man’s lips, forcing him to drink its contents. Once emptied, Brynja focused on cleaning and bandaging the wound. It would heal, and he would survive. She was certain.

When she had doctored Gaius to the best of her abilities, Brynja turned to her attention to Balroth, “Come find me if his condition worsens.”

With that, Brynja set off on her rounds, tending to all of those who had suffered even the smallest of wounds. She cornered Megana, who insisted she had nothing but a mere scratch, and Alim, and tended to their minor wounds when she spotted two figures approaching from the edges of the fray. She had just finished lecturing the two of them on the importance of keeping their wounds clean, because even the smallest wound could lead to an infection.

She rose to her feet, hand darting to the longsword buckled at her side. Her eyes narrowed in the darkness, straining to see who was headed their direction. There, she could make out the distinct features of a pointed ears… Daro’Vasora. And Latro! Brynja snatched the rucksack off the ground and cleared the distance in eight long strides. Her eyes swept over them, she knew from the way Latro moved he was gravely injured. She took him from the Khajiit and laid him flat on the ground. There would be no one to argue with her, not when someone’s life depended on it.

His abdominal region was saturated with blood. Even though he was naturally pale in complexion, he appeared even more pale, evidence of significant blood loss. Questions whirled around her head but she could not ask them now.

She dove into the ritual of healing him, cleaning the wound as best she could before she bound his abdomen tight, man-handling him as if he were a mere child. Brynja hovered over him for what felt like hours, she knew that the bandages wouldn’t suffice, and resorted to healing him by magic. It was her only chance. And Latro’s.

As she knelt beside him, Brynja’s hand emitted a golden light. A swirling orb of pale yellow and golden flecks danced in her palm before she guided the orb to him, the magicka enveloping him entirely. She envisioned the inner tissues and organs sealing shut, while the bleeding yielded.

After several minutes, Brynja closed her hand, causing the orb to disappear altogether. Though he was still pallid in color, Brynja could see the rise and fall of his chest had steadied. That’s when she turned her attention to Daro’Vasora. While she might not like the cat due to her sassy nature, it was her duty to heal and protect those in this company.

“What of you?” She asked.

The Khajiit had slumped against one of the half-collapsed walls, head rested backwards, a fatigue overtaking over as the adrenaline sapped from her body, a tremble crossing through her body as the fear had replaced what courage she had managed to muster finding her way to safety. She overturned her palms, crimson gashes bisecting across the width of her palms. “I almost didn’t stop it.” she replied quietly, not looking up to meet Brynja’s face. It was almost as if shame filled her, or at the very least the ordeal had diminished whatever smug defiance she clung to like a cloak. Daro’Vasora had survived all manner of confrontations and life-or-death situations and always came out with a grin, her blood pumping with excitement from outmatching her adversaries, but this… it was different. The cruel, twisted monsters that had haunted her imagination for as long as she could remember were somehow worse in flesh.

But she was alive, and she had faced her fear with what she considered ample courage, didn’t she? It gave her enough strength to regain her composure, somewhat. “I won’t be of much use if I’m not able to have steady hands. If it’s not too taxing on you, I’d be grateful for your assistance.” She looked at the others the Nord had tended to. She was not one that Daro’Vasora had pegged as a healer, but people were often surprising if you gave them the opportunity, she found. “I understand that it can be rather taxing.”

With a chorus of grunts following a steady rhythm of his crawling hands, Latro found himself beside the two others. Every other thought in his head begged him to rest while the others screamed at him to keep his thousand-pound eyelids open. “I have a healing poultice tucked in my bags somewhere, Vasora.” He breathed, managing perhaps the most tired and pitiful smile the Khajiit had ever seen. “If you’ll fetch it?”

He threw a pointing hand in the direction of his satchel which lay where Brynja had resorted to jostling him painfully. The Nords even took to the art of healing in a gruff and tough manner, he supposed. That might explain the abundance of scars on everyone in Skyrim, an errant comedic thought crossed his mind. Once she did and brought the bag back, he set himself to the near herculean task- for him in this current state- of rifling through his own possessions trying to find the sealed jars of healing poultices he kept on hand. “Your hands.” He offered his own out to her, tremors apparent in them. “It’s one way to say thank you.” Despite the tired smile and stalwart attitude to his own wounds, he of all people felt his slack tongue and slurred speech. Sleep, rest. He needed it. But his friend needed steady hands. And a thank you, at least in a form she might accept.

With an accepting nod, Daro’Vasora placed her quivering hands into Latro’s. Considering he had nearly been disemboweled and nearly looked like he was about to keel over, he remained courteous and concerned about others. It made her feel somewhat guilty about her usual selfish aims, but it could have also been her own vulnerabilities stemming from entirely too many brushes with death the past… gods, how long had it been? It felt like it had been a week since they’d been trapped down there. Perhaps this is what soldiers speak of, about forming bonds on the battlefield. she thought idly, her hands burning in pain as she tried to hold them straight. “Shouldn’t I be the one thanking you?” she asked, not forcing a smile as much as she thought it might. “You’re the one fixing my mangled hands and you got hurt pretty badly to make sure we both got back safely. I think we make an okay team, don’t you?”

“One for the songs, to be sure.” He chuckled and moved the thin stick he was applying the poultice with away from Vasora’s hands as he shook with a series of wheezing coughs. He took a moment to regain his composure and stifled a whimper before finishing off the last bit of work. “Your hands will heal, but I wouldn’t grip a weapon unless...”

