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The young man burst from the tree line, blood slick on his pale skin, sweat slick on his equally pale long flowing hair, his well toned muscles stringing as he fled. Behind him, the howling of wolves echoed through the woods.

Before him now were wonders that had been hidden by the canopy of the wolf woods. High, high above in the drifted gentle titans, pale blue sky whales sifting through flocks of krill that themselves sifted through columns of ash or descended to nibble on plants that floated through the air currents.



All of this drifted above a web of rivers all pouring down towards a central lake, and in between were rolling plains and shallow hills crested with green, across which herds of dark creatures grazed and were minded by taller things that he could not make heads or tails off. They looked like a bizarre fusion of man and a deer, adrenaline pumped man thought in the moments before the woods rustled behind him, and it became clear that he’d misjudged.

Just because he’d first encountered the wolves in the woods, that did not mean they could not come out. Though he was tired, and he didn't know where he could run too, all he could do was start running and pray. A few moments after he took off a pack of hunters burset from the treeline. Most were the common gray wolf, but at the rear, driving them forwards, came a hulking beast tall as a man, its fur pale and its eyes holding intelligence beyond mere beast, though that did not stop it from hungering for the flesh of man.

Paws and claws ripped up the tall grass as they ran after the man, jaws slathering as the man cursed first his dallying and then almost panicked as there were shouts from the deer humans he had ended up running towards, but with his heart hammering in his ears he had no idea what was shouted. Only when they came racing towards him, and in doing so they became clearer. Covered in fur black as night and armed with spears tipped with wickedly shaped points just as dark they came, and though he feared them in that moment, what else could he do but run headlong towards them and away from the wolves.

Then, suddenly, a howl from the towering packleader caught the ear of the beasts, and as one they ceased to hound him and instead fanned out into a loose formation around their leader, matching the width of the incoming spear-wielder's own charge.

The man had glanced back to see this, and when he looked forwards again the deer people were suddenly upon him and the world dissolved into chaos. Spear and hoof fought tooth and claw until the grass was slick with blood, and then it was all over. The pack-leader fled, sacrificing the last of his pawns to save it’s own life, and leaving the victorious warriors and the man cowering in their midst.

Then the human torso of one of the creatures detached itself from the body of the deer line thing and in that moment of human contact things became clear.

The man wearing clothes made of the dark wool of the goat herds his people tended too approached, using his his obsidian tipped spear for support as he moved away from his horse with a midnight back coat, and asked “Are you alright?”

“I’m fine” the man lied, and then promptly collapsed into the other man’s arms.




Several days recovery and an explanation later, and the messenger of Anak'thas found himself in a little boat made of reeds sailing down the rivers to reach the 12th node. At first he passed by mostly natural land, the only humanity he saw living there similar to the goat herders he had met, as well as the odd band of hunters chasing after swift hares.

As they got closer to the node however, small towns started to crop up, mostly made of hide tents surrounding cores of buildings made from stone or wood, and surrounded by farmland where rows of berry bushes, melons and root vegetables sprouted, tended by hard working farmers.

The city around the node was the same as the villages writ large. Farmland surrounded the banks of the grand lake, much of it on the far shore where he was told the soil had been enriched by the tall smoking mountain they passed under the shadow of. While tents could be seen among these farms, the city surrounding the 12th node hosted the largest collection of solid structures in the region, built from stone and wood all floated downstream from queries and wood cutting operations found around somewhere called stone lake. All this arrived via small wooden docks, which the man was let off at and form which he made his way through the city towards his destination.

At the heart of this stood a temple complex made of exquisite marble, surrounded by a rugged and practical Granite wall on all sides. The man, who’s name was Finley, thought it was quite a shame to hide the temple behind the wall like that, though it did mean the effect of its magnificence coming into view all at once upon being welcomed in via the main (never once closed) gateway was quite overwhelming.

The temple was surrounded by a colorful garden containing flowers and plants from all across the region. It was split into two halves, one was artfully arranged and could be traveled by winding paths was for recreation, the other was rigidly organized and was attended to by a group who Finley where told where a mix of apothecaries and cooks who where trying to find uses for all the plants that had been discovered.

The temple itself meanwhile was the largest structure Finley had ever seen, and it continued a myriad of marvels and mundanities both. At its heart sat the node itself, locked away in a defensible core of the facility, while around it where rooms containing treasures, gold and silver trinkets, glistening jewls, the bones of a spinosaurus, great wolf skulls, artfully crafted statues, intricate carvings and more, all on display for visitors to see. Each was a little inscription that he was told explained who had offered the object, some details about it, and what they had gotten in exchange.

Much of what had been given in return for these offerings sounded fantastical, but the horned man guiding him through the complex explained that Xavior had insisted that the objects were mundane, simply made with materials and skills that where presently beyond them. An unbelievable fact, considering what was acquired was often made from a material known as ‘steel’ that made the recently invented copper tools seem as if made of clay by comparison.

More mundane than these wonders were several classrooms where the horned priests of Xavior passed on his node gifted knowledge to those who wished to learn it, who would then go out and spread it far and wide. There were also offices for people called bureaucrats, and a meeting hall for the city's leaders, whom Finley was surprised to find were not selected by their god but instead by the people of the city itself. The god naturally sat at the head of this group, but they were empowered by him to act on behalf, and so it was not there that he ended up meeting Xavior even though they were at that moment in session.