Well, he had no taste for thinking like that now, even in the midst of this skirmish. “And maybe we should break even and thank each other then.” He smiled and leaned back to rest on his satchel. His stomach still held tenderness to it and he winced as he settled into his final position. “We shouldn’t be thinking of jumping back into the fray either way. I don’t plan to.”

Setting herself back, Daro’Vasora looked to the man with tired eyes. “C’mon. You can’t think that we’re avoiding anything at this point. I doubt the Falmer are going to screech at us,” her tone shifted to something much more raspy and shrill, “‘O great ones! You slain our overlord, please let us show you the escape and please accept this voucher for The Winking Skeever for free salmon bites and a tankard of ale for your troubles!’” suddenly, the Khajiit coughed into her arm due to the strain in her voice. “I’m just going to wrap up my hands and break every single fucking bone along the way if it means I get to breathe fresh air again.”

“I’ll watch you do it and sing a song about it after.” Latro smiled, submitting to his fluttering eyelids more and more as the time passed, “I’ll split the pay, of course. Seventy-thirty?”

“In my favour and you have a deal.” An impish grin crossed her feline features. “So, think we should tell Rhea about our discovery, or are we just cashing in on that one ourselves?”

“Who’d believe the tale but her?” He said, trying to shift into a more comfortable position and wincing when he found the opposite, “Who in Oblivion’s planes would believe half of this shite?”

A lazy gesture towards Judena was afforded. “Our token Argonian, for one. I’ve actually gone to her for assistance in identifying relics before. She may be missing half of her mind, but what’s left is actually quite… well, impressive, really. I may or may not have pointed Rhea in her direction when she was looking to put together the expedition.”

“All these amazing people and I was hired because I like to play with bugs, mud, and mold.” Latro chuckled, “I’m sure not many people mind my lute though. It passes the time.”

“I say we tell her. Maybe when we get back, we can find some way to get down here and secure the site. Or some of the others can, I can barely stand sitting at my workstation in the entrance chamber and I’ve had my fill of this place already.” He offered.

“For what it’s worth, I’ve always found bards to be some of the most invaluable people around. Music’s good for one’s soul, especially when the other offerings are Nords talking about how great their names and beards are. I’m in accord, I’d rather someone else comes down here to look at our find, because goblins, Draugr, and all sorts of other nasties are one thing, the Falmer… I try not to think about them. I’ll find them interesting from afar, kind of like how I’d rather count the teeth in a dragon’s skull when the rest of it isn’t alive.” Her head turned. “And speaking of Rhea…”

The Imperial came over to the pair, crouching beside them, a relieved and warm smile across her comely features, her hair somehow still managing to look well-groomed despite everyone looking like they had been through a half-dozen street brawls in a monsoon. “I’m so relieved to see you two made it back. I have to say, you frightened me a bit, but it looks like there was nothing to worry about. You both were chosen because you’re capable. How are you holding up?”

The Khajiit raised her hands, palms facing outwards, the paultice shimmering in the magelight floating above. “Unlike Latro, I didn’t come as close to seeing what I had for breakfast again, but not for a lack of the Falmer trying. He was the one that kept that enviable dream from becoming a reality. You all looked like you had the time of your lives without us.”

Rhea chuckled softly, a flighty feminine laugh. If Daro’Vasora didn’t know any better, she’d think Rhea was about as genuine as a high-class lady of the night in some of the higher-class neighbourhoods of the Imperial City. Physically, she was without obvious flaw and her voice and disposition were immaculate. It bothered the Khajiit to some degree, although she wouldn’t be so petty as to ever bring it up. She didn’t give much care to the standards of humans, but she knew how humans, and elves, treated those they perceived to be things of beauty. It just made Khajiit, Argonians, and Orsimer kin when it came to being taken seriously in anything that was considered socially acceptable.

It’s rather hard to get people to buy your relics when they think you stole them from someone who didn’t stop breathing six-hundred years ago. Well, if everyone’s going to think I’m a thief, might as well act… my, you’re being petty, aren’t you? Good. Means you haven’t lost focus.

“Those cuts look uncomfortable, but I can tell you’re in good hands. But yes, we had quite the skirmish on our hands, but as I’ve said before, we’ve a capable group among us.” Rhea said, placing a hand on Latro’s shoulder. “And how do you fare, Latro? You look like you’ve had quite the adventure.”

Latro looked up at her and smiled as genuine a smile as someone who was suffering from hypothermia, blood loss, and physical and mental exhaustion could. The only word that passed his lips was the only one that truly summed up how he felt, “Yes.” Still struggling to stay awake, he couldn’t know if what came out was legible, but in his head, his lips and tongue worked in perfect harmony to utter one last message in this wink of consciousness, “Vasora and I, we saw something down here… tablet… paint...”

“It’s much more interesting than he’s making it out to be.” Daro’Vasora interjected, shaking her head at the Breton’s state.