When he did meet the god, Finley found him dressed richly. He wore the finest of black robes sown with silver threads, was adorned with a wolfskin cloak and his hair was decorated with a colorful array of velociraptor feathers. He was also kneeling before a pain looking farmers and in the midst of setting the man’s broken leg.

His hands glowed softly, and the farmer's look of pain vanished in an instant to his look of slight surprise. He began to profusely thank the god, but Xavior waved him off as if it was nothing as he stood and then turned to addressed Finley.

“My apologies for making you wait, today’s healing session took a little longer than anticipated. I do hope you enjoyed the tour in the meantime?” He asked with a smile.

As Finley replied that it was no issue and he had enjoyed it he was led to a nearby meeting room. There, over refreshments, he explained why he was here. He had been sent to deliver a message to Benea by Anak'thas, only to discover that the goddess was not here, and had instead traveled on to another node, though not one that he could receive direct directions to from any he had met. He also feared he would not make the journey on his own, as the travel here had almost claimed his life already.

“I’m very sorry for your altercation with the wolves. They were Benea’s ideas, but seem to have outstripped either of our intentions for them for an unknown reason. Attempts to resolve the problem have proved… bloody” Xavier apologized before asking “Are you at liberty to divulge the nature of this message to me in her stead?”

Finley found little reason not to, and so explained in short Anak'thas’ plan to claim node 14, a thing that had likely already occurred by now. At some prodding he also explained what the god had already created, and his treatment of the human in his charge. As Finley had left just after the node was made, he was light on details, but he did what he could to sate the god’s curiosity.

“Benea will not be pleased. This goes against her plans… not that I am sure she ever communicated them to Anak’thas,” Xavior said thoughtfully while stroking his beard contemplatively, before turning his attention back to Finley.

“Regarding your intent to travel onward to Benea, I can acquire for you an escort, transport and provisions. The latter you will most certainly need, for the node Monica intended to claim has but a single way though, and I do not know what lies on the other side or if there is foraging available along it's rout. On that note, I will provide this aid on a condition: you will discover why the 11th node is in the state that it is, and report it back to me, as well as any other news Benea wishes to convey once you discover her. Is that a fair deal? Should you learn of anything outside those parameters that might also be of use to me, I may grant you a boon for hat knowledge also”

Finley thought that this was a fair deal indeed. They shook on it, and the very next day he and an escort of a half dozen riders (all furnished/paid with a new set divinely gifted recurved composite bow bows and provisioned with food from the city’s collective stores) set out west to deliver Anak’thas’ message.

A day later, another , larger, band set out, this one traveling north to find a safe passage through the wolfwoods bordering nodes 11 and 12. Once through they would to get the lay of the land, make contact with whatever human population Anak’thas had left behind there and to then travel onwards to meet the god himself, so as to gift the god himself with the knowledge of Benea’s coming displeasure with him, as well as to enquire about any other plans he might have, and to request the sharing of their nodes with one another. He also sent a few simple gifts in the form of several horses of both sex, a set of obsidian knives and the seeds with which to grow olive trees as a show of good faith.







Things had gotten much, much worse as they approached the final stretch leading to the 12th node. The storm outside grew more violent, angrier and almost ravenous. Thunder howled around Benea’s area of clam as lightning hammered down to attempt to wipe it from reality.

Enough was enough.

Xavior set aside Benea’s pride and strode forth into the chaos to spare both her and the mortals. Or well, he snuck out the back to avoid walking straight into the focus of the thunder, and only then raced ahead, aiming to reach the node as swiftly as possible.

At first his smaller form could avoid the storm, which focused on the bubble, but as the goddesses and their charges pulled away and headed instead for the next node, it found him. Yet he only had to protect himself, and so the god could afford a smarter way to handle the raging storm than simply standing firm as Benea had done.

As he approached the node he left a trail of fried malicious metal objects in his wake, each one tossed to the wind to draw the lightning to strike them instead of him.

Yet as he approached, the storm turned into something else. Crackling energy, mountains of it, coursed through the sky and around the node. So close to it, the god himself could not see the shape of the titan bearing down on him, yet to the north, trailing behind the others, the horned Annie could see it in full: A roiling mass of cloud and lightning moved like a predator, one that towered over the landscape, that flicked from form to form in an instant.

Like a fox it pounced upon where the god stood, great spears of electricity hammering down on Xavior’s position. Like a viper in struck when he dodged, like a wolf it hounded him, like a lion it leapt and then like a dragon it disgorged a torrent of thunderous breath to scorch the land clean. Into this a retaliatory storm of steel retorted, a shower of metal that punched up into the beast, warping it as it struck compulsively at the fragments within itself until they were naught or fell to the earth.

Having expended most of his power, the god reached for the only other power available to him.

The node.

As the predator reformed he ran for it like salvation. The monster chased him, bearing down atop him. And then his hand hit the node and the land turned to his will. The ground cracked in thousand and one places and torrents of molten metal burst from it, sapping the lightning from the air, drawing it down into the earth.

The beast stumbled backwards as the source of its power was sapped by the god, but it clung on and tried to steady itself to strike, only for a mountain erupted from beneath it. A volcano that exposed the magma of the planet's core to the titan and spat smoke and ashes into it, sapping its power and beating it back. Then another erupted, and another and then finally a towering mass of stone infused with metals of all kinds burst forth and finally, at last, drew down the lighting, scouring its surface with lightning and killing the beast for good.

Xavior, panting, hand held to the node, slowly straightened himself. He briefly glanced at the note from Benea, skimmed it and then tossed it aside.

It was time to leave a mark on the world.