“Well, now you’ve got my interest.” Rhea grinned, rising up. “We are down here to explore, and it sounds like you two have gotten quite the lead on the rest of us. If you can find us the way, I’d be pleased to take it into account. Who knows, maybe it’ll lead us to an exit.” turning from the duo, she made an announcement. “I’ve made a decision, everyone. We’re going to rest for an hour, considering no one seems to be in the best of shape to continue on. I’ll keep watch, I just want you all ready to continue on and your wounds dressed. No sense in rushing along if we can’t fight. I’ll be up here if you need me.” Rhea said with confidence, as if they’d simply reached a plateau after a long hike. Climbing up the rubble to the half-section of intact roof, she was out of sight in moments, presumably watching diligently like a hawk for further attackers.

Daro’Vasora shuffled over until she was sitting next to Latro, leaning into him and using his shoulder as something to rest her head against. “Don’t get any ideas. You’re just less hard than the rock.” she said as she shut her eyes and let out a long sigh.




Some time later…

Up and rested, the group set out, surprisingly rejuvenated from their brief break. While the pain and wounds still persisted, it seemed like everyone was as good as they were going to get and now that everyone was still together, there was a much more positive energy than before where uncertainty and fear ruled. Even Daro’Vasora seemed to have bucked most of her fears, likely thanks to her proximity to the others and having woken up without being dragged off by monsters in the dark.

Faster than it felt heading the opposite direction, Daro’Vasora had found the dwellings her and Latro had discovered before and the paintings and carvings that she had deduced the Falmer made. “So, Rhea… feel strange looking at what might very well be the last coherent thoughts of the Snow Elves before they turned into savage beasts?” Daro’Vasora asked, a well-chewed bone from a bygone meal once again comfortably between her lips.

The Imperial was speechless, for a change. She traced her fingers along much like Daro’Vasora and Latro had done before. After a spell, she whispered. “This is… incredible. This must have been done while the Snow Elves were taken as slaves, forced to live and work down here. Someone didn’t want them to be forgotten.”

“A fate no one wants.” Latro said, still not exhausting his store of awe at the sight of the huge stone tablet, “The words of either peoples are lost on me, but the pictures are all too obvious,” he paused, eyes looking back at the drawing of a Dwemer ascending to a gate, “Or most of them are.”

“Indeed.” Rhea nodded while crossing her arms and tapping her chin with a finger as she looked at the tale unfolding before her on the stone, “Obscurity is a death all its own.”

“How macabre.” Latro muttered in response before he looked around at his surroundings, “Appropriately, though.”

Daro’Vasora was busy trying to air out her water-logged journal to no avail when suddenly, she stopped dead still, save for her ear pivoting. A look of grave concern crossed her features as she hastily shoved her journal back in her pack and headed past the wall to look towards where she thought she heard a familiar and ominous sound. “Everyone, quiet!” She hissed, staring into the dark, her fingers pressing hard against the stone for support.

Shortly, steady serious of thump. Thump. Thump was heard, followed by a bellowing groan that seemed to reverberate through the entire cave. The Khajiit slumped back against the wall, her teeth grinding against the bone, somehow audibly against the approaching sound. The cries and frantic footfalls of Falmer were heard once more, not far from where they were, and like a flash in the pan, a bright blinding light was seen a few hundred meters out, searching around like a spotlight. Sometimes as it passed, the silhouettes of scattering Falmer could be seen. “Everyone, listen.” Daro’Vasora said, looking everyone in the face with grave concern. “Latro and I saw whatever in Oblivion that thing is when we first got out of the water. I think it may be some Dwemer construct, but what’s important is that light is fatal. A Falmer got spotted by it and impaled, which I usually consider a good thing, but it also might mean any one of us.”

The groaning got closer, and vibrations could be felt; whatever the thing was, it was colossal and seemed to be moving along the ceiling. The light was starting to get worryingly close.

“There’s a larger structure up ahead, I don’t know if any of you can see it in the dark, but it’s about 300 paces ahead and whatever it is is where the path leads to. I think it has to be safer than being out in the open like this.”

As Latro’s eyes grew more focused in the dark, he indeed could see a towering structure looming in the darkness like the hazy suggestions of mountains in the distance. “I see it,” Latro said, looking back towards the groan, “I see it, let’s go.”

“Let’s.” Rhea’s voice had gotten to the two just before she did, laying a hand on their shoulders, “Lead the way, Daro’Vasora.”

With that, they took off at a steady pace, Latro cursing at himself for barely being able to keep up with his still-healing body. They ducked behind cover in a large gazebo-like structure just as the light swept over the crumbled pillar they hid behind. Latro was grateful that the pair chose catch their breaths here, as he didn’t know how much of this running his legs could take before they refused to carry his weight. Something wet dripped onto his forearm and his features betrayed confusion. Holding out his hand, another drip splashed his palm. It was slick, almost viscous. “L-Latro...” Rhea whispered so softly yet so terrified.

Latro looked up and his eyes met the snarling teeth and quivering lip of a Falmer. Another drip of saliva tapped his forehead and he swallowed nervously. Another of the booming groans resounded through the vast chamber they were in and the Falmer moved to clamber to where he and his two companions chose to hide. The Falmer’s hand grasped Rhea’s shoulder firmly making her yelp and immediately cover her mouth. Latro gripped and twisted one of the thing’s ears and hauled it down to them behind the downed pillar. Not thinking of any other options in the half-second he had, he shoved his other hand down the thing’s throat before it could screech in alarm. He brought a fist into the air and down to smash its throat closed and shoved it away from him.