At the rear of the human mass a bout of jubilation was ongoing at the slaughter of the titanic beast and an end to the storm when Xavior’s vision of the world washed over them, turning what had once been barren green, and from atop the small hill they found themselves on they could see it all.



Beyond the node to the south where they had pilgrimage across to where they were now vast meadows and grassy fields, crisscrossed with rivers that were fed from hundreds of tiny rain filled ponds, bubbling aquifers and roaring geysers. Dotting the land where a few lingering wounds where lava churned, but outnumbering those were hot springs by the dozens. To the west across a great river, this land was mirrored, yet at this moment it was drowning in ashfall from the three great volcanoes that had struck blows against the titan. These ashlands would bloom even richer than the west thanks to the fertilizer in time, though the periodic ashfall would present a challenge to any who would live there.

Across these fields grazed hares, horses, iguanas and goats a plenty, while around the magama rifts and hot springs giant lizard sail finned lizards, Edaphosaurus, bathed in the heat. Hunting these were lone coyotes and packs of beautifully feathered velociraptors. Soaring above them all where tonnikala, a species of truly flying fish.

The great river splitting the ash dusted lands from the ones the pilgrimage had crossed wound its way down from a grand lake that itself between the Node and the first volcano. This in turn was fed by numerous rivers filled with fish and fished by herons, spinosaurus and bears. One was grand and flowed from a massive lake tucked behind a short pale stoned mountain range to the east, while the rest were smaller, trickling down from numerous lakes tucked away in the the the northern parts of the forests that surrounded the edges of the region and now stood in the way of the goddess’s intended path.

Living in those forests where deer and pheasants to hunt, olives and fruits a plenty to pick, but also wolves by the score. And among these wolves were some that were larger. Stronger. Smarter. Their eyes holding the lingering spark of a titan of chaos not quite as dead and buried as Xavior had hoped. Forest kings in the making, who’s may coordinated packs would become a terror of the lands on either side of their forest domain.

That, however, was in the future. For now the humans stood a gasp at the landscape that had been forged around them in but moments. A silence that was broken by the bleating of a nearby goat, its horns mighty, its fur black as midnight and eyes red as flames. Its imposing appearance did not prevent it from taking off at a run when a hundred eyes wandered to it in response to its first vocalization, its leaping gait taking south, it towards the far distant node.

“Come on! Let’s go already” Annie, first of Xavior’s followers, suddenly shouted and, taking this as a sign, took off on a jog after the goat and towards where her patron awaited. A trickle started to follow, those in the god’s service or who were grateful for/had bartered for his aid at first. Then after them went the curios, the ambitious and the desperate but most of all went the tired of traveling. Within a handful of moments about a third of the humans had broken off from the pack, and where heading down the the shores of the great lake and the node that lay there, ready to brave one last stretch of the journey on their own, to end their pilgrimage and make themselves a home here, in the 12th realm.

The rest remained, too faithful or fearful to leave their goddesses' side. Considering the giant fish eating dinosaurs hanging around some of the rivers, that second point was entirely valid.








wordcount: 1,108 (+6)
Midna: level 7 EXP: ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// (61/70)
Location: Sandswept Sky - Train


Midna dropped clear of the giga worm’s gaping wound just in time, because the others were hot on her heels, and with blade and bow and arrow, as nearly everyone took a turn at hacking away at the exposed spine. Near everyone. As the desperate assault went underway against the exposed spine Midna got a niggling feeling there was someone missing, and started to do a quick headcount.

Most were joining in the attack, and they were easy to count but some still had work to do. Jesse and Tora where with the cannon, as was Big Band whom she shouted a ”Thanks for the catch” to, because while she’d been flashily attacking their foe they’d almost lost the last of the ammo she had fetched. Also it turned out one of the types of shot she had brought didn’t even fit, which earned the train’s designer, whoever they were, a swift short barrage of insults from the princess.

Thanks for preventing her mistake from being too costly and the discovery of a bit of incomprehensible engineering out of the way, she resumed her scan and realized who was missing: ”Wait where’s Braum!?” she glanced this way and that, but the bare chested tower of muscle was nowhere to be found.

Scowling, she reached out a shadow hand and summoned her Vibrava atop it, before instructing it ”Big bald guy with the mustache and muscles. Spot him, then bring me to him!” she ordered, before hurling it up into the sky. It soared up high on wind and wing and then vanished into a portal, before appearing right back next to her, having got an excellent view from its sky high vantage point.

It gave her a “Vi” before buzzing and skittering over to one side of the train and looking over the edge just as she had feared it would.

”Oh no, Braum!” she called out in anguish as she scrambled over to the side and was met by an absurd sight.

“Hello there princess!” the ever cheerful man from where he was clinging to the side of the train while standing atop his shield, which was surfing across the sand, called back, before adding “as fun as this is, you wouldn't mind lending me a hand, would you?”

The princess stared for a few heartbeats that she really could not afford to waste and then snapped out of her amazement at this absurdity with an ”Yes! Obviously!, on it!” before finding a railing and gripping it with her flesh arms to avoid her slipping off while the shadow hand reached out and grasped his arm tightly. ”Grab onto my arm with your other and I’ll pull you up”

“Just a second. I don’t want to lose shield” he told her to her utter astonishment

”Are you mad?!” she demanded to know

“Braum prefers brave,” he replied with a laugh, before letting go of the railing as she cried out in alarm. The hand on the arm she was holding clasped her arm in turn in one switch motion, while the other reached down and grasped the leading edge of the sand surfing shield (lifting it a bit so as to not have his fingers sandblasted to the bone) he surged backwards, only to yank to a stop as Minda found herself trailing is full wight to the side to the train.