Latro held his fists to his chest as they quivered. He took solace in one thing, he was nowhere near being used to taking the life from anything again. Rhea’s pointing finger and Vasora’s eyes flitting about the shadowed nooks and crannies of the rocks and structures extinguished that much too quick for his liking. “More.” Rhea breathed, exhaustion and frustration apparent in her voice.

The groaning was almost deafening at this point, vibrations filling everyone's’ chests as the thing loomed perilously close. Knowing that time might have been running short, they had to move. “Only thing I can think of that would keep the Falmer out here where they can be caught rather than inside that structure is there’s a locked door or a blockage. I need to get there so we have some hope of getting out of the open. Any volunteers to keep the drooling creeps off my back, or do I have to wander off on my lonesome?” Daro’Vasora asked, plenty of urgency in her tone.

"Do it." Rhea replied, having regained her composure after the shock of her unexpected Falmer encounter. "The rest of us need to clear a path and keep the Falmer away from us. Just stay out of the light!" she said, rising up from behind cover and moving past the next bit of rubble to one further along, being mindful of the searching light.
A lot of fine folk already covered a lot of what I would say, but I'll still put down my usual receipe.

-You as a GM are responsible for keeping your players invested by keeping the game moving. Do not let it get hung up waiting for one or two people. Set a loose time frame, or keep an eye on momentum, and when it sags, keep things trucking along or you will have people start to leave due to inactivity.

-First few months/ story arcs are essential to get through to establish your core player groups who feel the game is going to last, as well as people start to build relationships with one another and as a GM. People will also be attached to the characters after interacting with them for a while, so GMing starts to become more routine maintence verses trying to actively keep people invested.

-Take time to format your interest check and OOC. Colour headers/ find a banner generator, use graphics, and keep each section distinct. Generally I'll lay it out like;

* Title + in-character exposition to hook players/ hint at the theme and core conflict of the game

* Lore and setting summary, like you're reading the back cover or inside sleeve of a novel. No OOC bits here, just straight up "This is fantasyland, where nobody gets along. A long lost princess named Rabies is back with never before witnessed magic. Fantasyland is falling to Rabies, but a group of heroes gather in a tavern to play their next move to stop Rabies. This is their story." Kind of thing. It tells players exactly what the setting is, core conflict, and who the characters are.

* OOC stuff where you explain things in a more clear and detailed way, like the posting standards, what the game is about, a bit of the lore that's essential to get started, your rules and what not, and so on so forth. Ask yourself if there's been times you've wanted information going into an RP; add that here.

* I usually do a lore codex here. It's pretty optional

* Character sheet skeleton

- Do not be afraid of having pretty elaborate rules. If you outline exactly what you're looking for players to follow, you cut down on immense levels of conflict and people power gaming. I even go so far as to put equipment restrictions. The hard part about things like fandoms is people will try to treat it like a video game if you don't stop them ahead of time.

- Do not be afraid to decline players who aren't up to your standards. I like to give feedback on character submissions part way through the application period, that way people have a chance to edit and get it up to snuff. If a character doesn't fit the setting (e.g. a librarian in a mercenary company), don't be afraid to say so. Offer ideas how to alter key points and keep things meshing well. People are often open to criticism, especially if you help them make changes.

- Similar note; You can reject and kick players for any reason. If someone rolls up with a stellar sheet but you know they have a bad additude and cause issues in other RPs, you are not obligated to take them.

- Set yourself a reasonable player cap. I've been GMing for nearly 6 years and I still don't like to handle more than 8-10 players.

- Keep the OOC somewhat active. Assume not everyone uses IM services like discord and post all meaningful notices and information there. Stuff like mini writing exercises are great!

- This is a big one: plan ahead. Even before launching the game, write down a bunch of world building info like NPCs, locations, history, do a plot roadmap, write down potential plot points and conflicts, everything you will need to firmly establish the game out of the gate. Think of it like a starter pack in a game and further plot points are expansion packs. When you do your interest check, have the OOC already finished so people aren't waiting and have the intro well under way. The less people have to wait on you, the better chances you have of success.

That should be a pretty good start for you, best of luck!
I'm still here!
On the topic of passwords in OOCs, I tend to find them kind of silly because A) they're usually really obvious and could be picked up just glancing at the rules or another character submission without reading the whole OOC, and B) it's usually pretty obvious when someone didn't read the OOC through.

If I had a shot for every submission I've read where the character in inappropiate for the kind of roleplay, absolutely nothing that would hint at why the character would participate in the group in the first place, having prohibited abilities/ equipment/ etc. that were outlined in the skeleton, or just be completely out of touch with the game's themes and direction, I would still be drunk and it's been well over a month since my last RP came out.
@Dervish

Will definitely be done by then. Sorry again for the delay - I'm really not used to working so much and it's draining my creativity a hella lot. :(


Oh I know all about that. I'm day 5 of my 10 day work week and I feel like I'm pretty much in zambo mode. Even if you don't make it by Friday and we post before you do, feel free to post what you wrote plus reactions to current progress and shiz!
Hey gang! Have your in-progress posts done by the 22nd (next Friday), we GMs are going to keep things moving along after that.
D:

What if I just cry NOW and save you the trouble of any killing? EH? That sounds efficient!!


That's no fun. That would be like getting a carny game prize without actually playing. :D
I don't know who, I don't know when, and I don't know how...

But somebody is going to reference anime. I ding-dong-diddly guarantee it.