“Ha ha ha! Now this is exhilarating!” he called out as he tilted his weight to ride a touch away from the train before hitting a small dune and using it as a ramp to launch into the air. He did this just in time for Razputin to stick his finger in it and finally force the monster away, its absence dropping the train back to level and adding an extra yank alongside Midna’s panicked pulling that send Braum crashing down onto the metal deck just a hair's breadth away from the princess, sending the Vibrva who had watched all this skittering away in a panic while the Icebourn laughed merrily.

“That was some ride! Thank you for the help, little princess” he told her, once he was done with his merriment

”Yeah, well, now you owe me a ride back” she retorted, still clinging to the banister like a cat to a tree branch.

“Do not worry, Braum never forgets what is owed” he reassured her before offering her a hand of his own to help her down from the banister, which she accepted with shaky limbs. She got an apologetic look from Braum for that, before he suddenly lightened up and hoisted her up and sat her down on his bare shoulder.

”Hey what the big idea” she demanded to know

“I give you ride” he said, brooking no argument on the matter before adding “Now come, let us go see how the battle fares” and moving to do so

Back up onto the top of the train just in time to find out there was a junction, a discovery that was drowned out a moment or two later by the reemergence of the titan behind them, on the side that Braum had almost fallen off on. Exactly the wrong side, as the big gun was pointing the wrong way entirely. At range once more, it engaged its artillery, letting loose another shoal of flying things while hucking another big spiky ball at them too. This left precious little time to make direction decisions.

”Anywhere there aren't people!” Midna shouted generally in response as to where to go, before making a split second decision and directing Braum to go for the ammo car.

She was fairly sure that a bomb bug getting in there would be bad news.

Braum jogged his way over and then leapt the last distance to land where he could stand with his mighty shield protecting the hole, while Midna peeked over the top of it and held her shadowhand high above them both ready to swat at any bugs or bombs that came close.

As the wave of fliers came in, her vibrava skittered over to join them, leaping up with buzzing wings and landing on Braums other shoulder. From there it unleashed a stream of purple dragon fire while to either side of them Minda summoned her four chillfos to chuck their spears and Braum himself sent out a blast of cold to help thin the swarm before it was on top of them.

As for the pod, well, all they could really do was hope it was dealt with by the shooters, and be ready to keep the racks of shells bomb bug free if any got through.


For Xavior, the journey to the 12th node was an easy one, the chaos of the unclaimed node held up by Benea and the pace kept slow by the tramp of mortal feet. It left Xavior restless, and conversation with his fellow divines could only draw so many topics from their short lives before it became repetitive. He found that while Benea seemed to mean well she was also overbearing in a way he could not yet put words to, to a degree that it made speaking with the rather passive Monica and gauging her own intent rather difficult.

It was then as much to get out from Benea’s smothering will as it was to elevate his boredom and sate his curiosity that he began periodically excusing himself from divine company to meander among the mortals as they marched towards their destination.

The first time he tried this was a frustrating experience, for the mortals shied away from his attempt to interact with them with a mix of wariness and awe, leaving what talk was to be had stilted as a result. After a few failed attempts he retreated back to divine company, only for what had already driven him away to do so once more.

The second time on a whim he trailed back, further and further to the very back of the pack of humans surrounding the gods. There he found something interesting, at least to him. A tall alabaster man with short red hair and the patchy beginnings of a beard, who despite his muscled physique, was walking with faltering steps. Supporting him by draping one of his arms over her shoulder was a dark haired woman who’s sweat gave a shine to her warm brass skin. There were a few others around them keeping them company, but most of the humans were well ahead of them.

Despite the end of the safe boundary nipping at their heels the woman was smiling and talking animatedly while the man looked mostly embarrassed, though as the god watched he did give a brief nervous glance at the chasing doom behind them. Xavier assumed the woman had the right of it, as he did not take Benea as the kind of person who would leave stragglers behind to die in the madness.

Still, it would be better for everyone if their trailing was no longer an issue, and so the god decided to intervene.

“Hello there. What seems to be the matter here?” he asked, strolling back to them, causing the pair to freeze up for a moment before the woman tugged the injured man to keep moving. She put on a smile while the man looked worried, likely thinking he was in trouble. Most of those around the pair quietly tried to move away from them without it looking like they were doing so.

“Ah I’m so sorry. You see-” he began to say falteringly before the woman spoke up and explained “this idiot didn’t look where he was going and stuck his leg in some kind of borrow and ended up hurting himself as a result. Don’t worry though, I’ve got this handled.” She gave him a toothy smile, as if daring him to say otherwise.

“And why are you helping in the first place? You look quite strained from the effort” he asked with a purely curious tone as he matched his steps with theirs, hands clasped behind his back as he strolled.

“Oh well now, it's just the right thing to do isn't it?” she insisted, though he did not quite buy it. A bit too much pride in her voice for it to just be kindness.

“That does not explain why you specifically are providing aid. Why not you for example” he said, pointing at one of the humans who had given them space, a man far more muscular than the woman providing the aid. He looked a touch shocked to be singled out, before saying “I’ve got this pain in my side, you see.” while rubbing it and then adding “Also Annie insisted” which got a few nods from the others.

“Because I’ve got this, and that all there is too it” the Annie insisted once again

Definitely pride, he thought, but there was, he expected, a fair bit of genuine kindness and selflessness in there too. Interesting. A quick survey of the others in the stragglers revealed either injuries or others who, like Annie, were helping out said stragglers with moral support or helping fetch/carry food for them.