I mean, Shaft's a turboweeb, I wouldn't put it past him. ;D

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Once we make it out of here, we're either going to find ourselves suddenly behind enemy Dwemer territory, or we're going to come out with a secret of the Dwemer we had not know previously. Also it is unknown if Rhea's gonna kick the bucket.

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I hope my post brought this about.


Behind Enemy Lines starring Owen Wilson is clearly what we're emulating. Bamboozled again!

Actually, it was less your post and moar it's what we do in these games for shits & giggles. We've had an ogre named Nigel Thornsberry who liked to yell "smashing!" While throwing rocks at people, a band of bandits named after Robin Hood's merry band, a mercenary leader named after Bane's real name, and a bunch of other stuff. Keep your eyes peeled; some are gonna be subtle.

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Daro'Vasora is gonna die and it'll be revealed that Rhea is the actual character you intend to be playing.

Why?

Starting simply, it's an interest plot twist for sure, and it'd to a good job of exemplifying the lethality that all of our characters face.

Additionally, you've attempted to use/are using Daro'Vasora's sheet in different RPs, so it wouldn't be a heavy amount of work thrown into a character that's going to end up dying right towards the start of the adventure.

Also, you've described Rhea in great detail in favor of several other NPCs, and while she is clearly being made out to be a supporting NPC with a fairly important role, the meticulous description of her character seems to imply that she's going to be in it for the long haul. Hence, I do not believe that she's going to die any time soon, but it feels appropriate that someone should. Daro'Vasora is the best candidate.


Gosh, I'm starting to think you're taking a method acting approach to your character and just want the cat to die, you Thalmor jerk you! ;D

Definitely an interesting take! I will say that the main reason we have Rhea as a major and pivotal NPC is to fill the roll of GM surrogate. We found in prior games, our GM PCs ended up shifting dramatically from their concepts because players tended to make them leader characters in the group dynamic because they're played by the people guiding the plot. Rhea's our attenpt to have a character that drives the plot and hopefully acts as someone you as players enjoy, and who knows? She may get promoted to full PC status if things go well!

That said, you will find that we do get very in depth with our NPCs and there will be posts entirely from other characters, including antagonists, as if they were PCs. Helps make them feel more real and compelling, me thinks.

And player deaths are definitely something that could happen. Who knows? Maybe Sora's on her 8th of 9 lives and doesn't know it yet. ;D

D:

I vehemently object a Daro'Vasora death!

*GRUMBLES INTENSIFY*

I referenced GoT in my first post. Kinda XD

"What do we say to the God of Death?"

"Not today," she muttered...



Oh, look! Attachment. Now I have a reason to murder off characters, 'cuz I want to add to my list of players I made cry. :)

I fully expect an Aliens reference at some point during our subterranean horror adventure.


Who's gonna play Hicks?
Just to keep this OOC somewhat active and amusing, what plot predictions do you all have for the game? Bonus round; what pop culture references do you think we're going to shoehorn in here?
The Wayward Thief and Bard


Latro and Daro’Vasora ventured farther down the path they’d chosen, still only illuminated by the faint glow of the fungi, and the shadows still holding a sort of malice unto themselves for Latro. It was a quiet walk for the two of them, too busy looking out for any horrors of the deep. Their careful advance through the subterranean passages finally brought them to what may have at one time been a major gathering of Falmer. Dilapidated, empty tents sat lonely in the dark, forgotten reaches. Bathed in pale blue befitting of this ghostly necropolis, Latro and Vasora moved unimpeded.

At first, Latro trusted none of it, but after hearing nothing and seeing nothing for some time, he’d soon distanced himself from his edge. A hand resting on the head of his axe, thumb hooked in his belt now, rather than white-knuckle gripping the haft of it. Soon enough, the barbaric, purely Falmer architecture started to mingle with Dwemer. The angular, mirror-polished copper of the long-forgotten race marred, corrupted, and insulted by yet another.

Upon a pale-grey obelisk of a tablet over-topping at least four meters and stretching outwards a good ten, Dwemeris writing lost on Latro was carved. Like the graffiti on the walls of the Imperial City waterfront district, or the docks of Wayrest, a mural was painted in glowing pale blue over it. Scenes of the Snow Elves being granted amnesty by the Dwemer, the inevitable betrayal by their cruel future masters, the horrors inflicted upon them that would bring Molag Bal pleasure. Latro traced his fingers along the huge mural of history, and witnessing how the pictures slowly and sadly descended into crudeness and simplicity the farther he traced, speechless as to its age. “Rhea would love to see this, I’m sure.”

He stepped back when he reached a peculiar scene, the image of the crudely drawn Dwemer ascending to a gate. Latro shook his head, “One needs eyes to paint.” He breathed in amazement and a touch of pity, “These Falmer have lived down here for Eras.”

Daro’Vasora, had her notes been dry, would have been furiously keeping notes. Instead she was studying the paintings and the carvings closely, the danger from only a few minutes prior a distant memory she was so engrossed in the details. It was an incredible find. “Might have been the final throes of their former selves. They didn’t just go blind overnight, or go feral. Someone must have wanted to record their history in the vain hope that they wouldn’t forget who they were.” The Khajiit observed, fingers tracing along the more crude images towards the end. “Notice how the images are so much more crisp at the start? It’s as if they either were losing their vision over time or just ran out of materials. It’s as if they were trapped here, even without Dwemer interference.”

The Khajiit was in awe of the discovery, and while it wasn’t something she could just stuff into a bag, it was definitely worth taking credit for. It was a tragic story, to be certain, but if one were to hang around ruins and barrows long enough, one would quickly realize that just about everything that ever existed underground was a monument of unspeakable suffering. The tale of the Falmer’s eventual fate was a tale that felt as old as as time, but still there was something somewhat humbling about seeing their feeble last attempts at retaining their sense of selves knowing that their race was about to be erased from the world due to the unspeakable cruelty of the Deep Elves.

“I can read most of this,” Daro’Vasora said, looking over the writing. “Some of it’s whatever language the Snow Elves used, some words look vaguely Aldmeri, but I’m not exactly a linguist. You realize that we may have discovered the very last writing of the Falmer people?” She asked excitedly, having entirely forgotten the peril that lurked around the corner.

“Gods...” Latro breathed again. Humbled, was the feeling for which the word kept a teasing distance from the tip of his tongue. His eyes darted about the huge mural like it were an alien landscape with a thousand-thousand things for the eye to take in. Again, he brushed gentle fingers along one of the letters, tracing its shape on the age-worn stone. “You were right after all, Vasora,” Latro smiled, eyes still taking in the script of pictures like a lover’s first gaze on his future-wedded, “I just may have a song to write when we leave here.”

The romance of writing a poem or ballad of the final scribes and scriptures of the Snow Elves would not have been lost on anyone, the least of all Latro. His enamored gaze was cut short when the booming groan echoed through the enormous chamber they were in, seizing his heart and breath as he hunched himself over before he noticed himself do it. “Come on!” He whispered.

He grabbed Vasora by the wrist and led her along through the maze of tents and Dwemer architecture until they made it to what looked like a small hut of Dwemer-make. Once again, Latro’s heart was pounding and his hand left Vasora’s unsure if the sweat was her’s or his. Probably both. He bunched his hands into fists behind his folded arms to hide them shaking, though he knew his eyes must have betrayed the fact that he was very much intimidated with the spectre of whatever his imagination could paint onto what was out there. He was exhausted, physically and mentally, a dull buzzing in his head and a dry mouth he was growing increasingly aware of and irritated at. He licked his teeth to try to moisten it up but his tongue was dry enough to stick to his teeth.

Latro woke up, a very sudden and unexpected thing for him, to Vasora shaking him. How long had it been? He didn’t have the mind to ask, his thoughts going back to the others and the thing outside. Safety in numbers and light was his only thought. “We have to move.” Latro said more to himself than Vasora, “The others might be getting farther and farther away from us by now.”

He swallowed dryly at the prospect of his own words. Would they find a way out? Did they even know what direction ‘out’ was?

“Easy,” The Khajiit said, an open concern etched across her features. Normally she’d have little patience for people laying hands upon her and violating her personal space, but the circumstances were extraordinary and Latro seemed like a genuine, well-intentioned sort who simply got caught up in the moment and didn’t want to lose track of her in the darkness. They only had each other to rely on, utter strangers who were trying their damnest to make it back to the others in one piece. When Latro nodded off, Daro’Vasora was concerned for him; if he had chills from the water and his body temperature dropped, he could be very well turning hypothermic. She had to keep him going, for both of their sakes.

“Easy.” Daro’Vasora repeated herself, her voice far more soothing than she felt. “Don’t feel rushed, or panicked. I can see reasonably well, as dark as it is. The cave reflects sounds, and it’ll be easy to spot light when it comes our way. We’ll plan our moves, and just take it steady. Trust me, I’ve been in enough caves and crypts that getting lost is part of the experience.”

Offering a hand to help him to his feet, Vasora smiled. “So yes, we have to move, but no sense being foolish about it. How do the heroes in your songs act in situations such as this? Always brave and knowing what to do, no? I’m sure the reality is they shit themselves and panicked and struggled through, but that doesn’t mean the songs about them can’t be an inspiration. Besides,” she said, glancing around the area slowly before looking back. “The Falmer scare me half to death. I’m counting on you to get us back without finding more of them, yes?”

Latro swallowed, clearing his throat before taking Vasora’s offered hand, “I have to apologize for whatever I may have done to make you put that on me.” He joked, “I don’t like being this far underground.”

He took a few tentative steps towards the door of the small hut, “So,” He looked around the hut and scratched at his jaw, “We keep walking until we find them?”

“Not without a plan.” Daro’Vasora corrected, quickly gathering her surroundings. She knew Latro would be relying on her for visual navigation, and otherwise, they’d be wandering almost literally blind. She gestured towards the rushing water of the river. “We know they’re upstream, and given that the Falmer presumably mostly rely on scent and hearing, we might be able to mask both if we stay close to the water’s edge and work our way back. Seeing as nobody likes being in the dark and the Falmer are blind, chances are someone has a torch made up. Any objections?”

“I would save objecting to plans when I have any idea of better options.” Latro chuckled nervously. He nodded outside, “You lead.”

The cold, dank air of the caverns added to Latro’s chill down his spine, so intense it caused him to sigh as he looked around the huge cavern. Being outside the hut almost filled him with a pulsing fear and a need to duck back inside. He was tired, cold, and terrified of whatever made those groans and killed those Falmer. Vasora and Latro took their first tentative steps out of the hut. Latro frowned at the darkness as they walked along the river, ever so often looking for any signs of the others… or the Falmer.