A touch inspired by the latter group he instructed Annie and the man she was helping, Edgar, to stop. When they worried about the danger behind, he simply stepped behind them, held up a hand, and when it hit the edge of the protective bubble red lightning coursed against it, stretched the bubble of calm out so that they would not be let into the madness behind them.

“Now then, if you’ll just let me reach down and touch your leg” he said to Edgar, who after a few stunned moments agreed to let him do so, and then a few moments after that gasped in surprise “my leg! It doesn't hurt any more?” he said, taking a few steps forwards to make sure it was so, and then turning and saying “thank you so much. I don't know what i can do to make this up to you?”

“Oh, think nothing of it. It's just the right thing to do isn't it?” the god said, echoing Annie’s words as he stood back up and moved forwards, letting the bubble return to its original shape, before asking “now then, who’s next?”

After that it was a quick succession of light touches on hurt areas and everyone was feeling right as rain. That got lips loosened and wiped away any fear of the unknown among them, which was quite the useful side effect in Xavior’s opinion, though Annie did look a touch irritated about being shown up.

“And is there anything I can do for you?” he asked her, leaving out the implicit to make it up to you part of that sentence

“I’m good, fit as can be. No aches or pains here” she insisted, then after he stared expectantly at her for a few moments said “Well. I don’t suppose you know where any streams or pools are? I’m kind of thirsty after carrying this big guy so far” as she clapped Edgar endearingly on the back.

“No I am afraid I do not, but I can cut right to the water part” he said, flicking a wrist and creating a little orb of water hanging in the air from nothing. Then he frowned, thought for a moment, and created a shallow stone bowl for the water to sit in before passing it to her. She looked amazed, and then even more when she took a sip and found it cool and pure as could be.

He ended up distributing a bit of food by the same method as well upon request. They were a small group, so it was no effort.

They talked a little longer until they caught up to the main mass of humanity, at which point he felt it was time to bid them farewell. But before he did he offered them one last kindness.

“If any of you need help again, then simply come ask, and I’ll see what I can do” he told them.

And that is where the trouble began.




At first he was occasionally approached by members of the group again who asked for things on their own accord or on others behalf. Then word got out and a few others started to carefully approach him, then more and more came more and more boldly until he found himself surrounded by a clamor of humans all asking things of him, from the petty to the serious and with the petty all too often drawing out the serious. Feed me, fix this rash, give me water, make me not tired, they asked, while the more imaginative asked for miracles more selfishly. Make me strong, or beautiful, or let us walk the chaos beyond. While he tried to serve at first it all to rapidly became too much for the god to handle and so he put a stop to it.

“ENOUGH!” he commanded, silencing the crowd gathered around him with a word laced with a trace of power.

“Shame on you all, for expecting something for nothing, even from a god. For drowning out real need with selfish desires” he chided them, and then set down the law “From now, if you want something, you must pay me something in kind, or have a request worthy of a god’s intervention”

There was a heavy pause, and then the uproar began again only now with offers piled on top of requests for aid, but it lasted for only a heartbeat before he silenced them once again with “I was not done!” and then set about dealing with that half of the issue

“Annie” he pointed at the brass skinned woman who had only ever asked him for aid on others behalf, and who had been making attempts at getting the worthy request through the noise already, and charged her with that in an official capacity “pick a group of people. Together you will find those requests that are worth my time, and reject those that are not. Do this for me, and I will reward you handsomely for your services with power and acclaim”

There was a heavy pause as all eyes turned to the stunned woman, before the god broke through it stepped towards her and offered her a hand to shake “just take my hand, stand by my side and we can bring order, such that the needy are helped and worthy are rewarded”

He saw the way her mind turned, and after a moment the woman he had seen prided herself on helping someone nodded and clasped his hand in hers. He squeezed it, pulsing power into her, which rushed to her head and formed into two small horns jutting out from her hairline, and then shook her hand once before releasing it.

“Then it’s a deal” he said with a grin, and thus the first priesthood was born.





The Koopa Troop

wordcount: 1,611 (3+) (+6)
Bowser: Level 10 EXP: //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// (217/100)
Bowser Jr: Level 9 EXP: ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// (190/90)
Kamek: Level 10 EXP: ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////(113/100)
Location: Limsa Lominscuttle Town - Kanzuki Beach
Feat: Rika


Being a turtle, Jr was delighted to go for a dip in the sea, the perfectly cool but not cold water a refreshing cleanser after the sweaty spot of sports. While most times when taking a swim he'd be splashing around all over, after the exertion of the match he swiftly found himself drifting along on his back, his buoyant shell keeping him aloft while Mimi sat on his chest using the sunbathing turtle as something of a boat upon which she was merrily sailing the waves.

His lazy drifting was interrupted by a nearby gasp of amazement, which was followed by him being bonked in the head by the curve of a fish hook.

”Ow!!” he yelped, before rolling over in the water (forcing Mimi to scramble over him during the movement to avoid getting dunked, though she seemed to find this fun rather than upsetting) to come face to face with the owner of the fish hook.

”Hey! What’s the big idea?” he shouted at a young girl who was sitting on a set of rocky outcropping and presently reeling in the a offending fishing hook back to her rod.

“Oh. Sorry! I thought you were a rare kind of pokemon” she called back apologetically

”Well I’m not. This is a pokemon” he pointed at Mimi, who was now perched atop his dome, the only dryspot presently available, and then to himself ”This is not. Learn the difference!”