Daro’Vasora made sure not to traverse the uneven ground too quickly out of concern for her companion, who was trusting in her to guide the way as the one who could actually see in the darkness. All was silent, save for the steady sound of rushing water that masked whatever footfalls they might have made. While there was a chance the Falmer would be able to stalk them using the river’s voice as cover, the Khajiit doubted it; she periodically checked around to look for movement and was confident their scent would be masked by having been in the water, the grime of their stay in the camp rinsed away and whatever flowed through the water permeated their clothing and her fur; there was a distinctly earthly scent to the pair of them, and it acted as a surprising bit of camouflage. At least it wasn’t a putrid scent.

After a short period of time, much to Daro’Vasora’s surprise, the sounds of battle caught her ear and the faint impression of light danced across the rocks ahead. “Care to wager we found our companions?” She asked, edging closer, pulling her mace free. If they were close enough to be on the periphery of the fight, there was a chance it would draw in some unwanted attention. Realizing her hand was shaking, the Khajiit clasped it with her other hand, crouching low, breathing in deep and slow to try and calm herself. “I do not wish to get involved in that. The things Falmer do to people…” She trailed off, fidgeting uncomfortably. “I’ve never been much of a fighter.”

Latro refrained from commenting on his past at Vasora’s own comment on entering the fray. Even he saw the ghostly, ethereal trails of spells being thrown amongst the shouts whose words were lost among the echoing distance from the fight to the pair watching it. Even now, so far away from it, Latro’s heart picked up its pace.

There was a time, perhaps, that Latro would have charged into it with a fervor of an elk bull against another to show dominance, but that time was not now. “It’s best you look to our other companions for that.” Latro swallowed, the sheen of a mage armor spell slowly enveloping him as he closed his eyes and sighed to concentrate on the process.

“What say we announce ourselves to them and pull back upriver?” He offered, “the stream flows from somewhere above-ground.”

“Maybe, but how far does it go? For all we know it traverses the entire mountain range.” Daro’Vasora sighed, her eyes locked on the scene ahead. “As much as I hate myself for saying this, I think we would be incredibly stupid to not regroup and plan ahead. There are a few Falmer left, maybe we could surprise them where they’re thinnest? It’ll give the others an opening and we might not have to fight many…” she trailed off, looking over at Latro expectantly, perhaps to have her talk her out of being foolish. As exceptional as his company had been the last who-knows how long, she felt like it was much more in her interest to have safety in numbers. Her luck wouldn’t hold out forever, and sooner or later, she’d run into Falmer. It wasn’t something she wanted to experience alone; the thought nearly was petrifying.

“A friend once told me that you should never take a man at his front when you can take him at his back.” Latro nodded, “The time might have come that we’re their hope.”

Latro cleared his throat and wondered if Vasora heard him gulp at the prospect of harming another, even the Falmer. His encounter with the stone monolith gave them far too much humanity for his liking, reminding himself that these Falmer were not the ones that made it. A far cry from them. “Well.” Latro slowly cracking each of his knuckles, “We’ve scant time to debate the pros and cons, my friend.” And even he was surprised at his hard words.

They traversed the distance without sound enough that it brought Latro and Vasora huddling behind an outcropping of stalactites close enough to hear the chittering and screeching of the Falmer as if they were a stone’s throw away. Looking out from behind their cover, Latro saw that they were. Five of them hunkered down amongst the stalactites at the edge of the skirmish, screeching and hollering at the violence taking place. He sunk back behind the cover, huddled next to Vasora and worked to steady his nerves. “Steady yourself,” He whispered, “There’s no other choice in this.”

He took a few more precious seconds to bunch his hands into fists a couple times before crouching low and emerging from behind cover. As he got closer to the five Falmer, he felt his limbs becoming looser, his heart beginning to beat a more steady pace. He wrapped one of his arms around the neck of one from behind, wrapping his other hand around the thing’s mouth as he dragged it away from its comrades. He tightened his arms grip around its neck as it clawed violently but uselessly at his hardened skin in a panic that should’ve sickened him, placing his other hand behind its head in a choking vice and quickly sunk his weight while tightening his squeeze. He felt the bones in its neck pop and grind before it went limp and heavy. He let go, letting it crumple to the ground unceremoniously. He looked to his hands and swallowed, they aren’t people, he thought, over and over.

The Khajiit’s heart pounded mercilessly in her chest and her throat felt tight enough that it threatened to stop drawing air, but she was a part of this plan, and salvation was on the other side of the monsters of the deep. They were twisted approximations of something that was once proud and noble, and now they were ghouls that preyed on any who would dare venture into the deep, monsters driven by their baser instincts like feral animals. Daro’Vasora would have no problem killing them, for the alternative was so much worse.

Latro took one down from behind, dragging it away before subduing it, and its friend must have noticed that there was a sudden absence there as it turned around. The Khajiit closed the gap, clasping her mace with both hands as she put all of her might into a swing, smashing the creature across the face with the heavy studded steel head, breaking apart it’s upper jaw and fracturing a part of the skull. The sudden thud of the now dead body crumpled on the ground, falling beside the other remaining three Falmer. Daro’Vasora stepped back, switching to a one-handed stance, ready to lash out at any of the weapons or exposed arms for the one that turned to face her, a hideous face hidden behind a crude chitin mask. She let out a hiss, her ears pulled flat against her skull as she prepared to fend off a blow. The thing charged at her, howling in its unknowable tongue and it tried to hew her across the chest and belly, swinging wildly with its sword. The Falmer, though of exceptional hearing, were at a sizable disadvantage when it came to typical fighting doctrine; it was hard to block and parry when the only thing you had to anticipate was the sudden sound of displacing air.