“I mean you do kind of do look like…” she started to say, before dropping the thought and asking “so is that Mimikue yours then? Are you a trainer?”

”Yeah! What of it?” Jr replied, still irritated by the entire incident

“Oh, me too… So do you want to battle?” she asked, a sudden turn which took Jr by surprise.

”Huh? First you're apologizing and now you're picking a fight? What’s your deal?”

She cocked her head to one side and then replied “when two trainers make eye contact, then they’ve got to have a pokemon battle. It’s the rules” like it was the most obvious thing in the world, before clarifying to the prince’s still doubting face that “oh and it's not a fight-fight, it's more like a spar kind of deal”

”Ohhhh. I mean that’s kinda weird but sure. If you're up for it Mimi?” he replied/asked, which got an enthusiastic response from his Pokemon. Unlike him she was still brimming with energy from her two meals, and this sounded like fun to her.

“Cool, here, let me help you up” the girl replied, offering him a hand to climb up onto her ocean rock, and as she did so introduced herself “I’m Lana by the way”

”Bowser junior” the prince replied as he got back onto dry land

”That’s a funny name. Ok you wait here and I’ll make some space” she said, before stepping away before he could bite back about her comment about his name. As she stepped away Mimi eagerly hopped down to put herself in front of her trainer.

“Alright then, let’s do this!” she called out once she’d cleared enough space, before shouting “Go Shellder!” as she tossed out her first pokemon, which turned out to be some kind of clam looking thing that had a big floppy tongue which Jr found to be very funny looking.

It wasn't quite so funny when, at the command of its trainer, the clam used a quick open shut of its shell to launch itself at Mimi while forming a spike of ice on the tongue which it used as a flail to strike at her.

She leapt away, being showered by a few shards of ice in the process that were enough to break her disguise, and then nearly got blown off her feet by a follow up “water gun!”

”Quit playing around Mimi! Give the clam an electro ball” Jr commanded, which got a surprised look from Lana right before the ball of electricity slammed into her Shellder, zapping it silly and taking it down with a single strike.

“Huh, I didn't know Mimikyus could learn that move… well, suppose that’s explained by the battery on her back?” she said, while returning her mon to its ball, and then tossing out “Chinchou!”

The blue ball with two big glowing lures of a mon bounced down onto the rock and Jr immediately thought he saw a pattern.

”Another water one? Ha too easy. Hit it with the same Mimi!” he commanded, and hit it she did, only for the Chinchou to take it like a champ, much to both of their surprise.

“Yeah he always gets people who think they got me beat just because they brought an electric type” she replied with a cheeky smile, before shouting “Now Chinchou, repay the favor!” At which point the creature whipped round one of its glowing lures and hurled its own electro ball at Mimi who went tumbling across the rocks in response to the hit.

”That’s not fair!” despite it being quite to the contrary and then ordered ”Uh. hit it with a shadow sneak instead!” which as it turned out was just the switch-up he needed, the ghostly backtastab’s physical damage unintentionally exploiting the Chinchou’s weak defense and taking it down.

“Oh wow, your Mimi’s a real versatile one isn't she” Lana said, not the least bit disheartened by this turn of events, before continuing on “Ok here goes my last shot! Go Araquanid!”

After that Lana only had her trick to dealing with grass types left, a bug water mon, and it stood no chance vs Mimi, which left the little mon feeling very proud when her trainer cheered for her (admittedly rather narrow) victory. She even got some praise from Lara for being a formidable opponent, as well as some applause from a bystander.

Slightly condescending applause actually, coming specifically from a cool looking guy standing on the back of a large walrus like creature floating in the surf nearby.

“Nice fight kid. Up for one more?” the trainer asked

”Yeah, bring it!” the prince replied without a thought before Lana could suggest otherwise

“Oh and that’s your only pokemon” the guy asked, putting some extra condescension on the only part, and then giving a short laugh when the answer was yes.

“Alright then. Let me see. Ghost-fairy type with electric attacks. Tricky. But mainly a physical attacker so we can get away with not dealing with the ghost type I think” the ace murmured to himself while and then smiled, having the perfect answer, grasping one of his six pokeballs, shouting “go, Nidoqueen” and sending out a hulking armored titan of a mon that towered over all three of the the others standing on the little rocky outcrop.

Just as the trainer predicted, his mon was a near perfect counter. Ground type nullified Mimi’s electro ball, her shadow sneak could do nothing to Nidoqueen’s high defense and offensively it only took a single super effective, and gross sludge wave.

That left the trainer sailing away mighty smug about beating up a kids single pokemon while Jr cradled the fainted Mimi and Lana tried her best to comfort him.

“Come on, it's ok. Between you and me, no one likes ace trainers. They are all jerks who only care about being strong anyway” Lana told the prince as they sat together on the outcropping while he cradled the fainted Mimi in his arms

”But I want to be strong! Need to be. There’s a lot of stuff riding on me being strong so I can’t afford not to be” Jr said ”How’d that guy have exactly the right pokemon to beat me? How do I get a strong team like him?”

“Well they capture all sorts of types of pokemon, caring only about competitive optimization. But trust me, it's much easier to stick to a type or two. Mixing and matching them makes them so much harder to care for” she told him the common wisdom that most from her world stuck too, and interjected before he could dismiss it “but you can find a middle ground. Like me! You saw how even though all of mine are water types I still had an answer to electric and grass types that normally beat them right? You can do the same! Catch some fairy or ghost pokemon with other types to round out your team”

Jr still did not look convinced or any less dejected so she decided that she should do something practical about the situation.

“So I don't think there’s any ghost types around here, but I think I do know where we can find a fairy type. Or well, one that’s going to become a fairy type anyway” she said, before standing, taking his hand and tugging for him to follow with her “Come on, I think I saw one nearby”

Following her lead, the jr ended up poking his heads up over a sandbank alongside Lana a few minutes later, and catching sight of her intended target.

“I don’t know if it’s your style but-” she started to say only to be proven wrong when Jr’s eyes lit up and he declared ”It’s…. perfect!” at the sight of a seal pokemon presently juggling one of the poor otter pokemon on its clown nose.

And that's the story of how Jr ended up making a new friend.

And also caught a Popplio round about the same time.


The god was taken a touch by surprise by the creation of the Hydra to act as an enforcer of the node’s neutrality, but it did somewhat work in lieu of actually getting formal agreement from most of those assembled. He stared up at the looming thing. A mighty guardian indeed, and also an impressive practical display of the power they wielded. It was one thing to know you had power, it was quite another when the result of said power was gazing down at you with far too many hungry serpent eyes.

”My thanks for this, Benea. Quite the masterful piece of work” he told the creator of many headed guardian’s creator ”breaking an agreement needs to come with an understood consequence, I think, and this one will do just fine”

It certainly had done the job of getting Eleanna to back off from the node, though there was the unfortunate side effect of it terrifying the living daylights out of some of the humans. Then again, there was already a giant snake among them so he suspected that it would not be quite as bad a panic as the goddess he would eventually learn was called Dzallitsunya thought it was.

Speaking of her, she was only one of a number of gods who decided to stray off into the wilds now that talks were coming to an end. He was a touch perturbed by the fact that few had actually actively signaled agreement with his plan, indeed only Monica actually raised a hand in agreement, but it was probably better they be off rather than bickering endlessly here. That, he thought, could only escalate to one unfortunate conclusion.

Benea at least seemed interested in continuing a more general conversation by inviting some of them to come along with her, though unfortunately most turned her down, which was something of shame, he thought. Here lay an opportunity to learn of the character of the others, and witness, and possibly steer, their burgeoning ideals, something which he considered more valuable than rushing off to stake an early claim on the board.

”I would be interested in traveling with you, for a while at least,” he replied to Benea’s offer, before nodding to the very similar goddess whose hand she was holding ”and you as well, Monica, should you find no issue with my own presence?”

”But first, now that we have all taken his wisdom, it does seem crude to simply leave our creator’s form laying in the grass like this in such a diminished state, don’t you think?” he said. He also thought might also do well to contain the things Vatarr had placed inside the skull to rot the divine flesh. Who knew what those would get up too once they were done.

What to specifically do with the body instead of leaving it laying here had the god stroking his goatee as he thought for a moment, before he came to a decision that served a secondary purpose of checking any deception on Benea’s part, if there had been any, or simply strengthening her deed if she had been true.

”Let us seal away this broken form” he said, gesturing out a hand and causing stone slabs to form the simple granite tomb around the creator, before adding ”and leave behind a clear memory in its place”

That clear memory solidified atop the tomb in the form of a life sized statue of the god, formed in the likeness of what Xavior assumed would be his uninjured state. The statue of the armored god leaned against the node just as he had in his last moments, but instead of pained and defeated Xavior gave him the look of resting, hands clasped together in his lap and eyes shut. Eyes shut, and thus concealing the fully functioning golden orbs he had left beneath stone eyelids, for should the slumbering memorial sense intent to claim the node from any approaching it, it would awaken and enforce its neutrality.

”May you rest until we all stand before you once more, and a new world is set to be born” he announced, lacing the law of his offered pact into the guardian, adding in at the last moment a grim clause that those present would not necessarily need to be alive. He hoped it would not come to that, but it would be foolish to simply assume peace would hold between them all.

Once the stonework was set and the rules were in place, Xavior renounced any form of ownership of the monument and left it in the hands of the dead creator. Not even he would be immune to the ire of the guardian, should he break his word.

”There, with that, I think my business here is done” he said, dusting off his hands despite having not set the stonework with them, and then turning back to Benea and asking with a genteel smile ”So, to where was it you were you thinking of setting out for?”





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Midna: level 7 EXP: ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// (55/70)
Location: Sandswept Sky - Train


”Next time do something rather than freeze up and I won’t need to be your knight in shiny armor next time. It just isn't my style” she told Tora even as she patted him on the shoulder reassuringly before adjusting her tact ”... I mean, your welcome” before turning her attention to the pole of blinky lights and warning text on the screens Tora had been monitoring.

”Well that doesn’t look good. Going to go make sure it doesn't get worse. Stay safe Tora, and try not to need saving again!” Midna told him as she excused herself and then slipped around Poppie as the bot returned to her maker's side with a ”Hi. Thanks for finding out those things exploded. Bye” and returning to the fray just in time to help the last bit of cleanup by copying Raz’s clever idea of returning the bombs to sender.

That little plan found her yelling ”I think you dropped this!” while using her shadow hand to hurl one of the bombs in an overhead swing that would give a baseball pitcher a run for their money. It soared forth, slapped into the weak spot and detonated in a fiery explosion.

A few moments later the spot finally cracked under pressure, bursting out and showering the sand with gore ”ew, that’s disgusting” and leaving it open for the cannon to fire in its second shot, this one striking the softened up spot with unfathomable fury and tearing open a titanic hole in the side of the ugly bug.