When the Falmer made an above-head thrust, trying to drive it down into the Khajiit’s chest, she easily side-stepped the strike and brought her mace down into the exposed elbow, shattering the bone and disabling the arm. The Falmer shrieked in agony, only to be silenced when Daro’Vasora brought her mace back across the thing’s temple, causing it to collapse suddenly as the flesh and soft bone gave in to the blow.

She had just enough time to see another of the Falmer rushing at her with a spear, rushing at her with reckless abandon. Having no other option, she caught the shaft as it came at her, the blade threatening to dig in through her leathers, and the thing had freakish strength for something so emancipated. She yelled in alarm and fear, struggling mightily as the jagged shaft bit into her hands, slickening them with blood.

“Latro!”

He turned his head to see Vasora at the mercy of one of the Falmer, the thing struggling but slowly gaining the advantage to run her through her belly with his spear. No matter his qualms with this bloodshed, he would have no part in letting the person that helped him through this ordeal die in front of him. In four quick and long strides he was on the Falmer. One hand shot out to knock the spear off it’s glacier-quick course and the thing turned it’s head. Before it could finish its shriek Latro cuffed it in the left ear with his hardened fist, sending it stumbling and off-balance to the right before Latro’s other hand was brought down in a lightning fast downward hook that caught the thing into solar plexus.

Devoid of the ability to draw breath, Latro added to its misery by chopping at its throat with his stone-dense hand, ruining its wind-pipe as it collapsed. He rushed over to Vasora, putting a hand on her shoulder and nodding to her, “Can you fight still?” It seemed callus from his own tongue, but the time for checking over wounds was later.

Even now, the three left were far past the stage of surprise and well into bearing down on the duo. Two rushed Latro and he was barely able to duck below a swing of a chitinous mace before throwing himself aside at the wild slash of a sword that came a finger’s length from opening him. While he lay on the ground, the one with the mace leapt to stand over him and he felt the chunks of rock sting his face as he moved his head. A well-placed strike to the groin put the thing on its arse, squealing breathlessly.

The sword-wielder came at him too fast for him to counter and the point of his sword skittered across his belly painfully. Latro grit his teeth and let out a yelp, but managed to grasp the blade of the sword in his stone-dense hands, struggling with the Falmer over control of the weapon. Latro reeled back with his head and brought his forehead cracking against the thing’s brow, Latro’s mage-armor being the one to take credit for his still standing while the thing stumbled backwards disoriented towards Vasora’s fight. The Falmer who was recovering from having its genitals possibly pulped was finished off with Latro’s knee splitting apart the skin and fracturing its skull from a running start and Latro’s hands keeping its head steady for the blow.

Daro’Vasora’s hands were slick with blood and it was hard gripping onto her mace, prompting her to slip her wrist through the strap to retain control over the weapon while the Falmer that had cut Latro stumbled her way. She brought the mace into the thing’s gut, forcing it to keel over as viscous, dark blood drizzled from between its crooked lips. Unable to bring her mace around for a strike from above she brought her elbow down viciously into the nape of its neck, causing the Falmer to collapse to a knee.

Unrelenting, the Khajiit kicked the Falmer hard in its flat nose, prompting it to fall backwards, sword slipping from fingers, and stepping forward triumphantly and filled with an unexpected vitriol, she brought her heel down into its throat, once, twice, and again and again, collapsing the windpipe as the thing struggled feebly to grab at her ankle, weakening with each blow. Blood had splattered across her trousers and boots, but she didn’t care. She stood triumphant over the monster of her nightmares.

Realizing that Latro was badly hurt, Daro’Vasora regained her senses and rushed to him, immediately seeing the gash across his abdomen. “No, no…” she stammered, alarmed. “Is it deep?” she asked, eyes wide with concern.

The adrenaline already leaving him, he brought his hand to his stomach and it came back stained red. He gulped and sighed, all at once feeling the pain and the mage-armor spell dissipated with the loss of constitution at the sight of his blood, and quite the amount of it. If it were not for his mage-armor, he would be dead and skewered on the end of a Falmer sword. “N-no,” the words shakily coming past gritted teeth, “the mage-armor. My stone-skin, I’ll live. What of you?”

Glancing at her shaking hands, a sharp pain radiated from numerous cuts and gashes that were still openly weeping blood. “Considering the trade off of mangling my palms and fingers would be to have been run through, I think I made a sensible choice. It hurts immensely.” She said, sucking air between pointed teeth. “Come on, we’re still in danger out there. I’m with you, let’s get to the others. Someone’s going to patch us up.”

Helping Latro to his feet and throwing his arm over her shoulder, Daro’Vasora got her bearings; the others were a few dozen meters away, she estimated, and a few ugly bastards between them and safety, but the Falmer seemed occupied and oblivious to what had transpired. With an effort, both took off, fighting through immense pain to reach their refuge. It was all they had left.
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