”How do you like that, you oversized maggot?” Midna taunted it, her words being drowned out by the ongoddessly loud scream the Akrid was letting out in response to its wound. Unfortunately Galeem’s influence ensured that this (seemingly) grievous injury wasn’t going to get the beast to back down.

In-fact it seemed to only make it angrier and more aggressive if anything, the semi standoff they had had racing side by side ending as it swerved towards them. Seeing this incoming the princess wrapped her limbs tight around her wolfos and then grabbed a banister with her shadow hand but that turned out to be unnecessary as the impact was more a push than a slam. Not that the gradual train tipping it was enacting wasn't bad in its own way. You didn't have to be a genius or have knowledge of trains to know that having it fall over while moving at the kind of speed they were was not going to end well for them.

They couldn't just shoot it either, because while there was still a shell in the feeder slot, the process of loading it and charging it up had not been started. Only Tora’s plan of hitting its spine looked like it was going to get them a chance.

”Get that shot loaded!” she shouted at the rest of the gun crew while she pulled out the hulking Clubba Club from the twilight realm. Holding it in all three of her hands she began to charge it with lightning while floating slowly upwards off of her mount’s back.

”I’ll help encourage it off of us!” she announced, at which point she summoned a supersized vibrava from a portal. The twilight beast grabbed her in its legs and buzzed upwards at an intense speed towards the gap in the massive monster’s armor, bringing her and her oversized weapon with it. Then they flashed past the opening, rising higher and higher above it, the vibrava letting out a torrent of purple flaming dragon breath to scorch the exposed interior as it rose. Finally the vibrava’s time ran out and it returned to the twilight realm, leaving the princess to plunge down towards the exposed spine with her wreckingball of a weapon.

”Look out below” she yelled as the wind rushed past her, before swinging the oversized weapon with both mortal and magical limbs and delivering a bone shaking hammer-blow to the spine. Then a heartbeat later it was followed by a massive bolt of teal lightning hammer down in front of the impact site, zapping the spine nice and good.

She sent the mace back to the twilight realm rather than trying to swing again while she shook her arms, having jarred them pretty badly in the process of her strike from the drop. Rather than stay put she gave the spine a wound up shadow hand punch, letting the recoil affect her just enough to launch herself clear of the gaping hole.

”I’ve got to go, but here, have this!”

As a parting gift, she launched her super sized shadow mimic at it from another portal, the massive trapped chest flying at the spine jaws open. The chest’s rim slammed into its target and then its lid snapped shut around it, the mimic delivering an all mighty bite to the beast before it vanished back home quickly as it had arrived.

”Who’s next to take a crack at breaking its back?!” the princess asked loudly as she dropped down to land atop her steed’s back once more, the whole combo having taken only about a handful seconds all in all.


He awoke for the first time, sitting cross legged and adorned with naught but a loincloth, and beheld his dying creator. Listened to his final words, and understood in part the tragedy of war and servitude that had led to his end.

The red skinned god rose slowly onto his bare feet and softly approached the dead creator to receive his wisdom before then moving to the other object of interest in the area. The map. Resting a hand on its side he instinctively moved the other to his chin and found he had a goatee. A grin flashed across his lips before he began to stroke it contemplatively as some of the others spoke to repeat that mistake, to raise one above them all based on nothing but words.

The only deed done was by Eleanna, who brazenly walked up and started the very slow process of capturing the claimed node. Xavior did not intervene with that, not yet. There was plenty of time till the deed was done after all.

Opposed to her foolish recklessness was the paranoid wisdom of the serpent who assumed the entire enterprise to be a trap, though of an entirely different sort that had led the others along the path of peace.

”A fair point, if rudely put” he said to the snake, before introducing himself and saying his (lengthy) piece ”My name is Xavior, and I believe that to rush into things when there is no need to do so would be foolish. Yes, there is an unspecified ending approaching, but it will take time to stabilize the world regardless, which gives us time to think. To learn to know ourselves and of the nature of this world and ’game’ we have been thrust into. Or are we so arrogant as to think we can decide the fate of reality while having seen only a fraction of it,” he gestured a hand down to the map, and then out towards the wilds around them, most specifically at the closest group of humans who were wearily spectating this discussion from afar ”and before having even met its people?”

”I propose, rather than attempting to elect a singular claimant right this moment, we instead simply swear a pact of peace, and then strike out and claim this reality. Improve it. Make it a place worth living until the end comes to pass. And in doing so, prove through what you make that your vision for the next world has worth, and through your deeds that your word can be trusted” they were strangers after all, who could say if their words were true or canny manipulations? Time, he hoped, would expose the liars as what they were, and let the reliable shine through the mire of doubt.

”Then once the world is stabilized, we return here, and then elect an architect of the new world if no way of escaping the confines of the game has been discovered” he said, leaving the map behind as he spoke while strolling casually towards the node. Once there he gave it a casual flick to reset Eleanna’s capture progress as the creator’s wisdom had informed him it would.

He made no attempt to stake his own claim beyond that momentary disruption however and instead simply walking away with a confident stride while saying ”and until that time this node should remain in the hands of our creator, declared neutral ground, and ruin betide any who brake the sanctity of his claim without the consent of the rest”

His pact proposed, he once again stood behind the map and asked the others ”Your thoughts? Oh and if you could make a show of hands if you agree with that last point, I think that might allow us to resolve Eleanna’s overstep in a coordinated fashion”





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